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Posted: 14 years ago
wohooo ..I can't put my feelings in words ....this is simplyyy mesmerising.....SACHHHHHHHHHHHH...



awwwww....sasurji interupting...thier moment..and then blushing ......shanky and shy....huh ..SHOCKINGGG...and ulitimate excuse of arm ...stupid boy...luved AR convo in the room ..and most importantly...ridzyyy shankyyy "CATCH UP"....ROFL....I liked it ..both trying to prove them self wrong...🤔...CRAZYY pair...LOLLLLL

then ...ishhh...thier passing of morsels...and feeding each other indirectly ..was way too swweeettt...uff ...GANG never leave a chance to tease arm abd sasurji joining them ..was even better....ROFL...how swweet of ridzzz lighting diyas @ arm place ...was so cuteee...this showed ..she is no more ONLYY a daughter .....she has another house tooo ..was behaving like typical wifeyyy...cleaning dusting...😆

I luved sasurji's hesitation after finding AR together on terrace....LOLL...he was finding one or the other way to know wat r they doing thier after all...🤣.....and padma ...draaged him out ...so sweet of her ..y shankyy is so DUMB sumtimes....
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sections I luved....

As he felt her tears wetting his lips as they flowed down continuously, he pulled out to look at her.. But she leaned into him, asking for more, her entire weight on him now as he held her up by her waist.. She was lost completely.. He saw her beautiful face, her eyelids hiding her eyes from him, that expression of tranquil on her face.. There was nothing more serene and beautiful in the world.. And the world disappeared as he wanted to give her all that she wanted.. And all she wanted was to be in his arms forever.. He kissed her softly once and almost in a trance, just picked her petite self in his arms and made his way to the kitchen door from the outside.. Riddhima opened her eyes as she felt him lift her.. She found him looking at her as she looked back at him, not asking him once where he was taking her.. Coz she would go with him wherever he took her.. As long as he was with her.. That's all she wanted..

this was ..beautiful sequence ...I was in tears reading it....AWSUMMMMMMMMM job ..ridzzz was totally intoxicated by him ...she was lost in him..she got her "JAAN "...back in her lifeless bodyyyy.... I cud see this seen playing in front of my eyess.....it showed ..wat he meant for her...brilliant!!!!!!!!!😛




She had started to call out, but lost her voice at the sight.. And they were so lost in each other that she didn't have the heart to say anything else.. Nor did they realize she had called out.. She blushed to herself as she thought that they did deserve this time.. Now more than ever..


another sweet scn ...luved muski's reaction...how she understud ..wat she has to do and give 2 poor souls ...LOLL...sum time alone,....😳....



last but not the least ..I luved last secion AR TERRACE SCN...alotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.....both were @ so much peace ...BEAURIFUL ..the way she slept so calm and quiet in his arms....and he was pampering his babyy all the time ...no words nothing ..yet they conveyed so mucch to each other ..thats the beauty of AR relationship....the BESTEST sleep everrr....




muaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....luv u ..😳








Edited by sjain - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rachna in a rush so cant write a lot but still have to say this part was mindblowing right from the engagement to the AR talks to shanky ridz talks and not to forget the gang talks. each part was mindblowing......


Hope to read more and more of this....

Continue soon and thanx for the PM
Edited by anjie22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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finally armaan riddhima r committed the sagai finally happenedNow it was finally going to be returned to its rightful owner.. "Padma aunty.. Do you mind if I use this ring.."how sweet of armaan to seek permission for using some thing which their is no need to ask 4 but thats only make him different from others the way he respect and loves riddhima's parents is wat too much one can expect i just adore this quality of armaan of ur ff which u created by keeping these little things in mind this shows how engrossed n attachedu r in this ff and with its characters 😊

"Of course not beta.. Tumhari ring zyaada khubsoorat hai.."i loved ..........the ans was quite expected from any mom becoz mom r very very sweet n understand each n every emotions of their child is goin througgh n padma mom of ur mom is the best mom n treat armaan as his own

........................................ Riddhima.. Look at me.. Please..", he took her face in his hands and looking into her eyes, "Riddhima.. I know all this is so unbelievable.. And I know its all happening so fast.. Mujhe pata hai after what I did, its not going to be easy.. I mean, I know I cant expect you to start trusting me right away.. We need time.. I need time to win your trust and you need time to start trusting me again.. A hundred sorrys are not going to change what I did Riddhima. And we'll take our time.. Hum Dr. Shashank ko jaakar keh denge that we are not ready for this yet.. Theek hai.."aweeeeeeeeee so aweet of him how understanding he is its too tough to find a guy like him love him n u for creating armaan character the way u created in this ff their is no doubt why riddhima love him more than anything n anyone...................You are so dumb Armaan. I should've realized in the beginning.. Of all the people in this world I had to fall for an airhead like you.. You are the limit of stupidity.. I don't even believe I fell for you.. Is there any procedure to go back in time and cancel all that.."

Armaan, who was surprised at the tone she took, scowled as he heard her insults.. "Hold on.. Tum itna gussa kyun ho rahi ho.."

She raised her eyebrows in frustration as she continued.. "Toh kya karun Armaan.. Tum kitne paagal ho pata hai.. How can you say I don't trust you.. Are you stupid.. Oh wait a minute.. I forgot.. You are stupid!..", but Armaan had had enough.. What the hell was her problem.. "Riddhima.. Enough.. I was just..", but she cut him.. "Don't even try to explain Armaan..

he he he i foud this part of a update ouite halarious aswell as cute

yeh n i agree with riddhima in it he does act dumb sometimes😆

n then entry of shashank when they were going to kiss.......... that was worth wactching to see embarrassed shashank ..
😳..........................loved the way both father daughter have sorted out

best part was when their fiends were teasing armaan its good to see armaan nat recieving end n the part was vey funny i was totally enjoying it n laughting to the core ...some of the lines which i enjoyed way too much are
Seedhe seedhe bolna teri Basket ke saath khayega.." making everyone laugh again as he turned red.. Glaring at her angrily he retorted.. "Muskaan! .. Forget it!.. I am not saying another word.."

"Kyun.. You want a lawyer.🤣."....................

now finally i come to armaan riddhima together:-

i loved the way they were teased together by their friend👏

i love the way they shared their first morsel ⭐️

i loved their kiss after whole one month of seperation on that place only were they were seprated n completed what remained incomplete on that day😃

i adore the way they were lost each other that they ignored muskaan voice 😊

i love muskaan 4 understanding them n giving them what they were dieing to for the time they were reunited😊

i love padma mom 4 draging shanky out of AR HOME😊

LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST I LOVE WHOLE TERRACE SCENE BTWEEN AR👏⭐️

IN WHOLE IT WAS AN AWESOME PART HATTS OF TO U
n thanks 4 giving such a long n lovely part
🤗

CONTINUE SOON😊

Edited by anushkajain - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow finally they cath up wd each other

well part was wonder ful and plz update nxt part soon
thanx 4 dpm
luv u
salina
Edited by salinashah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wat d hell mann... m again lateeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
Are u updating more now?????😆

Will comment after reading whole part in reserved post.......
Edited by anjie22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwww that was awesome ......cant believe they are engaged now

m so glad u didnt drag the story u ve put them together asa ....awww thank you for that....now m looking forward to c them married ....n may be having beautiful kids in ur nxt thread lol....

thanx for update

DEVIKA
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy rachana,
nice part
continue soon
waiting for complete update


love
Riddss
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooohhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Yeh Dr. Shashank ki timing bahut kharab hai😆😆!!!

....................To be continued.......😆😆😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ufffffffffff yeah Dr.Shanky ko kiya problem hai.....

Koi nahi...I guess the Kiss will also worth the wait...........☺️

Looking forward to Father daughter part...

Thanks for the update

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