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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 64


maan - sleep in my room
geet - woh theek nahi hoga & goes to her room
he was taken aback with her refusal, but thats what he always wanted
but why is he not able to bear it himself. he kept quite
it was almost a month since there wedding geet was maintaining her distance
trying to keep herself happy cooking for him & learning thing in office
having her around & not being close to her was killing him

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_dS15TEuQcU[/YOUTUBE]

it was sunday afternoon geet decided to bake his fav chocolate cake

maan was working on the project with sasha, adi & his new secertary pari in the study
geet followed all the instruction given by daadi
she poured the mix in the baking tray & placed it in the oven
baby~mama yeh chocolate cake hi hain na
geet~tere saamne toh banaya maine
baby~cake toh cake hota hain, yeh to paste lag raha hain
geet~wait kar bake hone de
it was way passed lunch time & maan wondered why geet did'nt call for lunch
he became restly wondering if she had anything, he came looking for her
geet was clearing the place. the mess she had created, she was tempted to taste the batter
she dipped her finger around the vessel & licked it, & found it really yummy
she sat down behind the slab facing the oven & started licking the left over in the bowl
hardly anything left though. murmered pata hota itna tasty hoga to thoda nikal ke rak deti

baby~mama yeh to cake se bhi acha hain
geet~hain na
maan went to her room & then came to the kitchen she was not be seen any where
he turned to leave when he heard her mumer, he went behind the slab & peeped to
see what she was upto, he suprised & adored how cutely she sat there licking her fingers
there was flour all over her & around the kitchen. he knew she was upto trying some
thing new yet again, he smiled at her innocence
maan - yahi tumhara lunch hain kya
she got scared & jumped up droping the vessel on the floor at his sudden question
geet - hain ..nahi..mera matlab hain she got scared
maan - yeh kya haalat bana raka hain
geet - ji main woh, still trying to lick her fingers
maan came close to her, without thinking she lifted the vessel & slide around to gather a
layer of cake mix in the tip of her index finger & offered him.
geet - aap taste karoge
their gaze met. woh darr se gayi usse dekh, kahin woh mana na karde, kahin naraaz na ho jaaye

uski ankhon ki gehraayi mein kho si jaati, samajh nahi paayi, uske jasbaaton ko
uski ankhein maano kuch aise ghare horahi thi, laga ki shayad koi dard ho maano
then wondered why would he get hurt with her offering mix.
she tried reading his face, his eyes, his straight lines his firm jaw
mujhe bhi pure duniya main yahin mile the kya babaji, pyaar karne ke liye
kuch samajh nahi aata inke mann mein kya chal raha hain
kuch pal yunhi khoye rahe, maano waqt tham sa gaya ho, madhoshi ka samaa chaane laga ho

he leaned forward and took the mix in his mouth. His warm lips closed around her index finger,
his tongue swept her skin clean. tingling rippled through her, from her hand clear down to
that secret place that longed for him. His eyes held her captive. Slowly, as if he
feared she would move away like always, he raised his hand to her face. He cupped her chin,
touching her adoringly. She wanted to weep at his gentleness at first then she fluttered her
eye lashes.

He brushed off the flour from her hair, over and over again. she looked at his lips, parting hers almost begging to take them in. they just want to be in each others arms. they could feel the strain with in pushing them forward, still they haven't moved a inch, their heart ached to express each other she almost thought of telling him that she really loves him
oh what a mess!!! said pari intruding their moment. geet was offended
maan moved his hand down from her hair & looked towards the voice
geet also looked at her scanning her dress, every thing about her was like maans taste
her high heels, short knee length dress perfectly shaped curves & her confidence
geet cleared her throat & looking at maans silence - I don't like strangers entering my
kitchen, so could u please.
pari was taken aback & felt insulted & walked out to the study
maan - how could u be so rude
geet did'nt bother to answere him & walked to her room
maan followed her to the room shouting geet geet!!!
maan barged into the room - geet I am asking u something
she kept quiet, her silence was making him wild...dabe hve ehsaas maano beqaaboo ho kar aur bhi gussa dila rahe ho maano, kis baat pe naraaz tha, uske pari pe naraaz hone par, yah uske jawab na dena par, geet ko yun door hota, maano bardasht nahi kar pa raha tha
maan banged the door & yelled - GEET
she still did'nt seem to react ..continued cleaning her self
maan - mera ghar hain, main jise chahe yahan bula sakta hoon, if u have a problem then just leave
geet looked at him he closed his eyes & turned cursing himself for saying something like that
geet - I am not going anywhere, biwi hoon aapki
he was relieved but still did'nt seem to budge - main hi chalein jaata hoon
geet - cake khake jaana
maan rolled his eyes helplessly, kya keh paata usse, uspe thodi khud pe naraaz tha
kaise keh gaya woh aisi baat usse, kabhi na maaf kar paata khud ko shayad
he asked every one to leave & went to pack his bag
geet checked the cake & took it out of the oven & packed it in a box for him
maan put his back bag on the jeep. she came near te jeep na jaane kyun chahti ki use rok le, lekin uske rokne se kya woh ruk jaate? she put the box in the front seat & went inside
na apni taqdeer se naraaz tha
na us khuda se naraaz tha
khich di jisse khud apne hathon ki lakerein
aaj us kalam ki siyahi se naraaz tha
na uski behruki se naraaz tha
na uski diye hue dard se naraaz tha
jo dard khud apne daaman main laga liye
aaj wo daaman ke daagdaar hone se naraaz tha

precap
distance makes love stronger!!!

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Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski.. loved it yaar.. I am really liking this Geet.. but hope she won't do anything stupid liek earlier when he is away... I want Maan to get out of all the confusions.. btw, Geet was lil bit rude to Pari... but it's ok.. ..hope Geet managed to bake the cake well..😆😆😆

Now you have put me on cliff hanger.. pls update soon and yeah.. you owe us 2 updates today 😆😆😆
Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWWW Awesome yaar Muskan!!
Best line was 'main hi chala jaata hoon
cake khake jaana"!!!
Super AWESOME
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautifull update.........
i loved it!!!!
pls update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago

i love this Geet she turning everyday bold & how she keep distance from Maan & that pari got her answer excellent update pls cont soonnnnnnnn

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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet..instead of telling don't go,,she said Cake khake jana..
Why they can't talk..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Loved the update!!!!!!!!
Madhoshi aajkal mujhe madhosh kar raha hai,
I simply love the way Geet is living upto her,
Maan has completely lost it,
I am so happy for her, she started even cooking,
And the answer for Maans stupid attitude was awesome
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update muskaan.. please one more update today!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

di awesome update ... finally Geet has learnt to cook i think... yummm chocolate cake...batter..yummy.......so distance is going to make their love stronger... and i love Geet's attitude..

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow! Lovd ur update, best thng nw is geet's growin confidence around him, no more scard of his anger,lovd her attitude i like d way she avoids him n maintain distance. Plz cont soon

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