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***ANIMOSITY***

part 23


past...


Dr: mrs khurana you have to be extra careful about his eating.
Geet nodes looking at maan angrily.
Dr: and also make sure he is not taking too much stress.
Geet nodes.
Dr: his dressing needs to be changed everyday. I will be there and one of my nurse with you too full time service for two weeks.

Geet worries. That can't be right... And that's mean she have to stay with him as she have told them I am mrs khurana.
Geet more annoyed. Maan smirking.
Maan: thank you Dr. We don't mind this at all.
Geet started to make crying worry face.

Maan already have brought geets cloths....
Geet sat next to him furious. Angry. She could have killed him.
Maan: why you troubling your self so much. Give your face a rest.
Geet: ugh... What's your problem? Why you doing all this nonsense....
Maan: aww...
Geet looked at him with a worry face...
Maan: no mental pressure... Dr have advised.
Geet makes another cry face and looks outside.
Maan smirking...

Present...

Maan gets ready for office... He looks at Geet who was still in bed... Her cloths were all over the bed.
He sits next to her. Looking at her lovingly... Geet was still in deep sleep... No tension... Nothing...
Maan leaves after kissing her forehead.

After few hours Geet wakes up... Feeling a bit week. Even though she ate so much last night... Still not feeling good... And then suddenly... She holds the spread round and runs to the loo. Morning sick...
She took a cold shower and walks out. Goes through wardrobe to find some cloths to were.

Geet doesn't attend office anymore after she fainted in a meeting. Maan was furious and told her not to do any work. Just relax. She wonders round the mansion. It's empty. She was feeling lonely. Some reason she wanted maan to be with her. Dadi and Vicky was about to leave the house after Dadi discovered what his grandson was up to but after geets pleading both decided to stay in the outhouse. Maan restrictedly told her not to see them. As Dadi slapped maan. He was furious. Geet had nothing to do round. She just couldn't wait till her baby to be born. She is eagerly waiting for her delivery date. It was still 3 months way... But... She sighed and thinks about her past....

Past...

Geet walks in to her house. It wasn't the mansion... Another house... Maan specially brought it for geet.
Nurse and ward boy takes maan in and makes him comfortable in the living room... He was perfectly fine but now and then he faints.
Everyone leaves...
Geet wonders round... "there is only one bedroom! Where is the gust room?" maan smirks!
Maan: there are no other bedroom or gust room.
Geet: I know you are doing this on purpose. I will sleep in the living-room.
Maan: as you wish.
Geet didn't like the tone of his voice. She knew well there is something cooking in his brain. But what?... she wonders...
Geet walks in to the kitchen... Starts to cook something... Maan shouts From the living room... "I only love Italian!"
Geet smirks... She cooks something completely different...
Sits right in front of him and starts eating...
Maan: where is my food?
Geet: but I can't cook Italian. Only Indian.
Maan: where is my Indian then?
Geet: oops... I only can cook for one.
Maan looks at her eating... He gets up and snatches the plate.
Geet shocked: what are you doing. I am not your wife go and make your own food.
Maan sits next to her, holding her tight in to his embrace...
Geet: what are you doing????... She shouts.
Maan: well the Dr knows you are my wife. The nurse.... The ward boy.
Geet: they are not here! Stop acting.
Maan: you are the one who is acting.
Geet: ugh...
She was about to walk off... Maan puls her... Geet lands on his lap...
She gets up instantly!
Geet: how dare you? Look ...
Maan: I am looking.
Geet: What is wrong with you? How many time do I have to tell you that I am not interested in you. I never was. I am not your wife. And whatever you thinking... Whatever!
Maan stands up and starts to walk towards her. he wasnt joking anymore...... Geet taking few steps back... bit scared..
Maan: firstly you have signed the registration paper which legally makes us husband and wife.
Geet: I didn't sign it. You signed my name with my hand.
Maan: which mean you signed it.
Geet: no! I haven't you made me.
Maan: secondly stop repeating.
Geet: I don't repeat.
Maan quotes her phrase: "I am not your wife!"
Geet looks at him irritated.
Maan: thirdly... You know I will win you one day.
Then why fight?
Geet gets really irritated... She tries to push him off but instead she falls on him and both lands on the sofa...

Maan smirks... He got exactly what he wanted... Geet on him... With strong eye look.... Both were lost....


Present....

The whole mansion was was empty... Geet had nothing much to do... She walks in one room after another...
Then she comes to a room that is locked. Geet suspicious... She tries to open it... But... One of the worker walks by...

Geet: why this room Is locked?
Worker: it have been locked for several year mam.
Geet: who have the key?
Worker: Dadima!
Geet: oh!
Worker: Bari Sab also may have one. He always have copy of every set of key.
Geet: alright.

Geet walks back to her room... Looks at Maans wardrobe... Opens some of the wardrobe and finds the key...
She walks back...
Geet wonders why it was locked. No room in the mason was locked then why this room... She opens it....

Maan gets a call from the Dr for geets routine check-up...
Maan leaves straight way calls Geet...

Geet was about to enter the room but one if the worker distracts her.
Worker: mam Bari sabe hi.
Geet nodes and takes the phone...
Geet: ha bolo...
Maan: hamko hospital jana parega for cheek-up.
Geet: tik hi.
Maan: I will be there in 20 minutes. Be ready.
Geet: ok...

Geet closes the door locks it again. Taking the key with her...

Maan picks her up.

Both were really exited to see there baby... It was moving... Maan holds geets hand but she removes it.
Maan gives an angry glare and holds it back forcefully.
Maan: is everything alright Dr?
Dr: perfect. The child and the mother both health.
Maan: any certain medication she should take?
Dr: no. Just make sure she eats plenty if food and calcium supplement.
Maan nodes.
Geet just observed her baby... She just couldn't wait...

Maan and geet drives off home...
Geet doesn't speak to him much and maan got used to that... But he still force her to talk sometime if he gets really irritated...

Maan: I will be out of town for few days.
Geet: ok!
Maan: everything you need or want... Just tell the workers.
Geet nodes....
Maan: after I come back I want you to talk to me properly! Otherwise you know how can I make you.
Geet looks at him angrily.

Both walks in to the house....
Geet gets so tirade now days just to even walk...
Maan: let me help you.
Geet: I am fine!
Maan gives her another angry glare then in one jerk he picks her up.
Geet: what are you trying to do?
Maan: don't make me do something stupid that will make you regret.
Geet kept quit.
Geet: why you trying to be nice. This won't change my mind.
Maan: who have told you I am doing this to change your mind.
Geet: then why are you doing this?
Maan: for the person I love and my child.
Geet looks way in anger.
Maan smirks: anyway... I just couldn't let my child to give you all the pain. Then what will I do. I have big plan for you ahead.
Geet: this is my child. And only my.
Maan: did you make the child by your self. I think you need another lesson to demonstrate how to make a child.
Geet: you are sick.
Maan: those words getting old.
Geet: those are the word describes you the best.
Maan: in your world only.
Geet: not just my everyones world.
Maan makes her relax on the bed... Kisses her forehead.
Geet: don't!
Maan: you don't refuse when I kiss everywhere at night.
Geet looks way in anger...
Maan: and I am not even forcing you... You reply to me with same pleasure and desire...
Geet: I thought you have to go.
Maan looks at her... Smirking... Could see her annoying face...
He sits down next to her... And whispers something in her ear.... She instantly turns bright red... He kisses her lips... With passion and desire. Geet couldn't control she puts her hand round his neck bringing him under the spread. Maan takes his shoes while kissing her... Making her relax on the pillow.... He tried his best not to put too much wait on the abdomen.... He travels down to her neck then Collar bone giving her shower of kisses... Loving her.... Being gentle and careful.... Geet loved it. She hated aggressive maan... One way she was loving this and one way she was petrified. What would happen when the baby is born... Will he go back to his old way.... Maan hides his face on her breast.... Biting leaking....
Geet looked at ceiling.... While holding maan close to her chest.... Will he be like the way he was....
Maan started to move with a rhythm... She moaned.....

After long time they broke apart.... Geet fell sleep in Maans arm.... He stroking geets back and thinking something...

Maan gets up and makes geet rest on the pillow... He had to leave for a urgent meeting to Mumbai... He quickly Slides the trouser back on... Then the shirt.... While looking at Geet sleeping...
He kisses her forehead and disperse.

Geet wakes up after hour or two.... She finds no maan... She laied back down.... Food was already on the side for her... She gets up... Covering her self with a spread and starts eating'.



Next: what's behind that room?? geet wonders'

past: geet is still stuck with maan


hay you all' hop you like this' loved all the comments' i will try my best to make it long.. as i don't update much' but i will try and there will be always an update in 1-3 days' i can't promise a day'. but i will try.

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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great update...........😊
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Great part..
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wow amazing update loved it ........... cant wait 4 the next update!!!!!!! continue soon
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Wow great updates... Please continues soon! :)
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Love loved the update can't wait for the baby to be born

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