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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
can u pm me when u update please??????
it's really good
Armaan...twilight?? hmmm =)
love ArSh😍
continue soon =D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

hey addd me in ur pm list...i really loved ur concept..................bcoz there r other ff writer....who potray sid or ridz or ammy aas a negative character.....which is not accepted...v all love dmg only bcoz there was no negative character in the seriel....no offfense....to siddhima or arsh fans......i m not baised for AR....but still many ff just disgrac ridz 's character..i accept i m a die hard fan of AR...but still i dont hav problem with siddhima or arsh ...bring masti, fun ,love,romance ....atleast in ff....

write abt siddhima and arsh both of us
dont keep grudge with any of this character
keep ridz as the same sweet, simple girl...
make her and sid ..armaan 's frnd...
just ridz never thought anthn bad abt armaan ...she always considered shilpa as a immature and a irresponsible gir..which led her to keep shilpa away from armaan...whatever it is let 's dont discuss abt that
the main point ..
bring masti..mazk and fun....back...plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
bring sisterly love between ridz and shilpa
first make armaan our old ammy...then make him to fall for shilpa
then make sid to play cupid between ammy and shilpha..do some thn more interesting
or play with atul and anji character.....just take this all as a suggestion
but u r a wonderful writer
but plz dont ridz as a negative chaacter.........



just pm me if u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
loved ur ff
awesome updates
keep it up
continue soon
add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
hey
why did u stop ??????????
plz update...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
hey
luvd d story so far
cont soon n do add me 2 ur pm list
tc
shaaz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
😊Hey guys here is part 4. sorry for the long interval but seriously i had no inspiration left to write it but i guess my new laptop gave me the inspiration to write it again. hope you like my amateur writing. happy reading to all and sorry once again.😊

part - 4

Next few days pass in peace with armaan getting more and more attracted to shilpa. Riddhima and sid also have a steady relationship but at times seeing armaan getting closer to shilpa does irritate ridz. Armaaan and shilpa have become good friends now. Although they do play pranks on each other and have fights at times but get it sorted easily.

One fine day armaan is sitting in the locker room and thinking about the new feelings that erupt in his heart around shilpa. But could not pinpoint the cause.so he thinks of going out with shilpa and spending time with her alone so he could be sure of his feelings. Just then shilpa comes.

S- hi armaan

A – hey! What's up? How was our day? You look pale.

s- thoda hectic tha. Aur tumhara?

a - thik tha

ummm shilapa main tumse kuch poochna chahta tha

s- haan bolo armaan

a- Woh shilpa um ,kya tum mere saath bahar chalogi?

s- bahar?

a- Ya just a casual dinner! (realising shilpa's discomfort)

shilpa – ok

a- to kal chalein?

Shilpa nods in a yes.

a- done then kal shaam 8 baje. I'll pick you up.

s- alright

Next day at 6 in the evening.

@armaan's room

A – (to himself) – kya pehnu kuch samjh mein nai aa raha! White ya black. I think black nai nai white nai black hi pehenta hoon. (realizes what he is thinking). Oh god! ye mujhe kya ho raha hai! main shilpa ke saath sirf dinner par jaa raha hoon. Uske liye itne conscious kyu ho rha hoon. Kya ho raha hai mujhe? Kahin main shilpa se pyaar to nai nai aisa nai ho sakta. Main sirf riddhima se pyaar karta hoon aur usse hi karta rahoonga.par phir shilpa ke liye ye feelings? Uske karib aane par dill ki dhadkan ka tej ho jana! Uski choti si chot par mujhe dard hona! uski smile dekhkar khush ho jana? Kya hai ye sab? Oh god main bahut confused hoon. Kya ho raha hai mujhe?

@shilpa's house

s- armaan ka favourite colour hai red. I hope use ye acha lage. (actually she is wearing a beautifu red churidar)she has minimal makeup on as she didn't want to overdo it.as it is just a normal dinner(at least she thought it to be one for armaan but she herself was very nervous about it)Her thoughts were broken by the horn of a car. She comes down running but composes herself before opening the door. S- (to herself)calm down shilpa. Take a deep breath... yeah now open the door.

Opening the door she finds armaan standing there looking dashing in that black shirt and denim. Here armaan's breath gets stuck seeing shilpa. He keeps gazing at her. As shilpa comes near he could just utter "beautiful".shilpa hears and blushes.

s- hi

a- huh! hi! To chalein

s- ya sure

armaan opens the door for her like a perfect gentleman. Shilpa sits in and then armaan goes to the driver's seat.

At the restaurant. They are sitting on opposite chairs talking about anything and everything.

a- so what would you like to have?

s- whatever you say

a- nai you decide. Tumhara favourite chinese hai na. Let's order something chinese

s- but you love continental so let's try that.

a- no let's have chinese. I've heard a lot about the chinese food of this place.

He calls the waiter and orders the food.

They eat the food and armaan tells her about his childhood and his internship days too. How he had fun with all his friends. For a change armaan does not feel sad remembering his times with riddhima while talking to her. In fact he felt very comfortable in sharing it with her.

After their dinner they plan to go for a drive. The drive was full of silence. There was no conversation between them ,no music, only the sound of the car could be heard. Shilpa had her eyes closed and was lost in the thoughts of armaan. Her hair kept on coming to her face disturbing her thoughts because of the open window. And armaan was busy stealing glances of her. He was mesmerised to see shilpa's innocence. Due to the disturbance shilpa opens her eyes. Armaan quickly looks away so as to not get caught. Suddenly shilpa shouts in excitement "ice-cream" making armaan jump in his seat.

a- shilpa kya hua? Tum thik to ho? (he could not hear what shilpa shouted.) tum itni jor se kyu chilayi?

s- armaan ice cream. Chalo na plzz ice cream khate hain. Plzzz

a- what ttum itni jor se sirf isliye chillayi. Oh god! Shilpa you're such a kid.

A – kya armaan icecream hi to khilane bol rahi hoon. Aur isme kid ki kya baat hai? Kya adults ice cream nai khate.

a- khate hain par uske liye itni jor se nai chillate

s- acha ab apna lecture band karo aur chalo

both of them go to the icecream parlour and eat their ice creams. While remembering the night when shilpa had fooled armaan into paying for all the food she ate and also stole his bike. Armaan gets angry at first but then both of them laugh remembering the incident. After this armaan drops shilpa home.

At night shilpa keeps cherishing the dinner where armaan opened up so much of his past to her and that too without any compulsion but remembering his chilhood talks she fells sad as it reminded her of her past where she had to live in an orphanage as both her parents died in an accident. And her only living relation does not even know about her.

After two days:-

It's shilpa's birthday today. But no one knows about it except herself. In the hospital.

All of them go for their briefing session and they are informed that there will be a visitor coming to inspect sanjeevani before his company finance the hospital. After getting the duties everyone goes off . armaan and shilpa stay at the nurse station coz they had some work. Shilpa was updating her file but in between she continuously kept on checking her mobile. (she has kept her moblie on silent mode.)

She was doing her work but her mind kept on drifting back to the phone as she was eagerly waiting for a call. Armaan was checking some reports.

Just then someone from behind

Man- Dr. shilpa malhotra?

Shilpa turns around – yes!

The man on seeing her says hello girlfriend! Coming for a ride?

s- huh! Who are you? And how dare you? Just then she realises who the man was and hugs him tight.

Armaan is shell shocked. He thinks" who is this this man? and why is shilpa reacting like that? Why is she hugging him?" just then he realises what he is thinking and starts talking to himself- what am I thinking! Why am I bothered seeing shilpa hug that man? Am i getting jealous. But how can i be jealous for shilpa.

Armaan is angry whereas shilpa and the mystery man are too happy.

Precap – armaan celebrates shilpa's birthday and the relationship between shilpa and the mystery man is revealed. But wait there is a twist in the tale.

Stay tuned for more fun and of course a heavy dose of arsh.😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Ammy new feeling 2wards shilpa...great plz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was really amazing...

who is this mystery man...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
hey awesome ff..
plz add me to d pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear...I just caught up this ff..i am so amamzed by ut creativity...looking forward to how armaan celeb6es shilpa;s brthday...plz pm me when u update...

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