InTeJaR... (AR SS) part-5,6: page-27,28

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~*~*~*~*~*~* InTeJaR ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


Ek chotte se bache ke muh se maa shabd sun ne ka intejar,

Papa ko uss bache ka unki ungli pakadkar chalne ka intejar,

Bache ko khud ke bade hone ka intejar,

Yowan(teenage) mai pahunchkar kabhi pyar ke ehsaas (feeling) ko mehsus karne ka intejar, to kabhi class mai top karne ka intejar,

Bade(adult) hokar aatm-nirbhar(selfdependent) ban ne ka intejar,

Aatm-nirbhar bankar ek ache jeewan saathi paane ka intejar,

Jeewan-saathi ke saath teesre ko apni duniya mai laakar apni family ko complete karne ka intejar,

9 mahino ka Apni nanhi si jaan ko baahon mai uthane ka intejar,

Kissi ke challe jaane par uske laut aane ka intejar to kabhi kissi ke chode jaane par phir se uske apnane ka intejar,

Kabhi kadwi yaado ko bhulne ka intejar to kabhi meethi yaadon ko sanjo kar rakhne ka intejar,

Kabhi ruthne ka intejar to kabhi manane ka intejar,

Kabhi kissi ko maaf karne ka intejar to kabhi kissi se maafi lene ka intejar,

Kabhi daant ka intejar to kabhi pyar ka intejar,'

Intejar hi intejar iss jindagi ka naam, kaash kabhi hum iss intejar ko chodkar apne aaj mai jee paate, kaash jo hamare paas hai uss se hi khush ho paate, kaash ye Intejaar naam ka lamha hamari jindagi mai hi na hota, to aaj ka har lamha khushiyon se saja hota...


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I want to dedicate this story to Kshu aka kshanikaa, todays her b'dayand it's the perfect occasion to start this story, though I thought to start it in next month as its difficult to handle 2 stories simultaneously (hats off to all of them who handles 3-4 stories at one time, by god tussi great ho ji) but its kshu b'day today aur mujhe koi bhi gift nahi mil raha tha uske liye, to bas ye chottu sa gift dene ka socha aur bas ye batana tha " I'm really lucky to have a person like you in my life n I luv you shooo much (oe as a friend, sis, daadi ma n grand daughter waala ;) ), I wish you the life full of happiness n smiles from the bottom of my heart, you wanted me to write this story, so here I'm at your service mam, this story's for you n I wanna say that I admire you, you're very precious for me n chottu si request bhi hai "hamesha aise hi saath rehna mere, ur nannu loves you sooo much"


HaPpY b'DaY dear kshanikaa


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About story...

It's a story of a couple who married each other on their parents insistence, boy didn't wanna get married as his priority's his job and his dream of becoming a successful businessman and setting up a multi national company in india,girl whose aim's not fixed yet, she doesn't have her own choices, she follows everyone's advice and always neglects her own inner voice, it's a short story, will be updated once in a week..

Intejar :kabhi wife ka apne husband ke liye, to kabhi husband ka apni wife ke liye aur kabhi dono ka ek dusre ke liye...

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Character sketch:

Armaan malik: he's 25 years old, blue eyes, fair color and a tough body that can drool any girl over him, after his high school he goes in London for further studies, he's extra intelligent, bank of knowledge, from 8th class he started seeing dreams of setting his own multinational company that's why after 12th he goes in London, he did studies and part time job simultaneously and at present he's working in the 3rd largest multinational company of London, he's dependent on himself only, doesn't have much friends as in fulfilling his dreams he forgot that love and friendship relation too exist in this world, for him his family is the only relation, he can do anything for his family.. rest story'll tell you about his character..


Riddhima gupta: 22 years old, hazel green eyes, fragile body with perfect curves enough to raise the beat of every guy heart, she's sweet, innocent like a child at a time and in second moment she's understanding, thoughtful too, her main problem is that she's no aim in life in particular, she herself doesn't know what she wants, she lives her life according to her parents coz she hardly knows herself, she hardly has any choices, she's comfortable in every situation, she's kind of very chanchal mann means kind of confused that's why she lives according to her parents, she's just completed her graduation, further you'll get to know about her in story...


Ananya malik : armaan's mother, caring and broad minded, loves her children very much..


Billy malik: armaan's dad, tough from outside but loving from inside..


Anjali malik : armaan's sister who's very naughty but apple of everyone's eyes, very cute and loveable.


Shashank gupta : riddhima's father who loves his daughter like anything, wants to give every happiness to his child.


Padma gupta: riddhima's mother who too loves riddhima very much..


Muskaan, rahul, atul : riddhima's friends..


Rahul: riddhima's cousin

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Index-

Part-1 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/37100854

Part-2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/37321657

Part-3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/37321702

Part-4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/37321752

Part-5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46407232

Part-6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46407247

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Sorry couldn't complete first part today and I wanna post this thread today only so only character sketch for the time being, first part will be updated soon, will pm you if you want.


HaPpY b'DaY KSHU once again, hope that you passed a sweet smile after reading this.


Luv

Ankita.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Itni pyaari story line hai...waise mujhe to isse aage bhi thoda sa pta hai...aapne hi btaya tha baut pehle ☺️

Eagerlyyyyyyyyyyyyyy waitinggggggggggggggg for thisssssssssss


Thank youuuuuuuuu forposting it,,,,,,,,,,,,,, 😃😃😃😃

Jaldi kar de ab...😃
Edited by kshanikaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mehki Mehki Si Kuch Hawaon Ka
Bheegi Bheegi Si Kuch Ghataon Ka
Apne Baadal Ka..Apne Baarish Ka..Apne Saawan Ka Intejar
Apni Dhadkan Ka..Apni Saanson Ka..Apne Jeene Ka Intejar

Beautiful description of "the wait"..👏👏👏👏
very nice concept...
I love this mamtabhara inteJar🤣with J😆...

mujhe bhi hai ek intejar.. actually do hain.. nai teen hi hain.. chaddo.. bohat saare hain..🤣 par manjil EK hi hai🤗

continue soon.... eagerly waiting to learn more different nd more new frm You..

Love you ammi😛

Edited by Neha.K. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey anki good start do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey do PM me when u update teh part.....Congrats on ur second ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Ankita How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one i luv Ridhima character coz no aim like me do what family said plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm






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Nidha
Edited by nidha1983 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start
do pm me when you update it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...
nice concept
loved it...
update soon...
n plz add me to ur pm list...
AMOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey awsome concept
plz do pm me
dont make us intejar for it
love u
salina
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyy sounds interesting! pleaseee pm me!

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