have been readin updates as i cant resist them
but was very busy so didnt leave any comments
for the last few updates
alot of things happened in this ff,maneet
gettin married but wht really hurts for the
fact maan forgot geet is very young and naive
and cant live without him
when they could spent nights 2 geter b4 marrige
with each other which they shuldnt have
done then whts his problm now
that he refuse2 stay with geet in the same room
it was ok hug and cuddle b4 marriage but
now that they r allowed 2 do all these things
without any restrictons
he have come up with theidea of keepin
away frm geet
geet was much better at her own home where
she was loved and taken care of by all and every
body and here she only wants one person 2 b
with her and waht did he do abadon her and left
her to b lonely
no fair.dont like this tanhai tanhai thing b/w them
and whts there problem why have they not come 2 ther
terms that they love each other.
maan needs 2 stop mishandlin geet and its enough
now how dare he pushed her out of his room
not fare muski
u need to engulf them in mist of their madhoshi
which have much more deeper meanin for them ,
each other.u need to brin their souls together 2
bond them into a life of joy and happiness
muski u need 2 make this heart breakin
separation of their veryyyyyyyyyyyy short
iss jahan mein gham kam hai kya muskan
kai ab apke ff mein bhi kushi dodhane
pe bhi na mila
Edited by dreaminvincible - 15 years ago
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