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Posted: 14 years ago
wow !! promo sound interesting !! waiting for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago

interesting.............

now give us the update

bohot intezaar hogaya!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved d promo...
waiting for update...
update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
promo is very exciting...pls update soon...!!!
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sorry readers for making you wait for so many days. now i will try my level best to update it religiously... few of you are not happy from me as i suddenly finished SS Alone in Paradise ... dear there was nothing left i guess ... i thought to end when it was at its peak .....



Tanu: Mamoo why you are so said ?

Ved: yes tell me.. cup his face..

Maan: yar dekho your mom took your didi in & asked me not to follow them...

Tanu: we are here we will help you...

Maan: are you sure? try to smile... his mind was stuck how Geet will take her illness.

Tanu: yes...

Maan: ok help my sweet princess ....

Tanu you talk to your dadi we will see. they walk in

Maan:dadi why you arrange this ..

Dadi: beta i & meera had few dreams that why...

Maan:dadi...

Dadi: beta is Geet really sick?

Maan: dadi i ask Jay to confirm it ......

Dadi: when you came to know about this ..?

Maan day before yesterday.....

Dadi: why you didn't told me?

Maan: dadi it is not yet confirm ..

Dadi: then why you are having long face ,just cheer up...

Maan: hug dadi...

Dadi: go & get ready.... all your friends & guest will be come .

Maan: ok dadi he walked in.

Meera: hello where are you going....

Maan: to change

Meera: go to other room yahan jana maana ha.

Maan: didi...

Meera: bus order is order she turn him & show him the way to other side of room...

Tanu wait ..hold his hand

Maan: what happen?

Tanu : come here .... she pull him on other side ...

Ved: mama mama

Meera: yes beta ..

Ved: my stomach ache ....ouch he lay on sofa ....

Meera: who was guarding the door quickly left the handle & ran to Ved.

Tanu: your time start now Mamoo go in.... she asked him to go to room...


Maan: smiled you naughty pie walked in

Geet: didi please close the doori...... i am not able to close it

Maan: walk on his toes & very care fully tied it

Geet: suddenly turn..."YOU" turn back

Maan: yes me placed his arm around her waist.

Geet: why you are here? try to remove his hand

Maan to help you

Geet: but i don't need your help

Maan:smiled you just taken my help

Geet: please i am not in any kind of joke mood

Maan: picked up the necklace & placed it around Geet neck.


Geet: please you go from here.

Maan: wait ...he made her sit on stool kneel down

Geet :what are you doing?

Maan: nothing.. placed bangles in her arm..

Geet: i think you have helped me......

Maan: slightly picked up her chin..."why you are so angry from me?"

Geet: "i think if we better talk on this later....

Maan: hmmm

Meera: open door..."Maan you are here..."

Tanu & Ved: had a laughter ...

Meera: i will beat all three of you..

Ved: why us Didi too ?

Meera: why didi?

Tanu: actually didi asked she want to meet Mamoo.

Geet: looked at them in surprise...."when i said ?"

Ved: you said ....when i was changing clothes ?

Geet: woh...paused

Ved: you didn't ask what Mamoo is doing?

Geet: i asked like that..

Ved: i thought you want to meet Mamoo. oh i acted just like that.that i am having stomach ache...

Maan: smiled

Meera; Maan you are spoiling my kids...

Maan: what i did....smiled ...

Meera: you all out or i will ....

Maan: ok ok ...they quickly walked out.

Meera: pagal ha yeh ...

Geet: smiled

Meera: yes you too smile........

Geet: woh tou mein..

Meera: acha acha theek ha jaildi se ready hojao ...


Dadi& bejee entered ...

Dadi: Meera did you asked Dev to come

Meera: dadi he will not be able to come he told me ..

Dadi: yeh Dev's mom she also left

Meera: why you are so worried ?

Dadi: people will ask

Meera: since when you are so worried about people?

Dadi: beta

Meera: dadi bus kara please don't take their side .....

Dadi: ok beta is Geet ready

Meera: yes her husband made her ready...

Dadi: kya

Meera: Maan& kids made me fool & ..she fixed her saree....

Geet: didi i apologize from his side...

Meera: oh now my bhabi will take his side too

Geet: didi..paused

Meera: smiled just teasing you..

Dadi: ok beta after some time bring Geet out ... Guest are here.....

Meera: sure dadi...


Maan knocked at door...

Meera: yes come in

Maan: if you both ladies allow can i came in

Meera: Maan don't do acting

Maan: didi see my shirt button is broken

Meera: looked at his shirt ... "you are still a small kid"

Maan: didi please don't scold

Meera: Maan i have to fix my necklace ..you take dadi's help

Maan: dadi said take your's ..where to go? made a sad face

Meera: Geet please fix his button

Geet: me

Meera: who is Geet here....

Maan: quickly forward thread & needle

Geet: took it from him ....started sewing....."stop staring at me i am nervous ...."

Maan: ...he closed his eyes ...

Geet: looked at his face

Meera: Geet

Geet: jee

Meera: stop staring ...

Geet: shyly smiled ....quickly sew it


Beejee : beta come quickly .....

Meera: Maan you & Geet come together i will go & receive guest

Maan: sure

Geet: but..

Meera: angrily stared at her..... she left the room

Maan: offer his hand..

Geet :Quietly hold it ...

They both walk to the Garden....

Maan introducer Geet to all the guest ... they walk to each table ....

Dadi: attention everyone please ....i invited you all here to be part of my beloved grand so wedding.... as there were many rumors i want to clear it all so that next time you dont pay attention on it ... Maan was in love with my bahu he didnot had any choice to stop people pointed at them in such critical condition he married her .....now i will ask Maan & Geet to tell us about their love story ..winked at them....

both felt embarrassed...

Maan:dadi yeh kya ha

Dadi: don't be shy ..tell everyone...

Maan: looked at Geet ..... he cleared his throat " shall I !"

Geet: looked at him

Maan: Geet father was ill he wanted to go for his treatment , he asked Dadima to keep Geet with her till he is fine.... he looked at Geet .... Dadi ma asked me to go and bring her ..... he smiled the best part was dadi thought Geet is uncles 13 years old daughter.... i really didnot had any problem to bring a kid with me ..i drive to Geet's place ... it was a very stormy night .... when i reached there uncle was out of town , only Beejee was there , she asked me to take Geet with me to Delhi. as their land lord was blackmailing them ... Geet live was on risk ...he smiled i without thinking asked Beejee to tell Geet to sit in my car..... That day my wife was suffering from high fever ... Beejee covered Geet in blanket made her lay in back of my seat...

An old lady: beta make it fast ...

Maan: yes yes.... i drove out of city .... when i was on high way i heard ..Geet asking for water ..... i had to stop care ....and make her drink water...... when i removed her blanket i was shocked to see a young girl in my car...... running with high few..... she was murmuring "dont leave me ..." i dont know what happen to me i fall in love with her ... or i made promise to my self i will never leave her ....... That is my love story

a girl : love at first sight

Maan: yes you can say that.....since then i am with her in all up and down of life.

Dadi: you will be till the end beta ...kissed his forehead...

old lady :beta when you fall in love with Maan

Geet: looked at her

Maan: she is still falling in love ....

everyone had a laughter.....

Meera: pulled Maan ears...


guest started leaving .....

Dadi: beta you take Geet in

Meera: sure ....she took Geet in farm house room....

Geet: didi can i change ?

Meera: why Geet?

Geet: i am tired

Meera: let Maan come then you change...

Geet; ok she sit on bed...

after 20 mins Maan enter room ... he smiled at her

Maan: why you are siting at sofa ? he walked to her

Geet: didnot reply

Maan: i know this room is not decorated but ...gave a naughty smiled.. he sit next to Geet hold her hand "why you are so quite "

Geet: i have to change.

Maan: sure you can....

Geet; removed his hand and was about to walk to wash room

Maan: hold her hand "can i help you?"

Geet: no i dont need ...

Maan : ok ..he switched on tv

Geet: changed and walked out ..she grab pillow ....

Maan: who was sitting on bed grab her hand...

Geet: please chora i am sleepy

Maan: bed is here why you were are you going? he pull her she lost her balance and fall flat on bed..

Geet: please

Maan: placed his finger on her lips "chup.."

Geet: Wait

Maan:looked at her stopped
Geet:before coming near to me you should give me a promise..
Maan: smiled just a promise..came closer to her
Geet: really i am serious ..try to stop him with her hand
Maan:"what you want?"
Geet: Till i am fine you will stay away from me no relations ....
Maan: looked at her with an open mouth.
Geet: for world i am your wife bit no relations
Maan: but yesterday we made a relation i guess.
Geet; what all happen yesterday think it was a dream .....if you agree with me then i will stay with you
Maan: but
Geet: i am sleepy she turn on other side
Maan: looked at roof of the room as he did not get what to do ...

to be cont ..dear readers i will try to update as soon as possible ,
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Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i didnot pm you yet but you read 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Veryyyyy nice part!!!!
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part but naddiya make geets health good yaar no tumr plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally a great update 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
geeet s in pain😭😭😭😭

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