SS Alone in Paradise(Maaneet)LAST CH pg128 14 feb - Page 59

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Geet: ajeeb pagal insan ha ..walked behind him...
Maan: reached mansion
Maan: dadi dadi i got what i want
Arjun: Maan what you got buddy ?...he hug Maan
Maan: woh ? he look around room was filled with flowers sweets & gifts
Arjun: i got what i wanted Maan for years my dream girl yar .
Arjun Grand mama: beta thanks to you at last my Arjun liked a girl..
Maan: throat choke .....
Dadi: looked at Maan face ... he was looking puzzled
Geet: entered ..
ARjun: took a deep breath .... in low volume sings
Pehli Nazar Mein
Kaise Jaado Kar Diya
Tera Ban Baita Hai
Mera Jiya
Maan: cleared his throat...
Arjun Grand-mama: aao beta mera paas....
Geet: looked confused she walked to her.."namasta "
Arjun Grand-mama: hug Geet made her sit next to her "sorry Savetri i had to come in evening but this Arjun ,when i told him about Geet he didn't waited till evening ,he just force me to come right a way as if he will miss the proposal ...
Dadi: smiled koi baat nai...
Maan: whisper he would have missed ..
Arjun: dadi it is my friend's home i can come here any time ..right Maan
Maan: right buddy
Arjun: dadi my sweet dadi if i was late i am sure someone else would have ...paused looked at Geet
Geet: just stare at floor
Dadi: beta yeh kismat ka khel ha ... jo jis ki kismat mein ha woh iss ko zaroo milta ha ...
Maan: kismat ... he was lost in his own thought he said it bit loud..
Arjun: aara yar tum ko kya huwa ..you look bit upset
Maan: oh just my office hectic work ....
Arjun: i thought you are not happy with my proposal
Maan: looked at dadi & then at Geet" why i will not be happy ?"
Arjun: smile ....i was kidding yar
Arjun grand mama:" If you don't mind Saverti can Arjun talk to Geet "
Dadi: why not? looked at Maan
Maan: pretend he had not heard it ....
Dadi: Geet beta take Arjun to living room
Geet: looked at dadi & obeyed her order ..she walked ahead .....
Arjun:"are you not happy"
Geet: "no i am"
Arjun:"if you are not tell me i will step back"
Geet: who was playing with her duppata ."i said i am happy"
Arjun: ok then say it while looking in my eyes
Geet: looked up ... she could see Maan from the glass wall staring at her " i am very happy "
Arjun: yeh huai na baat..... smiled
Geet: shyly smiled ...
Arjun: friends .
Geet: yes aab chala ....
Arjun: sure ... give her way.... "will you come with me for dinner tonight?"
Geet: i ... they reached drawing room ..
Arjun: thumb up to his dadi
Arjun grandmama: bus Saverti give us date for engagement.
Dadi: let me ask Geet first .."beta aap ko koi itraaz tou nai"
Geet: dadi jaise aap ki marzi
Dadi looked at Maan... with head ask her to go ahead ..... "ok you select a day & tell me"
Arjun Grand mama : "i think coming friday"
Dadi: itna jaildi
Arjun Grand mana:" when both are ready then why to wait?"
Arjun: you are so sweet..... dadi
Maan: congrats... shake hands with Arjun ...
Arjun: thx
Dadi: nakul bring sweet ....
nakul :came with tray....
Dadi: made Geet & Arjun eat small piece of sweet..
Arjun:Maan tum nai khelao ga
Maan: sure .. he placed a small piece in Arjun mouth.....
Arjun grand mama: "she is ours "
Dadi: yes ...
Arjun: can i take her for dinner if you don't mind..
Dadi: woh
Arjun grand mama: acha ha understanding hojai gai
Dadi: ok beta ....
Arjun : aunty find a girl for Maan too
Dadi: looked at Maan
Maan: i am very busy in office i don't have time for marriage ....
Geet: looked at Maan.....his voice had strange kind of pain....
Arjun Grandmama: we should better leave.
Dadi: why so early?
Arjun Grandmama: i have to go to designer order Geet clothes ...
Dadi: oh yes ...
Arjun: whisper "see you at dinner"
Geet: just looked at him ..
Maan & Geet walk to farewell them ...
Geet: walked back to her room.
Maan was about to go to out house Dadi called him
Dadi: Maan come here
Maan: jee dadi
Dadi: are you happy?
Maan: yes dadi i am ..
Dadi: why you are telling lies ?
Maan: dadi i am not
Dadi: look at me ...
Maan:dadi kuch nai huwa .... walked to his room
Dadi: pagal ha aap dono.....
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Geet: wanted to cry she sat on her bed ... hug her pillow " why i am not happy?" she looked her self in mirror
she carefully taken off the necklace placed in the box...."it is not for me dadi" wipe her tears ..."whats wrong with me ?"
Dadi: enter with her maid
Geet: quickly lay down & hide herself in her blanket .
Dadi: Geet...
Maid : give her time .
Dadi:yeh kya hogaya ?
Maid: pointed up woh ha HE will fix it ..
Dadi: kismat... take me out i am feeling suffocated ..
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In evening..
Maan: dadi good evening
Dadi: good evening beta
Maan: ask nakul to bring coffee
Dadi: ok
Maan: looked around try to search her ..
Dadi: she is sleeping
Maan: who?
Dadi: who you are searching ?
Maan: shyly i was looking for newspaper....
Dadi: it is in front of you Maan..
Maan: dadi aap bhi
Dadi: go & call her
Maan: me
Dadi: maid asked her twice she didnot get up , i called her but she is still saying she want's to sleep .may be if you call her she will come...
Maan: dadi no way she will fight with me..
Dadi: beta jao aik dafa...
Maan: acha... he was worried ..he walk to dadi's room . it was dark...he walk to her bed to check whether she is really sleeping or not
Geet: aanabee (she called dadi maid) please mera sar daba da bahot daar horaha ha ...she grab Maan hand...
Maan: sat on chair ...placed his hand on her forehead....slightly pressed her forehead
Geet: was half asleep she did not open her eyes....

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Dadi waited for Maan for 45 mins then ask her maid to take her as they enter
Maan : ask them to stop right there...he quickly walk to door" she was having headache now she is asleep if you will come in she will get up" he turn her wheel chair back
Dadi: hide her smile... "beta Arjun will come to pick her up "
Maan; call him & say she is not feeling well....
Dadi: beta it doesn't look nice
Maan: i don't care ...you just tell him...
Dadi: you call & say
Maan: ok .... he closed the door... he called Arjun
Arjun: oh Maan i am on the way to pick up Geet
Maan: buddy she is not feeling well bari mushkal se soai ha ...you take her tomorrow
Arjun: what happen?
Maan: pata nai..... ok talk to you later ...he cut call..
Dadi: beta
Maan: dadi i think her health is more important... did she had any thing?
Dadi: she didn't had any thing since morning
Maan: that why.... hmmmm
Dadi: what?
Maan: let her sleep when she gets up force her to eat & then ask her to take tablets.
Dadi: beta she will not listen...
Maan: ok call me. he walk to his room... "why i am worried about her?" her sleepy face came in front of his eyes.
Dadi: smiled started watching Tv.

Geet woke up after couple of hours ..... her head was still spinning.... "why it is so dark?"she turn on lamp .. it was 10 "oh i slept for hours " she quickly walked to washroom freshen up. walked out ...
Dadi: how are you feeling beta?
Geet; i am fine..she sit next to dadi
Dadi: nakul ask Maan to come for dinner.
Geet: you didn't had dinner
Dadi: he didn't had .i had at my time.
Geet: looked at dadi.... but i am not hungry.
Dadi: beta why you are angry from food ?
Geet: dadi i am not
Dadi: then eat
Geet: thora se
Dadi: ok
Maan: enter living room.he completely ignored Geet. sat in front of her.They had a quiet dinner.
Dadi: Geet beta kya baat ha , aren't you happy?
Geet: i dont know myself....her eyes was tell she had cried .
Dadi: beta you think & tell me take your time.
Geet: placed her head on dadi's shoulder ,dadi patted her cheek.
Maan looked at her she was pale . he open his laptop
Dadi: asked maid to take me her to room.
Geet: was about to get up ..
Dadi: beta you watch tv ...
Geet: started changing channels....
Maan: noticed she was thinking... to break the silence he called nakul ..
Dadi maid: beta he had gone to his room , kya kaam tha
Maan: i wanted to have coffee..
Dadimaid: ok i will make for you.
Maan: no i will make myself..he walk to kitchen.
Geet: aanabee mera sar daba da gai shaam ki tarah.
Dadi maid: beta woh Maan tha mein nai
Geet: Maan
Dadi maid: yes Maan ,when you were having headache he made you sleep ? ask him...walk to her room
Geet: looked at Maan who was coming out of kitchen.
Maan: looked at her."what i have done now?"
Geet: "nothing" shyly walk to bedroom.
Maan: pagal ha aur mujhe ko bhi kar rahi ha ... he went to his room.

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