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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 23

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

He's like why did Disha come here

HE asks the people

No one says anything

DK asks for a reason

He comes to know that she worked there

Cuz he was sick

And she needed the cash!!!

Dk is like oh no!!!!!!

He comes home

Disha sees him

Dk is mad!!!!!

Disha notices his mood is off

Disha asks whats wrong?

Dk: Why???

Disha is confused!

Dk: Why did you take an advance???

Disha is shocked!!!

Dk can tell by her face

DK: Why??? Why did you do this???? And u worked? I told you not to!!!

Disha: Yeah but..

Dk; I don't want to hear it!!!!!!!!! I will work back for that money! And I will pay them off!!!!!

He is mad

Disha is sad!

Disha: But Dk……

Dk: No!!!!!!! I don't understand why you went there!!!!!!! Why???

Disha closes her eyes!!!!

Dk: If I was sick… u shouldve just let me be!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is nodding her head no!!

Dk: But I will work for each penny!!!!!! …….

Disha is sad!!!!!!!!

For the next couple of days

DK works day and night at the office

So he can repay them back!!!!!

He doesn't come home til late….

Disha waits for him

When he comes home…..

Disha sees

She gives him food

Dk doesn't eat anything

And goes

Disha is sad!!!

She's like what have I done??

She is sad!!

She goes in the room

She sees that he is already sleeping!!!!!!!!!!!

She just goes to sleep!!!!!!!!!

Meanwhile…

Back in another place

Rano and Ved are fighting again!!

They cant stand each other

But they have no choice

They have to stay together!!!

Dk warned Ved not to get married so soon

But he didn't listen

And he did!!!!!

And now look!!!

All they do is fight day and night!!!

One blames the other one

The other blames them back!!!

Its bad!!!!!!!!!

Ved doesn't want to go back cuz he knew Dk was right!!!!

When they did come down last year…..

They both came together

And put on an act that they were happy!!

But they cant stand it!!!


The End!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
lovely part...poor disha....dk has got to be a lil more understanding...pls cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
arrey....too short...but its ok..i know ur tired,were busy...etc....anyways...it was good as usual!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
just caught up!!!!!! absolutely fab...fantastic...mind blowing...gr8!.... 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part guli 👏 ...

i agree.....dk should be a little more understanding...
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Posted: 19 years ago
HEY YOU GUYS!! SORRY I DIDN'T UPDATE YESTERDAY!! I HAD WRITTEN HALF OF THEM BUT THEN I WAS GONE OUT! WHEN I CAME BACK I WAS CONTINUING BUT I WAS TOO TIRED TO FINISH!!!!!! SO I APOLIGIZE FOR NOT INFORMING YOU GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 24

(I WILL TAKE SOME THINGS FROM TD… BUT I WILL MIX IT UP A LITTLE BIT)

Next Morning

Both are in still in bed!!

Dk is looking at Disha!!!! He is awake!

He is thinking that he was a little harsh w/ her!!!!

He shouldn't of yelled like that!!!!

Disha is sleeping but her back is faced to him!!!!

Then she turns

Opens her eyes

And sees Dk

She is shocked!!

Dk is looking at her!!!

She's like oh no what do I do now!!!!

She keeps looking at him!!!

He is looking at her

Dk: Disha…

She's like omg!!

Dk; I am really sorry!!!!!!!!

Disha is shocked!!!

Dk: I know I shouldn't have said that to you!!!!

He puts his hand on her face

And apologizes to her!!!!!!

Her eyes get all watery…….

And she hugs him!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk gets ready for work

And he leaves!!!!

The phone rings

And Disha picks it up!!

Its from the same place where she worked

They tell her that if she wants the job again…. she can get it

Disha is happy!!!

And w/o thinking about she accepts it!!!

She goes over there

And she works again!!!

Later that day

She comes home

Dk is home early today

And asks her where was she?

Disha tells him

DK is shocked!!!!!!!

Dk tells her not to work!!!!!

Disha; But Dk….

Dk: No!! I told you this before… I don't want you to work!!

Disha: But Dk… I have no problem in working!!

Dk says no!!

He tells her to quit!!!!!

Disha is sad!!!!!

Disha is thinking

That she is only doing this to help him out!!!

They don't have much!

And if she gets paid and he gets paid

They can manage their small place that they have!!

She ends up telling Dk that she will quit

But she will stick to it!!!

She talks to her manager

And tells her that she will only work form 9-3!!!

Becuz Dk leaves in the morning at 8

And he comes back around 4!!!

So she has 1 hour!!!!!

Her boss tells her its okay!

She is happy

Dk doesn't know that she stil has the job

And boy o boy when he finds out

He will be upset!

But Disha wont tell him at all!!

Disha comes home at 3: 30!

She starts to cook food….

She is tired from work today!

She is cooking Dk comes home!!!

She is happy!!!



The End!!!
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Part 25

Meanwhile

Someone or another Ved comes to know about Dk!!!

And he is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He cant believe it!!!

He has nothing today!!

Ved is like a man who was living like a king has nothing today!!!

He wants to go to him

But he knows Dk's ego!!!!

He feels bad!!!!!

He tries to send him money

But the problem is that he doesn't know where he is

And knowing Dk

He will send it back!!!

Ved: I wonder how is he??

He is sad!!!

For the next couple of weeks…..

This is the same routine everyday!!!!!!!!!!

Work and Home!!

When Disha gets paid she puts in a drawer and puts it w/ Dk's!!!!

But she only puts a little at a time

Or else Dk might question how come there is so much money!!!!!!!!!!1

Becuz only he knows how much he gets!!!

Expenses, Expenses, expenses!

So much they have to pay for

Dk is stressing out over it

Disha tries to convince him

That maybe she could get that job!!!

But Dk says no!

Disha is like damn!!

Dk tells Disha that tomorrow he has the day off

Disha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

She's like how will she go if Dk is @ home!!!

She quietly calls her boss…

And says that she wont be making it for work tomorrow!!!!!!

Boss asks her why!!

And knowing Disha

She tells her the truth!!

Boss is a nice lady

So she says okay!!!!!

Disha promises that it wont always be like this!!!!!!!

She puts down the phone

Dk comes out

Dk: Who were you talking to?

Disha gets scared

Disha: Oh wrong number!!

Dk: okay!!!!!

She's like phew that was close!!!!!

Next day

Since Disha is home…

She does a little cleaning around the house!!!!!

Dk tells her to stop and tells her lets go out!!

So she stops and both go!!

They are out

Enjoying these small happy moments w/ these bad times!!!!

They are walking

And they see a couple w/ a 1 year old boy….. on a bench

They have their things next to them!!!!!!

Disha looks at them

She is all sad!!!!

She keeps looking at them!!

Dk is like what are you looking at

Disha: Dk.. look at them!!!

Dk sees!!

Disha feels sorry for them

She asks Dk what if they stay w/ them!!

Dk is like no way!!!

Dk: I am sorry Disha!!!! I would!! But not at a time like this!!

Disha: Look at them!!!!

Dk: Disha??? We don't have that much right now and you want to add….. I cant!!



The End!
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Part 26

Disha: Why don't I just work???

Dk: Disha!! How many times will we argue about this over and over again????

Disha; Please Dk!!

Dk: No!!!!

Disha; Okay fine!! Forget about the work… but what about them??

Dk: Disha!!!! I know you a big heart… but its…

Disha: Please Dk!!! Look they even have a little boy!!!!!!!!!

DK doesn't say anything!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is like please!!!!

Dk: Disha I am going to leave this up to you!! I have nothing to do w/ this!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Dk?

Dk: No!!! You do whatever you want!!!

Disha goes to them

They see her!!!

Disha asks them what are they doing here

They didn't pay their rent so they were kicked out!!

Disha is sad!!!!

Disha asks them to come w/ her!

But they say no!!!

Disha insists and insists!!!

And the little boy is crying too!!!!!

The couple looks at each other

Disha tells them please don't say no!!!!!!!!!!

They agree to it!!

Disha smiles!!!!!

They arrive at the home!!!

They give them a small room that's there!!!!

Its not that big but it will do!!!

Dk is like whatever!!

Dk is sitting on the bed…..

Disha comes in!!!!

She sits next to him

Disha is happy

She is did something food for someone!!!!!

Dk: Disha…. U know they will have to leave sometime!!!

Disha: yeah I know!! But let them at least stay for a couple of days!!!

Dk: It was ur decision!!!!!!

Next day……

Disha is up

She cooks breakfast…..

Dk eats and he leaves!!

The wife comes out

Disha is like I have to leave in 30 mins!!

The wife is thankful for everything she did!!

Disha is like don't worry about it!!!

Disha tells her what her situation is at the moment!!!!!!!

Wife understands…

She tells her not to worry!!

Disha goes to work!!!!!

Wife and her son is there

Husband goes and looks for a job

These nice people let them stay at their house!!!!!!

And he doesn't want to live for free!!!!!!!

He goes out

And finds some job!!!!

Disha comes home at 330

Wife has already cooked everything

Disha is like u shouldn't have!!

Wife; Its okay!!!! U let us stay here… I have to do something to!!!!

Disha smiles!!!!

Dk comes home

And so does the guy

Guy has some cash

And he gives it to Dk!!!

Dk is like whats this for

The guy is like you are letting us stay here…..

So this is the least we can do!!!

Dk looks at Disha!!!

Disha smiles!!!


The End!
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Part 27


Dk is like its okay!!!

Guy is like this isnt right!!!!!!

He gives it to Dk

But Dk doesn't want it!!!!!!!

And he tells him to keep it!!!!!!!!!

Dk is like what a guy!!!!

They all eat!!!

Later in the night

Dk is on the bed thinking

Disha: Wat are you thinking?

Dk: About him!!!

Disha smiles!!!

Dk: He was willing to give us money!!

Disha: There are lots of people that take advantages of certain situations!! But these people don't!!!!!!!

Dk is like ur right!!!!!!!!

For the next couple of weeks…

They are still there!!!!!

Money is getting tight over here!!!!!

Guy tries to pay

But Dk wont accept it!!!!

He talks to Disha…

Disha says that here is some cash!!!!

Dk: Where did you get this?

Disha: I had saved some!!

Of course she lied to him about it!!!!!!

Disha: Here take it!!!

Dk: But..

Disha; Trust me and don't ask questions!!!!!

Dk is like w/ them staying here and the expenses!!!!!!!

He's in the need of cash!!!!!!

His plan of getting his property back is there

But he cant do anything as of now!!!!

He needs to get a higher position where he works!!

Or else everything might go hay wire!!!

Disha tells him to not to worry about it!!!!

Disha: We are happy aren't we!!!! And we have each other!!…

She puts her head on his shoulders!!!!!!!

Dk holds her hands!!!!

Dk is thinking that at a time like this…

He has someone by his side!!!!!!!

He kisses her!!

In the middle of the night

The little kid..

Is crying!!!

Wife is trying to calm him down!!!

He is telling him to stop crying!!

Disha hears!!!

Dk is sleeping!!!

She gets up

And goes out!!!

Wife; I am so sorry!!! I didn't mean to wake u up!!! I will calm him down!!!

Disha; its okay!!! Do u mind if I take him??

Wife; Not at all!!

Disha takes him

She calms him down!!

She walks w/ him

Disha takes him on the terrace

So he gets a little fresh air….

Dk turns

Doesn't find Disha!!!

He gets up

He sees the wife

He asks where is Disha?

She says on the terrace!!!

He goes up

He calls Disha

Disha tells him to Ssshh!!!

Disha calmed him down!!!

He's asleep!!!


The End!

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