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Posted: 14 years ago

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nice update.. luved maan's story... continue soon
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did anyone noticed i became IF-Rockerz😉

Before dawn Geet wake up ..she turn on light the other side of the bed was empty....she quickly got up walk out of room .she search for Maan he was no where..... she walk back to her room wrap a shawal around her self sat on the sofa next to the window .... recollected what all happen few hours back.
Maan: Geet try to understand me anyone can be sick ...he try to pull her
Geet: Maan i am very sleepy
Maan: but i am not tickle her .... "do you remember last night we made few promises "
Geet: Maan i made promise as i thought i was health , why you want to love a sick ...
Maan: turn her towards him...placed his hand on her lips.."bus chup. why don't you enjoy these moment, kismat walo ko milta ha yeh pal"
Geet: looked at him blink her eyes as his eyes has many question. dreams
Geet: removed his hand "kya masla ha aap ko jab se meri zindagi mein aai ha sub kuch ulta ho gaya ha..."
Maan: whats wrong with you?what i have done now
Geet: chor kyun nai data aap mujhe ke shayad ......
Maan: raised his hand i will slap you if you say it again, pull her more close .."what do you think is this easy for me to take all this? " he looked in her eyes
Geet: you know because of me Meera didi's married life is in trouble..
Maan: how because of you?
Geet: when i was changing didi called NT to ask her to convince her mom to come back she took the cell from her and scold her that she always wanted her daughter to marry you, but their dream was shattered as i got married to you .... an orphan & sick girl married to you not to her daughter.
Maan: thinking so
Geet: so kya she said Meera didi that she can stay here as long as she want to as she does not want her any more ..... she started crying..
Maan: oh dont you worry she is a dramabaz ...I will talk to Dev Bhai...
Geet: why i should not worry ? because of me she is suffering her married life is messed up ...if i have not entered your life it would be different... she sat & started crying.
Maan: iss mein rona kai kya baat ha ...he hug her
Geet: i don't know what to do?
Maan: first your relax
Geet: push him away... i asked you not to touch me ..
Maan: Geet i will talk to Dev bhai he will fix this matter.. cup her face
Geet: if he could not then .... all just because of me ... i am a loser a sick girl.... why don't you marry nt if i die..
Maan: turn on light .."stop it will you ... you tell me where i am standing you are just blaming your self why don't you think of me if any thing going to happen to you how i will live ....yesterday you were not trace able i was not able to breath as if some had taken my life from me ..... he paused ... i am a loser not you are i lost my parents. i build wall around me so no one could come in ...but you ... now daily you try to leave me ... i can't be happy for a single day ......every time my happiness vanish ,yesterday i felt my life is completed .... looked at her ....
Geet : was giving a blank look.
Maan: what so ever happen i will not leave you not at any cost or not let any one take your place.... you let me own you once i can stay for the rest of my life with that pleasant thought....as someone from heart loved me once.....
Geet: choked ... i didn't said i don't love you
Maan: hmmm
Geet: i just want you should be with a healthy ...
Maan: if you love me then don't say a word as it hurt me inside my heart.... let stay each & every min together without thinking what will happen next....
Geet: looked at him
Maan : Zindagi ka aagla pal kai kis ko khabar ..jo ha unn ko tou jee la baghar kaise Daar ka .
Geet: Maan
Maan: stop her saying a word as he placed his lips on hers. slow he run his fingers in her hairs whisper "jeeo jab tak saan ha ..." kissed her forehead ...
Geet couldn't stop him as his love & emotions was very strong in front of her's...
Maan: i am sure you aren't sick .. he placed his hand on his chest ....
Geet: looked at him
Maan: you can't feel.... he brush his nose next to hers..
Geet: but
Maan: just leave a side everything & enjoy what we have... he kissed her again.
Geet: couldn't help it she let him own her once again...
Maan hug her as tight as he could .... she felt so save that she slept in few mins...smiled "pagal ha meri jaan" he carefully made her sleep....
At Present
Geet: still siting next to the window shyly smiling .... it was about 7 no sign of Maan. " i better go & ask someone" she walk to garden...
watchman:beta you want some thing
Geet: no i am looking for Maan
watchman : he has gone to mandar
Geet: where is that?
watchman : it is up that hill...
Geet : but how he will reach there? she looked at top of the hill
watchman: maan baba has a horse he always go on it...
Geet: walked in she tried his number but it was continually saying out of reach..... she changed ....apply sindoor wore bangles..... today i wanted to see you first in morning but you left me without telling me ....she heard some noise ... "Maan agai " she ran out ...
JAY: hi bhabi
Geet: you at this hour
PARI: yes we she hug her baat hee kuch aise ha
Geet; i missed you yesterday
PARI: actually JAY was very busy.
JAY: where is Maan? i want to tell him the great news.
Geet baat kya ha ...woh mandar gai ha
JAY: oh ....
Geet: why dont you tell me ?
JAY: bhabi news is you are not sick it was brij's who gave dr money to make a fake report....paused
Geet:Maan was right he was right...she jumped....
Dadi: what happen beta ?
Geet: dadi i am not sick she hug her ...Maan was right he said un ka dil nahi maanta ...
Dadi: hug her back..."where is he ?"
Geet: he has gone to Mandar
Dadi: when ? shocked
Geet: before dawn
Dadi: pagal ha woh ...it rain it must be slippery ....
Geet: dadi lets go and find him....
JAY: bhabi why you are so worried he is not a kid
Dadi: he is worst than a kid......JAY you go on jeep....
Geet: i will too come with you ..
Dadi: beta its a bad idea...
watch man ran in ...dadi dadi ..maan baba
Dadi: what happen
watch man a villager told Maan baba fall from horse and he is injured ........
Geet just sank in sofa...
to be cont ..sorry to stop here ........thx for comments
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Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg that was indeed a fab part. God maan fell frm horse. Hope he is f9
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. hope maan's fine.. luved maneet convo.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nadz how cud u leave in such a cliff hanging part... OH my Maan had a fall from horse...and yepiee Geet is not ill... i knew it wud be some one's trick...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update..............continue soon.......please dont let maan get anything....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update Naddiya.....OMG hope maan isn't badly injured.....plz update the next part asap.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome as usual.........hope maan is safe
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovedddd the update as feet is not sick

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