ANJAANA RISHTA.. Maneet FF.. Thread 1 - Page 40

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwww m sorry sorry sorry...... a bit late...... got busy with sumthing.... here is the update..... enjoy........
i din't reply to any of the comment after part 14....plz forgive me for this......😭.....i seriously din't get time, i'm soooo damn held up with studies......

Recap :-

Tu kya jaane, haan tu kya jaane

maan passes to geet......geet smiles inwardly & naughtily winks to maan n throws cushion to him....

Dil ki beqaraariyaan hai kya.......
cushion in maan's hand, he flattered his eyes.....he got confused..........music stops

everyone shouts out loud...........
geet smirks.....

Part 15 :-

Maan: yeh cheating hai....
Geet: naintara yeh dono bhai ek jaise hai kya....??? oh god... dev bhi apni turn pe aise hi chila raha tha "yeh cheating hai" (mimicking maan's voice).....
Maan in angry voice: GEET
Daadi: maan beta... aap bhi dev ki tarah bachkani harkate kar rahe hai...
Maan: daadi isne cheating ki hai.....
Geet smiled winningly: acha???? kya kiya maine..... batao???
Arjun: haan bro kya kiya geet ne.....???
maan kept quite
Daadi: maan beta, plz..... ab aap yeh maan lijiye ke geet hi winner hai..... aur ab geet hi aapko "dare" degi coz she won
geet had a victorious smile on her face....
maan gets up n walked off....
Geet shouts: haar gaye kya?????? (she said with a smirk)
Maan turned n snapped back: MSK kabhi nahi haarta....
Geet: lagta toh nahi hai....
Maan gets annoyed: tumhari galat faimi hai yeh...
Geet challenges: toh fir aao wapis...
maan gave up n comes back.....everyone's jaw dropped
Armaan: arjun... yaar acha hua maine isse shaadi karne se mana kar diya tha... oh god... agar THE MSK iske saamne haar gaya toh, hum toh kuch nahi hai....
Arjun: mai toh apni arohi se hi khush hun..
Dev: meri naintara toh best hai....
all laughed
Maan annoyingly: kya karna hoga mujhe..??
Geet rolls her eyes: pehle pyaar se pucho...!!
Maan fumed with anger: tum bata rahi ho ya mai jaun??
Geet smirked: acha thik hai.. sochne do mujhe..
Dev whispers into geet's ear: geet tell him "to propose someone".....bro will never do this thing.....i can bet (dev whispers coz he very well knew, if maan would have listen to his pathetic dare, he'll kill him for sure....)
geet giggles......n nodes for a no......
Geet to dev: nahi kuch acha sa batao....
Maan: mere paas itna time nahi hai...jaldi karo....
geet ignores him...
Armaan: geet...tell maan to seduce someone....
daadi slaps on armaan's shoulder
maan shot a glare at armaan....armaan shuts his mouth up.....
Dev: bro pretend that you are underwater for the next 10 minutes...
Naintara: veerji......................(she pauses)
Maan narrowed his eyebrow: what is it???
Naintara nodes for a no: nothing...
Geet to NT: i know sumthing fishy is going on in ur mind.... tell me....
NT whispers something.....geet burst out in laugh
Geet: mujhe marwaana hai kya??
Ridhimma curiously: kya kaha NT ne?? mujhe bhi batao.....
Arohi: haan mujhe bhi....
Geet whispers to them: naintara said that i should ask maan to "Smell the feet of everyone in the room and rank them from best to worst"
they all laughed out loud
Maan rolls his eyes: enough of all this..... tell me or else i'm going......
Geet: wait wait wait
Arjun: bro go on top of the roof and yell something really stupid
maan's eyes was fuming in anger....arjun closed his mouth quickly
Maan speaks to himself "iss ladki ke chakkar mein MSK aaj yahan baitha hai...grrrr....geet u just wait n watch....u have to pay for this...."
geet prayed to babaji "hey babaji iss Khadoos se bacha lena, aapko toh inka gussa pata hai na, pata nahi kaise react karenge mere dare pe..."
Geet: propose someone... (& winks at dev)
Maan's mouth fell down: whatttttttttttttttt?????????????
Geet: yea propose someone...... & now its ur wish, if u want to propose any guy, u can...!!! we don't mind n starts giggling
Maan: r u in ur senses...?? i'm not gonna propose anyone....
Geet: theek hai... haar maanlo...
Maan: no ways....
Geet: toh kisi ko propose karo...
Maan thinks "maan....isse acha mauka nahi milega......maan ise hi propose karde.....she'll feel embarrase infront of eveyone"
Maan: theek hai...
Geet bit shocked: toh kise kar rahe ho....?? i hope kisi ladke ko nahi karoge....😆
everyone giggled
maans gets up...walks towards geet....geet feels a bit uncomfortable....maan came close to her....he came more closer to her....she was losing herself...she had that feeling that maan will gonna propose her.....she was happy from inside but din't show her happiness.....maan came more closer.....she shied n look down......maan suddenly crossed over her n goes to ridhimma....geet got shcoked......she got angry....but why????😉
Armaan: yaar kya kar raha....mujhe propose karle, ridhimma ko mat kario....
maan stopped n goes towards arohi....
Arjun: bhai plz, aapki choti bhabhi hai yeh.... ise propose mat karna......
maan comes back to geet...geet gets up in a jerk.....maan bent down on his knee......extends his right hand towards geet....geet was mesmerized.....

Maan in very soft voice:
From the day I first saw you, I was smitten.....

Every day since then, my feelings have only grown deeper.....

You are everything flowers and hearts and sunshine and butterflies and rainbows......

All the magic and wonder in my world.

he gets up......moves closer to her.....she was soooooo damn lost in him......maan's hand unwillingly slides on her waist.....everyone was shocked to see this side of maan...theirs eyes poped out.....daadi was delighted....but she was feeling odd......maan tightens his grip on her waist......

Maan: You know why I hold on to you so tight?

Because life is a maze full of twists and turns and I want to get lost inside with you....

Because when I'm with you the world stops turning and gravity disappears and it's all I can do to stop floating away.....

I want to be the one you take great leaps with and face lightning storms with,

the one who holds you up above the waves and laughs with you all the while being drowned,

the one you split your desserts with,

the one who'll sit in the seat facing the wall so you can have your back to it,

the one who will push you around in shopping carts,

and the one who knows just how important it is to never put pickles in anything....

geet i can't live without you...

I keep on thinking about you from the moment we met...

I need you by my side to share and care.

I need you by my side to say how much I love you...

Nothings gonna change my love for you ever...

You are my happiness' You bring joy to my life...

You are my sunshine; my angel; be mine forever...

I love you, Geet

I love you for everything you are....

You would make me the luckiest man in the world if you would say yes to this next questions'.

Will you marry me?


geet fluttered her eyes....she stood rooted...she was dumbstuck......she had no clue what is happening, how to react, her heart beat was touching sky....she had soooooo many BF's in her life, but nobody made her feel this much special........her eyes welled up with tears......Tears of Happiness.....!! geet was overwhelmed..... tears started to roll down from her eyes.....everyone was shocked.....naintara faints..😆...maan get back to his senses....he saw geet's tears.....he took it in other ways....he thought that geet felt bad.....he spontaneously frees her n runs to his room.....he bang the door at his back....he holds his hair behind in disgust.....

Maan: yeh kya kiya maine... mai toh bas geet ko embarrase karna chahta tha... yeh kaisa ehsaas hai... yeh kaisa pagalpan hai... kyun geet ke saamne mai apne aap pe kaabu nahi rakh paata... kyun geet mein mai kho jaata hun... kyun geet ko dard hua toh, mujhe bhi dard ho raha hai... mai toh yehi chahta tha na, phir kyun mujhe bura lag raha hai... geet mere baare mein kya soch rahi hogi...??? mujhe kyun farak padh raha hai ke wo mere baare mein kya sochegi...

maan got angry on himself for doing such silly thing... he sat confused on his bed... on the other side, geet was not getting "what just happened....was maan really proposed her or was he just completed his dare..."
Geet thinks to herself "if it was just a dare, then why was his eyes glowing, the intensity in his eyes, the way they were twinkling as if they wanted to speak thousand things..."
Arjun: plz mujhe koi pinch karo.....
armaan slapped him
Arjun: oye..... saale pinch karne ke liye bola tha, thapad maarne ke liye nahi.....
daadi knew why maan did that... she knows maan very well...
Daadi: chalo bohot raat ho gayi hai... sab apne room mein jao...
everyone leaves quietly.... they were not in a state to say anything.....
geet stood there frozen
Daadi shook her: beta kya hua??
Geet came out of her thought: ji....
Daadi understood her plight: beta aap jaiye aur so jaiye... bohot raat ho gayi hai...
Geet nodes: ji daadi.... & left

Precap : taani and anurag in one room 😉

Edited by Manpreetmann - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwww
love the proposing style
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee update
totally love it
cant wait for next part
update fastttttttttttt
Edited by -sofiya- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg d intensity in d words tht maan propsed 2 geet was just superbbbbbbb luved ittttttt
it touched my heart would defenitily say yes if i was their &
awesomeeeeeee updateeeeeee
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it.
The proposal was so romantic.
The words he used were so deep. I was mesmerized reading this.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Now I am turning greedy.
Please update the next part super soon....
Wanna see Maaneet's reaction when they meet again and yes the precap sounds interesting.
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb episode. i loved the proposal

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