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Posted: 14 years ago
plssssssssssss continue soon!!!..me dying to read nxt update!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Antara106

Ka7eela, when will you update...😔 i am crying, no, sobbing now...😭 all these past days I've visited here, hoping to read your update but find none... 🥺so please, please, please, please, pleaaaasssseeeee update soon...😃.



Originally posted by: ilove99


really post update fast.😃



hey you sweets🤗...crying! seriously!😲😆i will try to update soon😳

and thanks ..you just made my day😆
Edited by ka7eela - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

plssssssssssss continue soon!!!..me dying to read nxt update!!


hey Heena..i will try to update soon but am kinda busy right now..so bare with me😊
Edited by ka7eela - 14 years ago
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25- A Reason To Smile

"Abhay that was pretty lame"
She says giggling
"What!" he says puzzled
"Comparing movies with public display" she says smirking
He raises his eye brows and says mischievously
"Ok let's see! Aren't cinemas public places! Aren't actors' real people and then they getting intimate with each others and some times go over board! Wouldn't it be then considered tasteless public display too! Sometimes promoting lustful affairs as love, these actors are real people after all, and some of theses movies are not even age restricted" he logically says

"O God! You are so old fashion" says she teasing him
He chuckles "if I was! I wouldn't have kissed you would I?" and he pulls her towards him
"Abhay" she says in an embarrassed voice her face flushing in bright red now, trapped in his arms, he smiles
"I just don't find the logic about some of our society's behavior" he says looking down at her
"Abhay stop finding logic in everything, beside movies are different"
she says looking up at him
"Are they? But Seems they affect more, like now, I just want to do that last scene of jab we met"
He bends down his head to kiss her, and she buries her face in his chest he rests his head on hers affectionately
"That's not fair" he smirks
"life is not fair" she murmurs humoring him
Then they hear foot steps coming there side

Abhay looks up and gently pushes her away "let's go before another policeman gets a heartache because of us"
They walk hand in hand towards his car, he has parked it in an alley that's why she couldn't see it

"Very clever! You parked your car far away so I won't see you" she says as she sits inside the car
He smiles "now let's take you back to the orphanage and tomorrow we will leave to Dehradun"
"Abhay what's now? I mean after we get back to Dehradun what happens to us?"
"now we are together, you are my girl" he says touching her face gently
She smiles" and you are my guy"

Abhay looks at her deeply in eyes and says holding her hands " but Piya we have to be discreet about us till I tell my parents, they feel very hesitant of me being in a relationship with a human, so till I tell them in a proper way, we cant be open, I hope you don't mind, beside you too have to tell your friends about us I know they don't like me that much!" he smiles

"Ok Abhay! About my friends it's because they don't know you well like I do, once they do they will love you too" she says with confident
Then looks at him earnestly
"Abhay do you still have any doubts about us being together?"
"Do you?" he says gazing her deeply

"Never! Answer me please, if you have any let's sort them out now and never look back"
He looks at her silently
She takes his hands in hers and presses them tightly "tell me Abhay, I don't want you keep anything away from me"
he closes his eyes "Piya do you really know what you are getting into by being with me?"

"I know Abhay and I am 100 percent sure"
He smiles sadly"100 percent! You are only 17 now Piya no one can be 100 percent sure when they are 17, most of the time the emotions are hormonal driven"
"Hmm so you mean your emotions are hormonal driven too" she giggles
"I am not kidding! I am serious Piya! What if tomorrow you feel that this all was a big mistake"
she leans towards him and hugs him and says with teary eyes
"Never! Abhay, no one knows what tomorrow happens, but I know this much, I love you more then life it's self, I can't imagine my life with out you"
He embraces her" promise me if tomorrow you have any doubts you will be open about them Ok?"
"I promise" both look at each other smiling

As they reach the orphanage he looks at her and says" so what time do you want me to pick you up tomorrow morning?"
She looks at him and leans to his side and puts her head on his shoulders, he smiles and wraps his arm around her
"I don't want to go Abhay, let me stay with you"

He gently pushes her away swallowing" go where Piya? Dehradun?"
She giggles "no silly, I meant I don't want to spend the night in the orphanage, I want to be with you"

"Piya!" he says raising his collars like he is nervous "yeh galat hai woh be shadi sai behlai" he says teasing her backing off away from her
She blushes and squints her eyes" shut up Abahy! I don't mean that we.."
He smiles mischievously "we what?"
She hits his arm and he chuckles

"You and I alone! do you think that would be a good idea?" he teases her raising his eye brows
"Why not! We were together in that cottage too last night? beside I trust you,
But Abhay we don't know how it will like when we go back home, and when we will have time to spend together again, and you said that we can't be open now about our relationship" she says with a sad tune
He smiles stroking her cheek with his thump, she closes her eyes "don't worry? do you think that I will be able to manage my days without seeing you? ok if you don't want to sleep in the orphanage tonight then go on and bring your stuffs, but what will you tell the sister?"

She grins "don't worry I will figure something out, I will be right back" She runs towards the door
Abhay sighs watching her, Piya how could you love me so much!
As she gets back in the car" so what did you tell her? And did she buy it?" asks Abhay
She grins" I said that I will be staying with a friend"
"ah you told a lie! That too to a nun! How could you commit such a sin! Bad girl" he teases her
"huh! I didn't lie, you are my friend aren't you?"

He smirks "I bet you told her I was a female friend!"
She giggles "so! I just left out a minor detail"
He chuckles, shaking his head
"So where are we going?", says she excited
"Where do you want to go? The choice is yours" he says smiling
"I don't care as long as I am with you!" she says in an excited tune , he looks at her fondly
"there are many hotels here choose any of them"
"I don't want to go to a hotel what will they think seeing me with you?"
"Hmm do you really want me to answer this?" he smirks
"No! Hey Let's go the beach" she says excitedly
He chuckles" do you want us spend the night in the beach? why do you care what people say! Beside we will take two separate rooms so it will be ok"
He says
"Two separate rooms! Then what's the point of us being together!" she says disappointed
He gives it a little thought then says "ok I have a better place "
"Where?" she asks
"It's a surprise, but let's first buy something's for you"
He stops in super market she buys some water and food items and then they drive off

"Where are we?" says Piya looking at the huge elegant building with a huge fountain in front of it
he smiles grabbing the bags "we have a pent house in this building, my dad stays here whenever he has some business affairs in Mumbai and I too whenever I come here" says he
She walks in front of him" so why were you talking about hotels then?"
"Hmm cause being alone with you in a place like this didn't seem quite a bright idea"

She looks innocently at him" why?"
"You will see! But are you still sure that you want to Be alone with me! Aren't you afraid I might take mokaika faida, I will take advantage of you?" he says mischievously
"Abhay you had plenty of opportunities to do that but you didn't" she says.
He chuckles "you sound disappointed!"

"You wish! What I meant is that I trust you" nervously she says
"Think of it Piya! A young girl and a young boy, so much in love alone in a deserted house! it's your funeral! Don't say I didn't warn you!" he says playfully with a grin in his face she stops walking looking doubtfully at him now

"Having cold feet already?" says he with a smug smile
"Abhay stop pulling my leg!" she says now feeling very nervous and a bit worried, what if he was right! The temptation is high, what if something really happens, she knows she loves him so much that she won't be able to stop him if and., she swallows hard and bites her lips

He looks back at her and then laughs "God! You should see the look in your face! Thank you for having so much faith! So should I take you back to the orphanage?"
She knew he was playing with her and thought; how I could not trust him, he always was a true gentleman with me! She walks by passing him "are we going to chitchat here or get inside"

He smirks, she turns around looking at him "Abhay you are way too old fashioned, so I am sure you will never cross the line"
He chuckles "who said I was talking about me! It's you, I am afraid of! Who will rescue me, from your seductive eyes" he says teasing her
"ha ha very funny" says she
as they reach inside
"Come we will use the stairs"
"But it's almost 20 floors Abhay"
"So! Who said you have to walk"

He hugs her pulling her up off of the ground she gasps "hold on to my neck" he says, she wraps her arms around him

Then he walks up the stairs in speed, sometimes jumping very high, she felt like she was flying and felt very ticklish so she laughs feeling the adrenaline rush, like she was in an amusement park ride, but instead of being seated securely she was secured in Abhay's strong arms and that thrilled her even more, feeling her laughter, he laughs too
As they reach the last floor where his pent house was, both were breathless and laughing

"Gosh Abhay! That was such a rush and so much fun!" she says panting
"Do you want another go!" he says amused by her excitement
"No, thanks! I had enough excitement for one day" She says catching her breath
He smiles and playfully says "but we have just begun" and they get inside the pent house.



Edited by ka7eela - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭😭please post fast😭😭

🤢🤢dying to read it🤢🤢
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Posted: 14 years ago
please kaela upload it plz crying here
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Posted: 14 years ago
Crying it the morning dat too for update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

😭😭please post fast😭😭


🤢🤢dying to read it🤢🤢





Originally posted by: shnehi

please kaela upload it plz crying here


OG!😳😆 thank you all for eagerly waiting for the update,🤗 will try to update both ff today😳 ..just bare with me
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ka7eela






OG!😳😆 thank you all for eagerly waiting for the update,🤗 will try to update both ff today😳 ..just bare with me


but when??😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
continue na kaheela dear plsss !!!

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