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Posted: 14 years ago
SOUMYAAAA *hugs&* first of all, I m soo soo sorry for commenting so late. I m like SUPER BUSY! ;( dont even askk.
but I m lovingg BOTH updates soo so much :DD
AHH! maaneet scenes. I loveeeeee muskaan soo soo much. How geet got scaredddd of cookie..haahh..and she got close to Maan...Aww! soo cutee.
love how maan wass proud of Geet..and I like this Geet..confident & intelligent..An independent women! :D loveeeee vicky&pia as always..
Vicky&Muskaan scenes..haah! they fight too much..lols..
I love Kiaaa..we need some three bahu's scenes..NT / Geet / Kia..
I want to see a strong bonding between them..
Precap loooks sooo..ahhhh!! love is in the air..I m guessing..a Kiss? lols..
Maan IS spoilingg muskaan too much..haha! :P
Moree maaneet scenes,bhabhi&devaar (geet&vicky)..
vicky&geet teasing maan scenes..?
More family partiess...and some sari scenes between maaneet..
Kia/NT/Geet scenes in the kitchen and then all three boys..romancing..with their wives..
MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREE!!
We some SOME heavyy WEEKEND DOSE! :D
& take your time. no rush at all. take care.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ur both update......
now i realize that it wasn't entire Geet's fault to leave Maan.........it was that NT😡
plz update soon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part, loved it immensely!
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Posted: 14 years ago


soumya . how r u dear.


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"tuo chod kyun nahi dete!" yelled geet.

"chod bhi tuo nahi sakta, pyaar jo karta'." And stopped. The expressions that had been hidden all this while, in his heart, had found words today.

"I did not know! Kyunki tum gharam gharam thi, mujhe laga, ice-cream will calm you down! And I also heard you do your famous self-talk", he said.

"tuo aap bhi gharam gharam hai. agar maine aapko ice-cream diya tuo aap cool ho jayenge aur mujhe maaf karenge?"

He gave her a sarcastic smile and opened the door, "Everything does not come so easy in life, geet! Try harder, you're fighting a battle to win Maan Singh Khurana", he said and went back into his bedroom and fell onto his bed.

Geet mimicked his words, "you're fighting a battle to win Maan Singh Khurana". She shook her head and sat on the bed and ate the ice-cream talking to herself, "attitude tuo dekho! chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye, Maan Singh Khurana ka attitude nahi jaane wala."

"mujhe laga ki'!", and Maan answered it for her, "u thought you were dreaming about me again?"

"haan!", she said, rubbing her eyes and Maan smiled and she corrected herself, "mera matlab hain, nahi!"

She ran away, with Cookie following her, closely. Geet fumbled as she spoke, "b'day gift mein koi khutte ko gift karte hai kya?aap bhi na!".

hmmm!", she said, "I wanted to go out for dinner. But you did not agree. Mujhe kahin nahi jaani".

"Muskan, asked for it. That's why I agreed, geet!", he justified.

"hmm, tuo aap dono jaeye!", she said, trying to move away from him.

"hum che saal se wahin kar rahe hain, geet! mujhe laga is baar, shayed kuch alag hoga. Muskan ke saath, uski maa bhi hogi", he said, sadly releasing her.

Geet looked at him and he looked back. Geet said, "theek hain! Main bhi chalungi, Muskan ke liye".


He looked at her, while holding his spoon loosely in his hand. She threw the new spoon away and grabbed the spoon, from which he had eaten.

She ate the ice-cream from his spoon and he looked on. She texted him, in between, "I would have preferred eating the ice-cream, in other ways and not just from your spoon. But since, you are not okay with me, I have to stick to this!"


"Oho, madame ji, maan khurana aur geet khurana, the most happening and hot couple ke life mein koi spice nahi hai? aise kaise ho sakta hai?"

"nahi baby. I have some work and then I have to go home. Waise papa aur unke love of the life ke beech mein, what will I do?" she said, angrily.jealous.


Not sure when the next update will follow


waiting for next




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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the updt...specially woh cookie and geet getting scared wala scene..

btw...I almost missed your updt coz you did'n update the title...so plz add me to your PM list...i don't want that happening again😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey SOUMYAAAA
Thank u so much ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
first of all, I m soo soo sorry for commenting so late. I m like SUPER BUSY! ;( n thanks for replay me love u so much
AHH! maaneet scenes. I loveeeeee muskaan soo soo much. How geet got scaredddd of cookie..haahh..and she got close to Maan...Aww! soo cutee. n maan care too geet even now he is angry with her😉😉😉😉😉
love how maan wass proud of Geet..and I like this Geet..confident & intelligent..An independent women! :
n suprise the shasha I hope in serial she is chenge after some time n being a godd human being 😆😆😆😆😆😆
Vicky&Muskaan scenes..haah! they fight too much..lols..
Precap loooks sooo..ahhhh!! love is in the air..I m guessing..a Kiss? n more hope u accept our wishes lols..
Maan IS spoilingg muskaan too much..haha! :P
Moree maaneet scenes, n some maan jelouse scenes😉😉😉😉😉plsssssssssssssss
vicky&geet teasing maan scenes..?
MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREE!! we want MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREE😭😭😭😭😭
We some SOME heavyy WEEKEND DOSE! :D
so pls fulfull our wish n try to udpate in this weekend n rocks the weekend plssssssssssss
I knw u r super bussy but phirbhi hamara haq to banta haina
so plsssssssssssssssssssssss
update
update
update
update
update
update
update
update
update
update in this weekend
love u😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooh great parts! thanks for the pm :) good work
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
maan almost confessed his love for geet.
loved maaneet moments with muskan.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
so cute one
maan just stopping at the nick of the sentence
n geet -muskaan ice cream eating n maan finishing it 😊
n geet presentation was good n maan stalking her
n maan saying love of my life to muskaan before geet😆😆
gr8 part
con soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
souyma this Maan singh khurana is one hard nut to crack, but Geet will break him down eventually

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