Re: 9th and 10th update!
Hey yaar, I was feeling extremely stressed out cuz, of my exams so, I thought about taking a break and just relax reading your updated one-shots as it always takes me to a different world. 😊
I haven't caught up to the serial yet so, I don't know if the Raichand's family background/history has been revealed yet or not. But, reading your version of it was just WOW! It was amazing how perfectly you narrated the story of the Raichands and how it completely fits the story's plot. It explains the playing around with the names "Chand" and "Raichand. And now, I am sure they must have used the surname "Rai" in the past too. 😉 It also, clarifies Abhay's sense of aloofness towards his parents and how they in a way control his life and how he should behave or what he should do?
Now, coming to the 10th update. Piya's emotions were just absolutely beautifully portrayed. I mean it was just outstanding the way you captured her thoughts, feelings, and her every move.......I honestly could completely sense her character. When Piya expresses her thoughts about the struggles/obstacles she faced in her life like her losing out the love of her father's and losing her mom and how she talked about still being able to take the pain and live with it.........at that second, I could feel a lump in my throat and my heart just melted just feeling the pain she was feeling.
At the same time, it made me realize that the most important thing in life is love and everyone wants to be loved whether that love is in the form of one's family, lover, friends, siblings, etc. It's the only definition and purpose to life.
And how without that, one can feel like they have nothing at all. It was beautiful how you expressed this thought. This is a fictional story but, in reality I know there are girls like Piya out there and I wish that girls like Piya should get all the love and happiness they want in their life and someone who can fill those gaps in their lives to make it complete. It saddens me to see how much she is hurting inside and how everyone around her has their own families to go back home to while having no one she can go to except to Misha (but, still with Misha it still isn't the same as having your own family where you can be whoever you want without the need to be well-behaved or formal). I just wished that everyone in this world can have someone that they can go back home to or that one person to get all the love in the world from.
I liked how you showed the parallel between both Abhay and Piya's stories. Both of them, have felt hurt and pain in their lives in their own ways. Both, truly have no one they can completely open up their hearts to or understand their deepest feelings like no one else can. And both, didn't have a normal family life to get all the comforts, joy, fun that most youngsters have. I loved this comparison how two people coming from two different worlds can have so much similarity with each other.............and how they would find and fill that void of love in each other's lives will be completely breathtaking to see.
Sorry for the long analysis, but I couldn't help but, notice the beautiful message that you portray in each of your writings. I truly feel, that great writers even when telling a story portray some kind of message in their writing to give to the reader. Love your writing style and way of portraying the story!
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Lots of Luv, Payal👍🏼
Edited by lighteningbuzz - 14 years ago
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