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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okay Guyz! So I've Written The Chapter😳 I Know I'm A Slow, Crapppy Writer But What To Do😆 Silly Naa😳
Okay My Back Is Killingg!!! I Have This Weird Neck Pain Which I Get Everytime I'm Doing Hard Work🤣 No Joke It Seriously Happens To Mee😭
Okay Enough Of My Bak-Bak Here's The Next Chapter Enjoy And Do Comment If You Liked It Or Not😛

Chapter3
How on earth is she going to get away from this creep?!
Geet kept pushing him but it was of no use.
"Let me go !let me go !let me go!!!!!!!" screamed Geet as she kicked Maan while he dragged her.
Maan didn't listen, instead he held her even more tight and opened the front door of the car. He roughly pushed her in and closed the door. Geet tried opening the door while Maan was still outside but Damn the doors were locked automatically. She tried getting into the back seat but it was too late, Maan was already in the car and he dragged her back to the front seat.
"Arghhh!!!" Fumed Geet.
"I'm A Champion At Kung Fu!! Don't Mess With Me!" She Lied.
"Calm Down My Queen! I'm Miles Better Than You At Your Kung Fuuu!" He mocked.
Geet: Don't Mess with me!
Maan: Well I Have!
Geet was shocked at his words. How dare he call her weak!!
Maan started the car and was on full speen.
"What the hell?!! Stop the car!!!" screamed Geet as she punched him on his arms to take it off the steering wheel.
"Ahhh Keep punching Mrs Maan Singh Khurrana! You'll Get tired anyways!"Laughed Maan as he looked at the road and sometimes at Geet intensely.
So that's his name, thought Geet, but why the heck is he calling me Mrs Maan Singh Khurrana?!
"Oi! Why did you call me Mrs'"she didn't want to say it.
"Mrs'" he smirked
"You knowww!! Why?" she asked curiously
"Obviously! Cz We're Gonna Get Married!" he said delightfully.
Geet could not believe her ears.
"WHAAA?!!!!!!!!!!!" She said it out loud with her mouth and eyes wide open. Lucky he didn't kiss her again to shut her up 😆
"Yeahhh!!" He said it in the same tone but a bit softer.
Geet shook her head in disbelief and quickly slid back near the door in case he does something.
Maan smiled at her silly action and again looked in front.

Geet was shivering and tears were playing in her eyes. What was she to do now? She looked outside and it was dark, what are her parents gonna be thinking? Are they looking for me? Thought Geet while looking at the time in her watch.
"Haila! It's 6 O'clock!!" Shouted Geet, Trying To make him hear.
"I Know That" he said simply.
"Umm Sir, Don't You think I should be going home?" she said hesitantly.
"Who Sir? And who told you we're going home?" he asked her with a smirk on his face.
"You Sir! Mister Or Whatever! And DON'T YOU DARE TAKE ME ANYWHERE!!" She screamed.
Maan stayed calm but gave an intense glare at her which scared her inside and out.
She closed her eyes and muttered "I Hate it when you give me that look"
He laughed at her talks.
She shot her eyes open and said "Come on man! Why are you doing this?! Don't you know I love someone else!"
Maan Instantly stopped the car in the middle of the road which made Geet move towards the front side. She was about to hit the front side when he slid his left arm across her and prevented her from hitting. She looked at his arms. Ohhh Waxed Eh? She thought In her mind.
She looked at him angrily and pushed him back.
But he didn't move, instead he came even closer with an angry look.
"Who do you love?" he demanded, like he would eat her alive if she said the wrong thing.
She moved her head back until it hit the seat. She was trapped already and now trapped between him and the stupid seat. Oh I wish I could absorb myself into the seat! She thought.
He came even closer and was only few inches away from her face.
She tried to look on the other side but he twisted her face back to him forcefully.
Geet was scared to look at him, he was looking really angry!
"Um..W..Woo..Wohh'M..M..mai.." she couldn't say anything.
Maan: Wohh Main Wohh Main Kya? *Tighting His Jaw*
Geet: Umm..I'
Maan: Tell Me Now!!
He shouted at her, holding her both arms and shaking them as he spoke.
"I LOVE SALMAN KHAN! HAPPY?!" She shouted back but a bit louder and in an angry tone.
Maan: Salman Khan? The ACTOR Salman Khan?! *He Started Laughing as he slowly let her go*
Geet: Yeah Him! Any Problem?!
Maan: Ahahaaahh!! You're Crazyy'
Geet: Shut Up Maan Singh Thurrana! Huh You scared the wits out of me!
Maan: Yeah This was just a teaser, picture toh abhi baaki hai mere dost! *Proudly*
Geet: So you're stealing dialogues of MY Stars?! How lame Mr Thurrana..Tut Tut *She was petrified from inside but tried to act normal*
Maan: Huh? What?! You think I Will steal? Jee Nahi! They're My Creation!
Geet: Yeah As If! Now stop being stupid and let me go!
Maan: And if I don't? *Coming closer again*
Geet: Umm Whaattt D..Do You mean? *Going back again*
Maan: You know what I mean.
His face was mere inches away from hers, scaring her to death.
She couldn't take it anymore. She pushed him with full strength but instead fell back. He was still there like nothing had happened.
"How many times have I told you, it's not gonna work with you pushing me like a kid" He said slowly.
She opened her mouth wide and thought 'how dare he?! Now he thinks I kick like a kid?!'
"How dare you! Don't you dare say I kick like a kid!" she warned
"Ooopss I forgot, you're my wife" he winked and continued "and you're bound to kick like a kid! Ahahaha"
"What the'!" she didn't know what to say, all she could do was stare at him wide her button like eyes and open her mouth wide open.
She decided not to say anything to him and instead think of how she can get away from him.
Maan started the car and drove off to nowhere.



Mayank had gone through a strange feeling today.
What was it? He thought as he walked slowly which was a sudden change.
"Dude, What's Happening to me?" he felt weird and strange.
"Oh it's nothing dude, just leave it!" he talked to himself as he walked at his normal speed to get home.




Geet looked here and there and decided not to talk to him forever!
"Huh! Who the hell does he think he is?! Maan Singh Khurrana! More Like Maan Singh Thurana!" she thought in her mind.
"Khurrana!" he said, as if he read her silly thoughts.
Her mouth opened again, she quickly closed it. Couldn't trust him 😆
"Huh! Whatever! I Don't care! I'm Gnna call him that from now on!" she thought again.
Suddenly her eyes fell on her bag which was with her all the time.
"OMG!! How stupid can I get?!!" She thought excitedly.
Her dear bag had her Phone, Iphone, Mp3, Psp and Ipod all shoved together and used according to her mood.
She was so excited that she didn't realise Maan had guessed what she was going to do.
As she slowly made her way to her bag, making sure he doesn't see it. She was about to take phone or whatever came into her out when suddenly Maan caught her hand in just a second.
She looked up to see him smiling while looking at the road, with one hand on the wheel and the other on her delicate hand *Sob Sob*
"Tut Tut, Too bad I found out what you were about to do" he said mockingly.
Geet tried with her other hand, you know to take the phone out of her bag but instead He pulled the bag to his side making her fall onto him. Her body fell on his side but it didn't make him move an inch, he remained where he was. She went back but he pulled her shoulder bag again and made her fall onto him again. *Seems like he was enjoying it Huh! Poor Geet*
"Arghhh!!! Get Off Me Mr!" She shouted.
"Woahhh! You're The One who's on me!" he said teasingly.
"Shut Up! Well you're the one who pulled me! Now let me go!" She shouted again and went back to her seat. This time he didn't pull her back as he couldn't stop laughing.
"And stop laughing!" She shouted, adjusting her clothes etc.
He didn't say anything and just continued laughing.
"Ughhh!!" She said and put her head on the side.
Suddenly her phone rang.
"Dulha Mill Gaya Dulha Mill Gaya Mill Gayaaa!" Was the tune playing. I mean her ring tone 😆
"Awhhh Now you're phone even knows that you've found your hone wala dulha!" he laughed.
"Shut Up!! Give me the phone now!" she demanded, lifting her hands towards the bag.
"You think I'm that stupid not to know you're silly CUNNING Plans?!" he exaggerated the word Cunning.
She rolled her eyes and tried taking the phone off him, but failed again and again as he held it further away from her. The only way to get the phone was to literally jump on him and TRY To take phone off him, which she will NEVER Ever do!
She edged herself away from him and looked outside, still listening to her phone ringing the same Ring tone again and again.
Few moments later, there was no tone. Yes Maan had turned it off to prevent it from ringing again. He also turned rest of her gadgets off while driving. Wow 😆

"Mum, Dad , Pooja I miss you so much! Where are you ? Why isn't anyone looking for me?" she wondered as a tear made its way down her cheek. She closed her eyes and imagined all the good times she's had in her entire life. Now she had no clue what will happen to her and where she will go. All she knew was that she was KIDNAPPED!!!

Suddenly the car stopped, Geet was surprised and scared.
She looked at Maan who was staring at her since ages.
"Where am I?" she asked, her heart almost jumped out of her mouth when she thought of all the bad places where she could have landed into.
"Home" He smiled at her.

Do Tell me how it is and if i should continue with it😳
Oh and the Pm's Are Cominggg😆
xx

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Shit Stuff From Me, Damn I Wonder how people even read this!😆

Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
Awesome Update Sadie
Loved it...
Cant wait for the next part
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm!:)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
loved it ..awsome yaar....pls do continue soon ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
i loved ur update pls pm me ur next part😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Omg, this sounds like a dream... One minute Geets lost and a few seconds later she is home [:O]... loved it. Sadie- Keep the track going. It is awesome!! Silly me lol- you're FF is called Just a dream, so it's bound to be a dream 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#76

PM MEE TOOO WHEN U NEXT UPDATE THANKS

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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Awseome update dear.....what's with this maan dude.....?he seems to be head over heels in love with her.......but kab,kaise,kahan.........jaldi update karoooooooooo....plz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
great ff............please add me to your pm list....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
Maan is a nuts here
He directly took her to his house
Geet jus knws her name n nthg else
He shuld hav atleast told his purpsosal shanti say to her or her family
But nahi he is really gone nuts
Loved how Geet was trying to show she is brave
Maan can read her mind in such a small tym
Well lets c wat happens wen Geet sees her new hom
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
as awesoem as always....do cont'd soon dear
and i am sure loving it and do keep writing

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