Maneet FF : You Belong to Me... Part 5...pg 47 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks a lot for all you comments... I am sooo happy that you liked my FF.... thank youuuuu...... I try to update soon each part...

Part 2

Maan tries to call her.... but she didn't answer the phone...

It has been three hours... but geet has not returned back... Maan was searching for her the whole office... asked everyone.... but no answer... he started to get worried.... then he called meera...

Maan: Hello Meera... do you know where is geet?

Meera: Yes maan... i know..

Maan: tell me where is she?... is she okay??...

Meera: Maan... clam down... Geet is in hospital now....

Maan was shocked.... was not able to stand on his feet... he just broke down in his chair....

Maan:What?... what happen to her...I am coming right now...

He ran outside the office and took his car... he drove the car very fast as if his life is going away from his hands.... he got really worried... his eyes were wet... his face was full of tension...He remembered all the most wonderful moments with geet.... he never thought that she would end up in hospital because of him.... he cursed himself badly....

There was traffic ... he stopped his car.... he shouted the car before him to move... he was in full tension don't know what he is doing.... meanwhile a flower seller came near his car.....he first rejected... but as that flower seller was about to leave he called him back and he bought the flowers... red roses for geet.... he remembered the red flower she kept aside his bed when he was in hospital... he touched those rose petals and felt the softness of geet....

For a second he heard someone calling him...."Maan".. he turned and saw geet sitting next to him... he felt very happy to see her....She kept her hand on his face and smiled... he took one rose from the bouquet and touched her face with the flower... he moved that flower all over her face.... he kept that rose near her lips... he came near her to kiss her... he touched her rose lips... and when he was about to kiss her... she was gone... He heard shouting from outside to move his car.... he yelled back... his eyes again filled with tears and cannot handle himself... his hands were shivering.... he started his car... he just hit back of one car.... his hands were not in his control.... he worried how is geet now??... what happen to her...

" Am sorry geet.... how are you now.... don't leave me and go.... pls geet.... your my life.... i cant live without you.... i cant....."

He reached the hospital... and ran towards the reception and inquired about her...

He ran towards her room and found meera and dadi outside...

He came near them and he put his hands on Meera's shoulders and asked..

Maan: Where is geet?... what happen to her?...

Meera: Maan... i never expected that your ego will be to this extent.. You were keep on giving her work not even thinking about her condition... Since last week incident.. Geet didn't take her food properly and today she never touched a glass of water...can you realise because of the work you gave she was totally concentrating to finish the work rather than eating....

Dadi: Beta.... kyun tumne aise kiya??... you didn't remember the geet was pregnant...? why Maan..?

Maan stood as a culprit in front of them...His legs were trembling....

Maan: Meera please tell me what happen to her... please...

Meera: She got fainted... she is really week now... and the baby is very week... doctor said that it is lucky this time... otherwise we would have lost the baby....

Maan gets shocked and curses himself...tears came down from his eyes.... dadi and meera were shocked to see Maan cry.... see tears in his eyes....

Maan: How irresponsible and stupid I am.... Ego covered my eyes and my heart... I was angry on her because she left me alone and not understanding me.... but instead explaining her in polite way.... I shouted at her... telling all nonsense.... and now i gave her so much work..not even thinking about her condition... how stupid I am....

Saying this Maan broke into treas...

Both Dadi and meera console him....

Meera: Maan please calm down.....I can understand your situation....go and meet geet now... go inside....

Dadi: Go inside Maan... she will be happy to see you....Go....

Maan opened the door and saw geet sleeping on the bed... he was not able to see her in this situation.....he went near her....sat next to her...

He took both of her hands and kept it near his forehead and started to cry...

Maan: Am sorry geet.... am really sorry....

Then he saw the locket tied in her hand... he opened it and saw the ring.... he took the ring and felt very bad for his actions....

"How did i behave with you... why didn't i believe you... i am very bad person geet...."

He was holding her hands as if his life is going away from him... i don't want to lose her any more....

Feeling wetness of his tears... geet opened her eyes...

Geet: Aap?..

She tried to get up... but was not able to..

Maan: Samble ke geet...No need sleep now...

He made her lie down...

Geet looking at maan and she started to cry....

Geet: Please forgive me.... how can i think like that about you.... you're the only reason i am alive now.... how can i insult you and hurt you....

Maan: What happen geet?...

Geet: Dadi ma came here... she told me that you didn't mean all those word that day when i came home and you gave bail for dev only for 2 hours and that to for dadima's sake.... but i misunderstood you and insulted you.... how can i??.... No I am not correct for you.... My mistake cannot be forgiven....

Geet was keep on cursing herself....and Maan keep his finger on her lips....

Maan: Chup.......No Geet it is not your falut.... anyone in that situation will do like that... i should be in control... but i said all nonsense to you and now gave you heavy work... i am wrong geet... i am totally wrong.....Am sorry geet...

Geet: No am sorry....

Maan: No Am sorry Geet....

Geet: No No am sorry...

Maan: Stop it... i said am sorry na....

Maan kept his angry face and turned his face....

Geet got up from the bed and turned back his face to her direction ... Kept her both hands on his cheeks and says..

Geet:Ok No sorry and you also don't say sorry....hereafter we both should not say sorry or thanks to each other OK...Mr.Dhust Danav

Maan: What??...Dhust danav??... Hmmmmm....Ok Miss.Hosiyarpur Express....and shall i say...Mrs Maan Singh Khurana....

He smiled...and she also smiled back....

She came close to maan... maan also came really close to geet.... she lifter her hand and slowly took it around maan's shoulders .... Maan pulled geet really close to him and gave a kiss on her forehead.... He took the roses he bought and he gave it to her....geet smiled... she took the flowers... and went near to him and gave a kiss on his forehead..He took the ring which he was having in his hands and he took her hand and we wore the ring on her finger...and kept his hand over her... said..

Maan: Never ever take off this ring... remember.... this ring is our unbreakable bond....the symbol of our true love...

She took the taveez which she kept in her bag... and she wore it around his neck... and says..

Geet: And also this.... it should be always with you... to protect you and also our love... this taveez always keep on bonding us... the symbol of our true bond....

He smiled and took his hands around her face.... he slowly moved his fingers towards her neck... she blushed and stopped him by keeping her hands on his....

slowly she rested on his shoulders and maan took her very close to him and hugged her very gently as he doesn't want her to feel pain.... but geet did not hesitate...hugged him very tightly and both got lost in the most passionate and tight hug after long gap of separation....


Precap:

Maan: Geet... it is not for your sake... there is some selfishness of me also..

Geet turned back and saw maan with puzzled face...


Hope you guys like it... pls do post your comments... I love to read all you wonderful comments....


Edited by bubblygal1711 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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