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Posted: 14 years ago
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FIRST PART FROM ME...😛

**** PART - 14 ****

*Very Near Still Far Away*




That dreadful night finally ended and the new sky , for there new life entered there life

Armaan was undoubtedly happy today , cause his wish came true and his son was there with him in his house , he just wanted his son to be near him , and if this is possible only on condition of riddhima there around him as well , he really didn't minded , for him the satisfaction that his child was safe and sound around him was all

And as per riddhima , this one night maid her more stronger , she was fully determined now that she will surely run away from here as soon as she can

A new life , and definitely a new beginning




CONTINUE...



(thnx to armaan nd riddhima's lucky stars maya got a call from a producer for a movie nd without even consulting to naina maya left for Mumbai ………when naina didn't get maya in her room she called her den she got to know abt d movie plan……….naina was very furious for dis stupid step of maya but she couldn't do anything as maya refused to return …………..nd told naina to wait……😆)

AFTER ONE DAY…….(WAT HAPPENED IN LAST ONE DAY YOU ALL WILL GET TO KNOW IN FUTURE AS FLASHBACKS………)

MORNING………………

TRIED ARMAAN OPENED HIS EYES ND LOOKED AROUND………another day for him to face his son's hatered toward him…….

He went to bathroom for bath for some relief….

ON THE OTHER HAND

RIDDHIMA GOT UP ND LOOKED AROUND HER GAZE FALL ON KRISH SLEEPING BESIDE HER……RIDDHIMA SMILLED……..ND SHE KISSED ON HIS FOREHEAD LOVINGLY……

but soon her smile vanished when her eyes went on armaan's phote which was hanging on wall in front of her………a lone tear escaped from her eye…….

Riddhima wiped d tear nd went for bath……..

Riddhima came from bathroom nd caressed krish head………she heared a knock on door where a servent was waiting for her

Riddhima opened d door

Ri – ji???

" ji apke liye breakfast aur krish baba ke liye dhudh "said servent while forwarding d food tray

Riddhima took d tray nd went near krish……..

Krish opened his eyes nd smiled towards his mumma

"GUDD MOING" said krish in sleepy voice

"gud mrning my bachha' said riddhima

"Mumma kish lub youuu" said krish with his dimple smile……..

"Mumma loves you too….." said riddhima while placing d tray on near by table………….

Riddhima noticed krish looked more relaxed nd less scared den last two days…..

Both mother nd son spend quality time while eating their breakfast , playing laughing after two days it looks like a dream

BUT unaware of d fact dat someone is looking at dem with moist eyes…….

ARMAAN

Armaan looked at riddhima nd krish who were totally engrossed in each other……..armaan felt happy to see krish smilling but some where he felt pain too coz krish still hate him nd scared of him…

A tear rolled down from armaan's eye to see his son in front of his eyes but still he can't touch him,love him…………

Armaan left for his room ……


Riddhima looked at the door to see who is their but their was nobody..


Riddhima looked here nd there in confusion coz suddenly she felt their was someone but now their was no one rite now…….


Armaan fell on the couch nd closed his eyes………….


riddhima felt a hand on her cheek nd turned to krish who was patting her cheek to get her attention..

Riddhima raised her eye brows in questiongly look

"mumma mela bunny tah hai???" krish asked to riddhima

"Betu wo gum hogay hai…..mumma apke liye dusara bunny leke aygi ok……" said riddhima

Krish pouted nd riddhima laughed at his antics

Riddhima stood up nd went to her bag (which she brought yesterday from her house) she looked in d bag for a toy for krish

Armaan was feeling very restless coz he can't go near to krish

(as you all know krish is very scared of armaan coz his little brain think armaan wants to seprate him from his mumma which is true……..)

On the other hand

Soon riddhima got a toy for krish………she came back to who was waiting for her very patiently nd from last 5 mins. Continuously shouting "mumma – mumma - kish –bunny-mela" in his kid language

She gave a little car to krish which was his favourite …….krish clapped with his tinny hands in excitement to see his fav. Car in his hands

Both again started playing

Riddhima was playing wid krish but her mind was continuously working on some things which she couldn't ignore…….nd d most important nd wired thing was dat armaan didn't came to meet krish nor his mother……..

IN NIGHT

Whole day went like dis she thought to bring food for krish but before she could go out nd ask someone she find servent who was standing on d door with dinner……….she took d tray from him but now she was sure dat something is going on……..but wat she could pin point

Again unaware of d fact dat armaan is watching dem from window ohh not for some jasusi or not coz he was worried but to assure himself dat krish is fine……….

Armaan looked at sleeping krish nd riddhima who was sitting beside krish…with moist eyes armaan left for his room

"HOW THESE SERVENTS COME TO KNOW SHE NEED SOMETHING" first she thought may be he had placed any camera in d room but she was wrong she sreached whole room but didn't get any camera…

After feeding dinner to a naught krish

"krish betu an so jao" said riddhima while tudding him

"nahiii mumma chali gai tohhh" said krish while jumping out of comforter nd hugged riddhima

But after little bit of patting nd assuring he slept in riddhima's lap……….riddhima carefully placed him on bed nd slept…………

Again without any improvement in ar relation

Both armaan nd riddhima slept for another day …….with a hope dat soon everything will be all right nd according to their wishes……

NEXT MORNING

Riddhima got up in d morning nd her gaze fall on armaan's picture ……..seeing his picture his last words to her echoed in her ear…..

" I knew my son needs someone to take care of him , and from today you are his nanny , just a mere governess and that's all"

" I knew my son needs someone to take care of him , and from today you are his nanny , just a mere governess and that's all "

Again tears started coming out of riddhima's eyes…

"MUJHE MERE HI BETE KI NANNY BANNE KA OFFER DETE HUE EK BAR BHI TUMNE YEH NHI SOCHA KI MUJH PAR KYA BITEGI ARMAAN……..tum itne gir jaoge yeh maine kabhi nahi socha tha" said riddhima in tears to armaan's picture

"itna buri toh tumhari mom ki baate bhi nahi lagi mujhe jitna dard tumhari unn baato ne dia…..pta nhi kyu tumhari kahi hui har baat ka itna bura kaga…..kyun armaan akhir kyu tum hamari zindagi mei aaye????maine toh tumhe dost maana tha fir kyu tum meri zindagi mera krish mujhse chinaa chahte ho???? duniya ki koi bhi maa apne bete ko kisi aur ko nhi de sakti aur naa hi main dugi……..aaj tumhari wajah se mere krish ki yeh hallat hai……. main tumhe dusra mauka nhi dugi mujhe aur krish ko alag karne ka……"continued riddhima with welled eyes

Riddhima wiped her tears

"aaj kisi bhi haalat mei mujhe yaha se jana hoga apne krish ko lekar main aur dair nhi kar sakti…….."said riddhima to herself ………

"TUM????" a voice

Riddhima heared a yelling voice nd turned with a scared feeling dat someone had heared eveything thing which she said………

She looked at d person in fear nd horror

nd d person who was fuming in anger nd could blast any moment………..



Hiii FRNDS

dis was my first attempt for talaash ...plz give ur coments about d part ...u all liked it or not...😛

i know most of you will find dis part boring but wat to do yar dis part was important according to me to give a turn to ar relation...so if any of u find if boring bear it...😕



All criticism, suggestion and questions are most welcome...😛



plz leave your precious LONG comments, they mean a lot to me...😛



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LOTS OF LOVE...

JANNAT...😳

Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
nice part
don't dare to call it boring
waiting to see the trun in AR relation which totally change their life
continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

nice part
don't dare to call it boring
waiting to see the trun in AR relation which totally change their life
continue soon



thnx a lot dear.......😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Nice start frm ur point of view......hope u will keep da story as intrstng as it was......keep it up.....gud luk
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

heyy

awsomee partt plss try and put some AR and yess ass an first attempt in taalash is was outstanding!!

thx for the pm

continuee soon

sakshi

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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
hey great part
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
hey jannat very nice update do continue soon thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
hey jannat di,
nice part.👏
ph god krish hats armaan that's sad.😭
poor ammy he loves his son too much..........
he has suffered a lot in his life.........
i hope everything will be alright soon.......
fingers cross.........
loved it.........
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.
love
sonu😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
hey..😛 part was fantastic............plzzzz clear their misunderstanding.........very soon......... want their love story to start soon....... great part continue soon.....😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
amaizng part do cont soon=D

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