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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG! Congoo on #2 (: OMG! so soo happpy for you. I LOVE your FF.
first update was awesome. love the friends talk. and how maan held in her arms and went to their room. omg! soo cutee.
the fight about catching a fish was soo cutee. ;)) very passionatee. I want geet to trust maan and maan needs to see Geet maturee side..
I really want to Geet to be independent now. (: she should start working. she is married now and MSK wife..
:) more romance & passionate scenes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Awesome update thanks
Does maan have a shocking past continue so
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omgggggggggggggggggg i jus read the whole of ur ff in the space of one evening even tho i shud be revising for exam.................but wat to do...............hehehehe cnt wait to hear wat geet wud say as her answer to maan
plzzzzzz add me to ur pm list!!!!!!!!!!! thanksssssssssssssssssssssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Hey...dear...awesum update....cn u add me PM list...cont soon...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all Congrats on the new thread yaar! 😆 And lovely updates! But I do feel bad for Geet....I agree Maan does love her truely but he doesnt express it often and he doesnt share anything abt his life with her and it does seem like he still treats her as a kid even after their marriage! The whole new part of the house.....he didnt even bother to ask Geet how she wants it done....he just did it himself! After all she will be living there too so he shouldve thought abt her likes as well! I'm glad she finally asked Maan all those but still she shudnt have let him go tht easily....for me personally his answers were not satisfying....it seemed like he only agreed to share things with her just bcuz she asked not bcuz he wants to! She shudve pushed her luck and asked him abt those 2 yrs as well when she had the chance! Oh well I guess atleast better than nothing...I hope she brings it up soon again and makes him understand how she feels! And OMG I cant believe Maan asked her tht at the end 😆....cant wait to read wat Geet's reply wud be for tht! PLZ continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Loved the update yaar
It was really nice
The last part was...well..kinda shocking!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Congrats for the new thread....and thanx for two great updts...waiting to see how their relationship progresses from here...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Disclaimer: I am not creator of the characters but everything pertaining the work is mine and mine alone.

Part 30


Geet's mouth fell open and she turned bright red in next second, she quickly tried to get off the bed but Maan held her down on bed.


Maan,'' no runing away, I answered your questions, now its your turn.''


Geet said nothing.


Maan,'geet!!


Geet mumbled ifeelshy and closed her eyes.


Maan, 'say again'


Geet, 'I feel shy.'


Maan,'why?'


Geet,'you are not a girl,you cannot understand.'


Maan,'why can't a guy understand?'


Geet,'because guys are mostly shameless.''


Maan,''really? I think girls are mostly coward.''


Geet opened her eyes and glared up at him. No, I am not a coward.''


His eyes captured hers in a eye lock, his eyes started sending her intimate promises, Geet was about to close her eyes, when he threw in the challenge.''prove it then that you are not a coward.''


For some reason both were whispering although no one was present.


Geet,''how?'' his lips curved in a smile and then, he said,'don't close your eyes this time, I want you to keep looking at me.'' His eyes held hers in a spell until she nodded, not knowing how she got into this situation. His gaze moved to her lips, he did not touch them, just looked at them. Her breathing became fast. He looked back into her eyes, his desire visible for her to read. Her cheeks were blazing red. Geet silently plead through her eyes to look away. A naughty smile flickered on his face.


'you said, you were brave.'


He peeled the gown off her. Geet shut her eyes involuntary, then, opened them again. He was looking at her body. She waited for him to touch her but he let her go. She looked at him confused.

Maan smiled and closed his eyes.


Geet kept looking at him, he opened his eyes and said with a smirk,''what? I am feeling shy.''


Geet grabbed the pillow and started hitting him with it.


Maan grabbed the pillow and threw it away. He grabbed geet and pinned her on the bed. Geet looked angrily at him while he had a big smile on his face.


Maan,''this is how I feel, when you eat up me with your eyes and then, don't touch me. It gives mixed signals. So, when you make a promise with your eyes' he gave her long slow kiss on lips,''then keep that promise.''


He did not give her chance to say anything and started kissing her passionately. He licked at her lips making her part them and then, his tongue slipped in and started tasting her.


He took off his own shirt and threw it away still kissing her. Then, shed his remainig clothes as well.He grabbed her hand and put it on his chest. Geet looked into his eyes and kissed him back,just like he was doing. Her hands slowly moved on his chest satisfying her curiosity.


Maan went mad at her small shy touches...they were so close that they felt a part of each other

...and when their final climax hit, it was like even there souls touched each other.

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Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
i m the frist one luved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Loved the update😊
Maan knows how to push her using the reverse psychology!
Pillow hitting part was cute😊

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