InTeJaR... (AR SS) part-5,6: page-27,28

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

wow, atlast u updated

amazing update

thanx for pm

continue soon

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

der lagi aane mein tum ko ,shukar hai phir bhi aaye toh
aas ne dil ka saath na chhoda ,waise hum gabraye toh.😃
Ishu after ages finally you pitied on your loyal readers.😊
feeling bad for Ridzi . I swear for first time i am feeling hatred for him . He was not agree fine but there is a word 'HUMANITY'
god sake she has come far along you,for you . She need a better treatment than this rude ,stubborn,ruthless behavior . God damn it she is your legally wedded wife nd more over it was you who had taken oaths.
I swear i wanna punch him right on his nose nd tell him 'try to be a man'😡
Blo*** Moron ,idiot ,jerk ..😡..He'd repent on his deeds.🤢

thanks for pm.
love n luck
ritu

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simran gupta

@AR_FAN

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

hey loved both the part
especially the second one
it show more emotions

really want to slap Armaan right now

loved the precap

waiting eagerly for the next part(very soon this time ...plz)

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sania

@saniashzadi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

hey ankita...

brilliant parts ... not expecting that armaab behave like this...anxiously waiting for next part to know what happen with ridhhima in the mall

update next parts soon

love

sania

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arooshi

@arooshee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Hey

It was very nice part

But feeling so sorry for riddhima

She is facing so much yar

Armaan is hurting her so much

But what is the reason behind his behave

Hope he will become gud with her

Well u potrayed riddhima's emotions so well

So please do continue sooon

Waiting to read further

please pm me dear

Edited by arooshee - 14 years ago

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illa

@illa8

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

when will he b nice???????????? =)

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Simran

@kajenarshianya

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

That was a really nice story. I just read it. I really like the plot.

please continue soon and if possible, please add me to the PM list.

THANKS!

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munyr123

@munyr123

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

I have read Part 5 of Intejar. It was so sad and full of emotions. I felt sad for the terrible condition of Ridz and the way Arman is treating her especially the dinner scene and the ladu scene. Ridz is very right in her complain to her mother for all that happened with her.
All scenes have beautifully portrayed the emotions and feelings. I loved reading it. Thanks a lot for such a wonderful story...:)

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munyr123

@munyr123

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

I have read part 6 too and enjoyed it a lottt aur khaas kar precap parh kar toh I am very very eager to read part 7...
Ankita, Part 7 k liye zyada intejar mat karwana ..You are really excellent writer :D