FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

You are fantastic story-teller👍🏼 Loved every part...and this Sr was really beautiful....their souls connected even though physically they didn't...and you wrote it beautifully!!

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569360

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

hiii hasini

uff part 50 and 51 was fabulous... the entire wedding sequence.....explaining the significance of some of the rituals.....was so beautifully penned down in ur signature style... the suhag raat sequnce was so well spiced up.............. and thanxx for giving that heart to heart chat,.............i was waiting for that part........and u did complete justice to it.....with such wonderful thoughts........ the way u concluded part 51 bowled me over with its sheer simplicaity yet powerful choice of words....... a perfect recipe for a healthy marriage.../relationship the last two parts wer definitely different yet portrayed so elegantly....that it it still remains etched to my memory...........

and u dont need to post adults only warning...............its well written......... loved it

keep writing melody

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Awesome..... Loved it...... God MK's phone throw dat phone outside plz....... Hate dat phone........

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btkr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Loved the update...they are just so happy to be with each other and belong to each other that the contentment overrides it all. Her "glowing like moon-kissed pearls" line was beautiful- very poetic.

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

awesome part!

i loved the way their suhaah raat really portrayed who they are

and they did not rush into the consummation... although i think they should before geet tells him the "secret" tomorrow

btw is it that shes got a job in SF?

i really don't understand her.. shes married to him now, and how does she expect to maintain a long distance relationship?

can't wait for the next part! hope everything works out for them and they really get to know each other!

con't soon!

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

perfect update at last they sort out there deference pls cont soon thanks pm

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love_lavnya

@love_lavnya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Hey Hansini,

thanks for the pm n I just love the part 50 n 51awosssssssoooooomeeeeeeeee udpates yaar

keep updating I just love u r writing each n every word n pls update the next part due to the end

plsssssssssssssssss update soon

love u

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Shaheda

@Newdime

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Brilliance.....⭐️

The recipe of marriage is part of my fav recipes now.
I would have not imagine this at all...after all you convinced me to post.👏

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pop77

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Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Nice part..wedding night office work..not bad..Geet finally give signal to Maan...I really like this part..they try to understand eachother more...they still don't know eachother..I hope next part going to be consume night..Geet burry all her past..

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#160

An amazing part and you penned it down beautifully I loved how geet did confront maan because that did clear up the mist that was still in the air and maan gave an honest answer which was so sweet and understandable. And the whole chapter was sweet and had a light romance full of an understanding feeling throughout the whole chapter and maan summed the whole night towards what he said towards the end of his monologue. I liked how maan said that he wouldn't go further as he was waiting for her to feel and do the same. On the whole s really beautiful chapter and yes you are fully justified to geet not kissing maan before marriage as she did need this answer from maan to probe her further 😃