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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

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Posted: 14 years ago

#621

Hi,

Loved the update!!!!!!!!!!
great job!!!!!!

but handling Maan is more difficult.........

somehow Geet managed..........

i am looking forward to see Maan full fit.............

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 14 years ago

#622

despair 34

After mid night.
Maan just can not imagine himself how he is behaving with Geet."i am sorry my sleeping beauty "he removed curls from her face. he could not sleep a single min. when ever he try to close his eyes Geet 's hiccup use to wake him. he just pretend to be asleep . when he felt Geet was asleep he drag himself to other side of bed . kissed her forehead placed on bed . " i took promise from you not to cry & i myself made you cry"he try to pull her up but his body could not let him . he felt more irritated "see how much your Maan is helpless .even i can't make you lay properly on bed. he hold her hand in his . "i love you to the core " he placed her hand under his head stared at her in moon light. he didnot remember when he went to sleep.
Geet was so exhausted she just felt asleep like a log .
next morning
Geet woke up with the knock at door .he saw Maan sleeping diagonally on bed her hand is in his hand he is holding it tightly. "when he came her ?" she try to free her hand from his grip
Maan: kya huwa
Geet: please will you leave my hand
Maan: why?
Geet: someone is knocking at door.
Maan: tell him i am sleeping.. he pull her arm more close
Geet: Maan if i will say that they will say you come.
Maan: say Maan is holding my hand. he slept
Geet: i really can't understand you.
Maan: was asleep .
Geet: smiled .she didn't reply .
Maan: open his eyes "why you are staring at me ?"
Geet: try to look away.
Maan: are you looking at you rude husband?
Geet: i didnot said any thing
Maan : i am sorry for my last night act
Geet: if you love someone you can forgive them for all of their crazy & idiotic things they do run her finger in his hairs "because love is leap of faith & sometime you just have to jump don't you.
Maan: but
Geet: looked at him "why you didnot wake me?"
Maan: i thought you will be angry .
Geet: oh look at time uff we had to go to hospital first for your therapy then to meeting we are late Maan..she jump on her feet
Maan smiled at her panicky face.
Geet: why are you smiling?
Maan: because my better half is looking dam cute.
Geet: look at me looking like a messy ..
Maan: with a jerk pull her she just lost her balance & fall directly on him .
Geet: Maan
Maan: placed his finger on her lips ." just look at your self from my eyes you are looking like a blossom flower with so many shades . because of sleeping on edge of bed there was a red mark on her cheek.
Geet: Maan we are late .
Maan: let it be he kissed her cheek .
Geet: Maan she was scared if he again gets angry.
Maan: looked in her questioning eyes. "promise i will not shout at you " he kissed her without giving her any signal .
Geet: was not at all expecting she was just lost in his passionated kiss. she just closed her eyes and felt him.
Maan: whisper "want more "
Geet: was just too lost she just shake her head in yes
Maan: very softly again kissed her.
Geet: came back to her senses . Hug him .
Maan: are not you getting late now.
Geet: smiled yes we are.
Maan: smiled .
Geet helped him to freshen up she felt great change Maan was trying to do things him self .
Maan: Geet can you help me in standing
Geet: Maan Dr advise not to put weight on your feet
Maan: but Geet
Geet: for few days
Maan: made a sad face
Geet: i am there na
Maan yes you are he said bit loud .
Geet: phir ghusa
Maan: looked at her "ok sorry "
Geet: push his wheelchair out.
Dadi: good morning beta.
both together Good morning.
Meera: sorry to knock at your door .
Geet: no problem
Meera: actually there was a call from hospital
Geet: why?
Meera: for Maan's therapy they asked to come at 10
Geet: Maan please have breakfast
Maan: i will just have a glass of juice
Geet: if you will not eat how you will take medicine .
Maan: Geet please don't force me
Geet: didnot asked again. she walk to Meera as she asked her to come to her room."jee didi"
Meera: do you want me to come with you ?
Geet: i don't know . didi he gets angry on small things .i felt that he does not like anyone around him .
Meera: i felt same if someone else push his chair he gets angry.
Geet: yes he is avoiding people.
Meera: how you will take him to hospital then?
Geet: thinking.
Meera: their many people know him.
Geet: wait she called Adi & asked to book the floor .
Meera: smiled for how long you will avoid him from people ?
Geet as long it is possible.
Meera : romeo is waiting for you both out side
Geet: why he?
Meera: Dadi asked him to stay here till Maan is fine.
Geet: uff didi how he will take him ... she was about to walk out.
Meera: wait hold her hand
Geet: what?
Meera: what is on your cheek? wink
Geet: didi you are ... it is my bangle mark
Meera: i thought .....
Geet: uff didi ..she walk out
Maan Looked at them coming he looked at Geet face she was blushing .
Geet: chala Maan
Maan: chala..hmmm
Geet: i mean. she push his chair out.
Maan: who is he? he looked at Romeo
Geet: he is Romeo he is the one who told Jay bhai about Brij .
Maan: oh i see but what he is doing here?
Geet: dadi asked him to stay her till you are fine:
Romeo : hi sir
Maan: hi
Romeo : helped him to sit in car
Maan: at first didnot liked but as he saw Geet was not able .he asked Romeo
Geet: smiled at Meera.
Romeo was a talkative guy he sit next to driver. "sir i really admire you"
Maan: why what i did?
Romeo: they why you married Geet di
Maan: acha
Romeo: sir
Maan: yes
Romeo: i hope you don't mind me staying with you.
Maan: no .he was watching Geet again & again sms someone
Geet: looked at him
Maan: what happen?
Geet: Adi telling about meeting.
Maan: ok
they reached hospital
Romeo help Maan. he push his chair in
Maan: is today a holiday
Geet: why?
Maan: this hospital is always crowed with people.
Geet: how i know: they reached in
DR: hi MR & MRS Maan i was waiting for you .
Geet: noticed his face color change.
Maan: dr tell me when i will be able to walk
Dr; MR Maan with proper therapy & medicine & your inner will power it will take a month.
Maan: hmmm is it a holiday Dr
Dr: no why? while helping him to move his body limb
Maan: was there is no one in passage
Dr: smiled your wife booked the floor .
Maan: looked out he saw Geet talking on cell with someone but looking inside the glass mirror.with her eyes she asked what?
Maan: said nothing for how long you will hide me from world some day i have to face it. thinks.

to be cont as it is Geet time... see you all with other part . do tell me whether you are liking it or not. sorry for mistakes i loved everyone comments.

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#623

Sorry......,Some prob with like button,so couldn't hit it.

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maaneetkimeet

@maaneetkimeet

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#624

lovley update dear make maan walk fast it's to sad to c him like that plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz in which part we will c him walking plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do fast dear

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deejagi

@deejagi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#625

liked it Naddy. please continue.

jaya

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#626

loved it n i think maan is over reacting he needs to calm down a bit

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#627

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet
loved it n i think maan is over reacting he needs to calm down a bit

before you all started beating me i better bring back Maan screw which he had lost

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#628

lovely update .yes ,women can only erase or can take out the pain of man so is geet doing .fabulous naaddiya ,you r doing a great job potraying the stronger side of of woman through geet .