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Posted: 14 years ago


hey Keyama wonderful start...
and awesome story...
already in love with it...

My eyes teared up when i read that u r gonna end Tremble of love...😭
I love love love that story tooooo much..
Leaving my books behind i will read it daily...
and MEANT to Be 😭

😡 Plzzz ek update in a month for them is also ok 😔

And ... i am still reading ur FF... now...
thought of commenting after reading all updates till date..
but seems like i cant effort to refrain myself from commenting...now...

" They were growing up and there family still treat these two like a 5 years old. I am his GF! Ugh I have more right on him... I just can't believe they even sleep in a same bed… "

These lines were superb...
I cracked up laughing,....🤣😆

Love uuuuuuuu🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago
nice title bt wt does esoteric mean?????
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wiinie_pooh



hey Keyama wonderful start...
and awesome story...
already in love with it...

My eyes teared up when i read that u r gonna end Tremble of love...😭
I love love love that story tooooo much..
Leaving my books behind i will read it daily...
and MEANT to Be 😭

😡 Plzzz ek update in a month for them is also ok 😔

And ... i am still reading ur FF... now...
thought of commenting after reading all updates till date..
but seems like i cant effort to refrain myself from commenting...now...

" They were growing up and there family still treat these two like a 5 years old. I am his GF! Ugh I have more right on him... I just can't believe they even sleep in a same bed' "

These lines were superb...
I cracked up laughing,....🤣😆

Love uuuuuuuu🤗



ty hun. lol thats too good. i know lol… loved ur comment… and yes maybe once every one month
xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Their passion n Love for each other is jus gng on increasing
They love each other a lot but jus not expecting it or nt getting it
Geet's anger baap re
If Datta touched a finger to Maan he will be dead by Geet
Liked that they never crossed tehir limits
Mum n Dad they shuld get wats their relation is yaar
I hate this Sam to the core
Update soon sum more awesum parts
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 16


After while maan comes to her bed. Hugs her tight. Both sleeping peacefully. They had a weird relationship. Nun confessed about there love.

Next day... It's evening... Everything was ready for the party... One by one everyone started to come in... Maan was already down... Geet joined later...

Armaan: bro gn kill me.
Maan: umm!
Armaan: it's geets and his party as well. And Geet refused to come.
Maan: she is staying here with me.
Armaan: you two are so weird! I can understand Geet as she hasn't said yes to bro yet. But you are with sam! So????
Maan: only reason I am with her because mum, dadi and dad forced me in to this. And they done it when geet wasn't round. Otherwise Geet would have stopped it.
Armaan: well hurry up. Do something. Otherwise I can't see my bro heartbroken.
Maan: geet haven't done anything to him so why is he expecting anything from her.
Armaan: idk!

Geet walks in... She looked stunning. She wore a blue short dress. Looking absolutely amazing. Maan looked at her lost. She was one of the most beautiful one round.

Maan walks towards her... He holds her by waist...
Sam walks in...
Maan: you looking dam sexy.
Geet: you not looking bad your self...
Maan was wearing a black blazer... And on the side blue strip. Hardly noticeable. But made him look extremely handsome...
Geet puts her hand round his neck... Maan holds her waist tightly. Geet couldn't feel the floor anymore.

This type of behavior was normal from them. They really didn't care what other thought about them...

They enjoyed there solo dance... No family to stop them... No one to scold...

Party went on till 2am...

Sam on the other-side could have killed geet... She had to do something...
on the other hand Dutta was completely understanding. He loved geet. He always was happy whatever deception she made about there relationship but maan and Sammera was in mess. ....

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It's Saturday again... Only one weeks left to leave...
So they decided to give a big leaving party... Geet have said no to Dutta and her engagement and will decide after she comes back from university... Dutta was happy he needs to keep her way from his life... Geets family was unaware about duttad bad business.

Geet gets ready... It was traditional party... So sari for girls and suitable cloths for boys...

Geet wore a sari... She was half naked... Not fully ready yet... Maan walks in without knocking...
Geet jumps... "Maan!"
Maan just couldn't remove his gaze...
Maan: at least lock the door! Anyone could have walked in.
Geet: it's only you.
Geet looks in the mirror....maan Hugs her.... He bare stomach was seducing maan to touch... And he did...

Maan: that's because I am your mangeter.
Geet: that's only between us! Whole family know you and sam!
Maan: but Maan sing Khurana knows it's only you.
Maan brushes his rough beard cheek against hers....
Geet: have you locked the door?
Maan: I am not you and yes...
Geet turns round...
Maan kisses her collar bone... Start to travel down.... Unbuttoning her blouse buttons... Geet moans...
Maan: how do we control?
Geet hugs him tighter... As they land on the bed...
Geet: I don't know.
Maan smiles coming back to her lips... Kissing them passionately...
Geet: don't leave any bite mark. People will notice.
Maan: let them.
Geet: ouch... Awww....
Maan puts her skirt up... Stroking her thigh... Geet unbuttons his shirt... Breathing hard... They knew the desire that was building up....
Maan increases the pressure on her lips...
Suddenly geets phone rings...
Maan: does this phone have to ring now?
Maan still continued... Hiding his face between geets neck...
Geet: Ridzy! Hi...
Ridzy: where are you?
Geet: umm... Bed wit... I mean...I am just getting ready.
Ridzy: you two are gather again?
Maan comes back to her lips.. Then take the phone...
Maan: hi!
Ridzy: maan! This is wrong!
Maan: you know I will never marry sammera. So I see no harm!
Ridzy: but! You giving her false signal!
Maan: I already have explained everything to her. I am not interested. And I will break this engagement any time. It's her fault if she want to be under illusion!
Ridzy: you two really need to clear your life out.
Maan: don't disturb. We will be there in 1 hour.
Ridzy: this party for you two. So hurry up.
Maan cuts the call.



hay you all ty for all the lovely comments…. this trac will end soon with a new twist… but if u like this litttle innocent nok jok.. do say i can delay the big leap

xxxx

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update but its better for maan to break the engagement like suddenly in this party ..it ll be nice to see sameerra reaction....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...better Maaneet tell there parents abt their love... and First Maan break his engagement with Sameera...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey ............. its really interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome
thanks for this part
continue........
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Posted: 14 years ago
WHo fell in love with maans naughty smirk on sbs… 3:26
bcs i am drooling over it lol😍

part 17


Maan: always at the wrong time.
Geet: now let me get ready.
Maan kisses her lips again...
Both sits up... Maan makes her sit on the dressing table while he fixes her blouse. Putting the button back on. His every touch on her breast was seducing her more...
Geet: hurry up.
Maan: I am.
Geet: it doesn't take you this long to take it off.
Maan kisses her lips...
Maan: shall we time it? He says with a smirk...
Geet slaps him playfully...
Maan: ouch!
Geet: don't over exaggerate.
Maan: I am not!
Maan takes the sari and helps geet...
Maan: I brought you something!
Geet: what is it?
Maan takes it out... A White diamond set.
Geet: owo...
He puts it in her... Kissing her every place it touched.
Geet: I love this.
Maan: I love it on you.
Geet: now I look perfect. Hi na!
Maan: Maan ki geet always look perfect.
Both smiles looking at one another... There perfect life.......

Both walks out along the balcony... Geet teasing Maan.... Holding hands... Dadi noticed... Usually they are be careful what they do in front of there family... But today... They got caught by dadi... Maan smiling.... Both thought no one is in mansion ... Everyone is waiting for them in party....
Maan holds her tight from the back.... putting his hand under her sari... Squeezing her stomach....
Geet: ouch....
Maan: that's what you get for teasing me.
Geet: you becoming so naught nowadays.
Maan: if you look so irresistible... Then what could I do.
Both smiles again...

geet: stop it...

geet at the end of the stair and maan just one before... right behind her..... he holds her by waist tight and picks her up.

Geet shouts... scared... : MAAN.... laughing....

Maan: bolo!

geet: please...

maan: umm... he holds her against his body tighter....

geet: meri sari kule jaiga...

maan: seref meh hi hu... anyway... nothing new to see...

geet slaps him tighter...

geet: tum bohot beshram ho..

maan: i fantasize you all the time.... he whispers that in her ear...

geet turns bright red.....

geet: stop it.....

maan: upper bed room me to kuch nahi kha....

geet: maan!!!

maan: bolo... he makes an innocent face....

geet: bohat badmash ho tum...

maan nodes: do you want to know what i fantasize.... crave ....

geet: NO! i don't want to know... it probably is sick like you...

Maan: Sick and ME.... he makes another innocent face....

geet: ha... maans hand was on on her back now...

maan: tho lets listen....

geet: lets go na... everyone is waiting for us...

maan whispers: to night... pakka.... i will make you listen...

Geet: NO!... she blushes more....

bothe walks...


Dadi was in shock of her life.... But it was both of there decision to marry .... Dadi was confused.... "they need to realize... This is wrong.... She was glad that dad have changed and shifted all geets uni in different town...

Both walks in to the party together... Geet still blushing from what Maan have done with her few minutes ago...
Maan: stop blushing.
Geet: shut up. You left me so many bite mark.
Maan: and what about you... My chest and back... Your nail scratch and your teeth Mark!
Geet: they are covered.
Maan: so! And anyway... I can't see them as much...
Both sam and Dutta walks towards them... Separating them... Maan didn't like that idea... He kept strong hold on geets waist...
Maan: at least let us have some fun on are last day!
Dutta: last one! She is my forever after today.
Maan squeezed geet to him self more... Clenching his fist...
Maan: it's only Maan ki Geet....
Geet looked at him in shock... She knew well how stubborn maan is... He probably will punch him again....
Geet looked at Ridzy for help...
Ridzy runs between them.... "haha... Ha...." she does a fake laugh... "what a good joke!"
She snatches geet from maan and walks to the side.
Dutta gives him an angry glare. He love her madly... His childhood love... But because of Maan he never been able to do anything with her... He always stands in front of her like a pillar....
Sam couldn't say anything. Every time she say a word about him and geet... Maan would tell her to shut up or threaten... "why don't you break up the engagement!"

Sam leaves... But one positive point was she was going at the same town as maan. While geet... Completely different side of the world. Australia.


ok' next part '.. umm' more party trouble...


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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