FanFic: Close yet so far~~~Thread 1~~~ - Page 68

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

wow ghadha was funny n maan asking adi abt looks was hilarious

vicky n cookie scene wow just can't stop laughing

overall superb update

Bhanu thanx so much!
am glad u liked it!
haha I hope next episode is as funny as this one lol
will continue soon!

Originally posted by: shining_moon

that was a hillarious update

poor vicky.........cookie likes him so much...loved the revenge part...awesome

even maan was scared of cookie😆

bechara maan....he don't look like gadha but he has acted like one for geet

hope he will succeed in geet pataoing plan😉....man he is acting like a despo now😆

keep writing

Shining moon thanx so much!
Maan was scared but he kinda pulled it off without having Geet and Vicky noticiing
hmm wiat and see if it succeedes lol
will continue soon!

Originally posted by: Tressa

hi.... Gr8 update ya...Loved it... Geet & Vicky & Cookie.... oopss.... Cookie was definately... d heroine... kya scene tha... Superb hilarious... I still laughing...

& Maan Bachh gaya... nahi wid Geet & her cookie... pata nahi kya hota...

& Adiii... hahahaa... he really needs to call dadima now....

Bechara Maan.... kya kare ki na kare yeh kaisi mushki hayy...

Please do continue soon..

Tressa thanx so much!
Adi ohh man poor Dadima...Dadima ka ladla bigad gaya lol
Maan is lost in Geet and is dying to be her frnds lol..hehee
will continue soon!

Originally posted by: reenasv

hey i just started reading ur ff. this is awesome

loving it. so much to laugh. i am loving this geet.

add me to ur pm list

cant wait to read the next update.

Thanx so much!
you are added to the pm list! Well once I update it u will be added for now u r there lol
will continue soon!

Originally posted by: mchopra

SIMI:not fair..kiska revenge nikal rahi hai by calling Maan gadha..he doesnt look like one to me either..but that was reallly fun..hehe..thanks for that laughter riot..

mchopra thanx so much!
haha well Geet doesnt knwo that Maan is DelhisShark lol for now Maan has to put up with da names that Geet calls him lol
hehe will continue soon!

Originally posted by: -afsha-

I jus cant stop laughing

Maan actually checked out himself in mirror to c whther he looks lik gadha or not😆

Baap re he really needs a doc now😆😆😆

Jus loved Geet's punishment for Vicky

Maan controlled himself a lot warna he wuld bursted out laughing anytym

Adi is in tension

Bechara Adi good he didnt thought that Maan is interested in him 😆😆😆

Afsha am glad I could make you laugh and smile lol
haha Maan needed a conformation that he is infact not a gadha or looks like one lol
Adi is stuck in da middle
Vicky what can I say about him lol
will continue soon!

@ kashndsel4eva Sorry I couldn't quote whatever you wrote
First of all woohhooo you are back
you were greatly missed by me and I love your comments!
wow you didn't have to comment on each and every part you had missed lol
Thanx so much! Am glad you liked every part
will contnue soon!
btw i hope you had a blast on your vacation!

Originally posted by: namita25

awesome FF.....I am falling short of words to praise you....so Maan now know that NYqueen is none other than Geet ...n geet is so mad at him....wow....let's see how MSK tries to impress Geet....can't wait for the next part....and plz plz .....add me to your PM list...

Namita thanx so much!
Don't give me so much credit for this lol
will contineu soon!
you are added on da pm list lol

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

awesome update

aww maan is soo in love with her

con't soon!

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Gadha.....hehehe.... loved it.... Update soon

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

So cute Maan really looking if he seems like a gadha.😆

Originally posted by: vrsharma

Loved it. Poor Maan

Originally posted by: shah10

love it..awsome..

do continue plz.

thx

THANK YOU ALL!!!!
I am glad that you guys enjoyed this as much as i did lol

will continue soon!

Originally posted by: charmed ones

WOW....!!! 👏

geet had her revenge...lol...wicked one...!!!! heheheh,....😆

LAMO...!!!🤣 wat's Maan upto...yaaarrr.... looking in mirror😆😆😆...checking himself out...😉 despertaly w8 4 Geet reply😃😃😃...OMG...is he in Luv...!!!!❤️

lolz...Simi...u killing me dear...!!!🤣 2nd funny part was Adi...!!! 😆hehehehe...Keep tracking Maan moves wiv close look on his emotion n expression..😆n thinking bt consulting dr 4 Maan...!!!!🤣

seriouly mate if Maan cme 2 knw abt it then...Adi is defo is gone...instead on floor...Adi will b out on Hotel...hehehehehe....!!!lol...🤣

jt imagine Maan is asking Adi abt hu he look in serial...wat will b his expression...!!!

ist shock...😲 then...huh...huh...then his comerical laugh wiv ans....😆

cnt soon dear...luv ur Reply😛...n Thax 4 luving ma name...made me feel spl..!!!😉

Luv

Sara....!!!😊

Wow Sara that is da longest and loveiest comment EVER!!!!!!!
Am glad you liked da revenge...Vicky had to get what he did i mean bringing her worst enemy to her own house lol...how can he do that..she trained her dog well lol
Maan was also scared from the dog but kinda played it off lol
He is in love but in order to conquor that love he has to work REALLY hard for it our Geet is not that easy to be fooled with or to becomes frnds with lol
lets see what he does
Am glad that you ejoy reading this as much as I like writing this lol
Adi is stuck in the middle and poor Dadima does not know that his grandson bigad gaya lol..she shoudl start singing that song maa ka ladla bigad gaya song from Dostana lol
OmG you know that owuld be so hilarious to see if that actually happens in the show if Maan does ask Adi bout his features lol
Thanx so much again
will continue soon!