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No

Geet ur a good daughter

Today u need to know some details………………………………..

Geet.this is ur mother s photo when she is young

And fallen in love with a person for first sight……………………………………

They united at unknown circumstances…………………..

His world is different

They both married in a temple.

He went to his house …………………………to convince his parents

But his family didn't expect…………………..the fact.

So he thought of leaving his house ……………………but life took a turn…..

When……………………….your mother get know she is pregnant

.and ur grandmother……cannot take this……so to avoid the insult.

She took her daughter to some place where no one knows them.

And after few months u born.

And the person…………….ur father is searching for ur mother and u for different.years

He is very rich and affluent person.

He has everything. But he wants to have his daughter with him……………………………….

I know u hate him.

But not now.when he escaped a m ajor accident.

Major accident.

Yes geet

He is the famous politician ………….mohindar singh……….handa……………………………..

He is severely injured…………………………….in the hospital…………………………………..

He wanted to see u geet,

He came for me..to find u…

At the same time…………..ur maami also came…………………………….

And iu know all this

But how do u know that I had came after u ……………

That night ur burning with fever

And u spoke in …………………………..sleep

But I got to know

I thought u need so me time……………………………….

Geet cried.

And asked

Can I meet him…………………………………………

Yes…geet……………

We are going to meet him tomorrow……………………………………………

Nex tday morning

They both………………………………

Reached to the big mansion………………………………

a……………..person…………is lying in the bed…………………..

geet reached him.

The person open his eyes

To fin d his daughter

He hugged…………………

And the house is filled with happiness..

But she feared as she may loose maan..

As maan wanted to leave father and daughter alone.

But as soon as ……he leave he felt a tug.

Mr maan singh khurana.where are u going………………………………..

Geet u need to be alone……………with ur fathere

May be u fear to tell dadimaa that im ur wife

But I m not……………

So im going to tell him.that mr maan singh khurana is my husband

And im no longer miss geet handa but mrs geet maan singh khurana………………………………

And behave like a good damaad and be here…………….

Other wise

Other wise.maan looked……………………………

Going to be trouble for u

He gulped her saliva…………………….

After sometime………………………………………….

They take leave from there

As maan told that it is not safe forget.

And also told that it is not the right time to announce regarding geet

Even mohindar accepted

And he even accepted that .maan loves his geet…….

And………………………

With maan consent…………………he left with her…………………..

At the car.

Geet switched the radio

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Guys………………….

This is 3 parts and also the epilogue

As I want to end the story…………..

I hope u like this

Geet is in his life……………………….

He need to sort of the things before the problems arise

At that time……………………………………………

He got a call…..

Sir armaan is escape

Yes………….i know 'what

Govind looked at ahmed.

He smiled.

That means it is his plan……………..

Next armaan went to a booth and called some people.

On the other hand

Maan open his eyes to find his misty is sleeping in his arms.

She is holding tighter

Geet I need to go

I need to sort of things before I can start a new life with u

For ur safe sweetheart.

With that he smiled.

And leave her……………………………….at the place

And turned back…………………………..

And went to his mission

Sir this is maan.

I need ur help

Are u sure it is going to help………yes sir

I don't want to……………….involve any one and one more thing sir

I will keep the promise that I will hand over rana and his people to u………..

And I will finish this chapter………………………………..

Right now………………..

The next day

Armaan is talking tom rana

What maan is kidnapped to u…………………..are u sure…….

Yes at that time…………….

He saw his father there

Dad what are u doing here.

Im surprised u failed in the mission.as my own wife betrayed me…………

He brought his bruised wife there

Yes.i saved her…….

I hired maan sin gh khurana.as I know about him.

He is the person who is going tobe the end for u

I will die for that mother and daughter who gav e me a life to me and for the woman who gave me food and shelter

U are so selfish and want to kill that nave and innocent girl…………………………………for her property.

And ur plans ar e not going to work.as the person with geet will.always protect her from all the evil forces…………………………….

He slapped her.

But suddenly firing started.

As police had sourrounded the place.

Police…..what are they doing there.

Just then rana saw armaan….and he checked to find a device in his pocket……………………

U idiot…..

U had brought them……………he had double crossed me.

And that is the reason.he left u easilyt.so that he can…………………………easily.trap me.

But this is not easy

I will kill……………the girl and that maan singh khurana…………………………………..

He said in anger.

And aftersome time armaan and his father are arrested……………..

And his wife is rescued.

Ahmed called .maan

Sir rana is escaped

Yes he need to meet me………….

Im the one who is going to finish

Ready for the battle……………………………………………

We need to fight……………….

But be careful.

All the rana people………………………..are in police custody……….b

Ut there is ………………..a problem……………………………..

There are some escaped

No ahmed I want john and others stay away as me and u and govind and others ar emoving .

Be careful………………………

I don't want trouble this time…………..

On the other hand rana smirked as he escaped………………………………….

Where he is sourrounded by maan and his group

Finally rana we met u here.

Next part……………………………………….

Yes and ur death maan singh khurana

Ur the onlyenemynof me.

Don't ever think mr rana……………………….takhur

Ur the evil person I know

U killed ur brother at the age of 12 …

A nd u also kille dur own parents

U start tocreate havocs in city

Lot of accidents ar edone by u

Lot of police men died.because of u.

Ur the criminal as the police department looking for…………………………………..

And that day….

U shooted………………..mr………………mahesh ranavat acp………………………

And there is a strong evidence………….

A 16 yrs girl saw this and ur after that girl.

And don't worry……………………………u cannot reach……………………………………the girl.

As u need to meet maan singh khurana………………………………..

Suddenly rana people/.start………………….firing……………

And maan took his guys.

And there is a firing.

At that time.

At that time

Maan and rana fighting over

Maan kicked him hard

And after sometime

He cronched to ground.

Suddenly police commissioner ajay shirvatsava came there

Sir……..u can take him…………………

N o maan .

He killed Mahesh……………….

He is famous and great police officer

He made the family to suffer .

If we take him,

Some weird minister will bring backand he will kill lot of people again.

Don't worru.

Sir what we nee dto u

Kill him maan….

Sir.

Yes sir.maan

Kill him and there will be no other way……………………………………

Don't worry I will here everything will be u ndercontrol………………………

And maan and commissioner killed rana and people.

So the rana case is ended

And even ajay also arrested rana brother and other followers of him.

Maan relived.

And he get back to his place……………………………………………..

Maan I know ther is a ban for join the military base which is ur dream

But u r very potential skill and potential person forur department

U and ahmed are very much essential for our country

When even u change ur decision u cann inform me,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Next day …

Headlines

The famous assisins.

Mr rana Thakur killed ina police encounter

He is the one behind the attack of acp Mahesh ranavat

And also he is the active person who involve in shooting mohindar handa……………………………………..

Police is fin ding……………………………..him for long time

There is a ctive solicist party group which is efficiently handled the case and they had solved the case

On seeing the picture geet screamed and start shouting

Mohindar.looked a tgeet

Beta what happened.

Baba.heis the one …………………….

He killed …………………….the person…..

That dreadful dauy she cannot forget

It is last exam and she is ready to start college……………….

She is very much happy

As usual she is talking to her babaji nand her mom

Suddenly she didn't realize that she enter wrong place .

Oh no,geet phir se.

Tum aaj bhi wrong route le liye agar too 7 baje se opehle hostel nahii pouchaa na..toh miss mathur tume kaccha chabayege

Actually she always runs from dev.

Suddenly dev came there

Hai beautiful.

Dev.

What are un doing here

Oh darling same question I want u and u cannot escape from me,

Dev….tum miss mathur ke realative hoois liye hun tume bardaash kar rahe warna……………………..

He stepped closely tomehr

She find difficult and start running from him.

Part ends

Last part…………………………………

She is completely upset………………………

She ran randomly……………….

Unknowingly nshe enter……………………………………..the deserted park a the end of the street

She is hiding there

Aftersome time she got scared……………………..

And suddenlyn she realized……therea r some people and their voice

Dekho aaj who bachake nahii jaan achaheyee.

Other wise we r going to spendour remain life in jail.

He had wrote report which is bad for us.

Just then he saw aperson enter .ll

He is a strong person with broad shoulders…………………………………………..

He said rana……………….

Tummyeha kya kar raheoo.

Saab apna case wapas leloo other wise

After some time.

Geet closed her eyes and open a ssheb heard a gunshot.

And she saw the person is.at the ground…………………………….

She tried to save but she saw.dev coming to her

She ran.from there………………………………………

At that time……………………she ran to police station for compliant.

And even she gave but no one belive this

She ran .from there

After some time

With the help of .pinky and miss mathur

Miss mathur learned about dev and she slapped

As she is a strict warden but always s love all kids as her own

And anyone mis behaves with them she will be wild tigress……………………………………………………

And she also removed him form the hostel.

On that day .

She try to forget the incident………………………………………..but failed……………….but after some time she forgot and concentrate on studies

Mohindar hugged her daughter

Don't worry beta .everything is settled………………………………

And …………………..she hugged him…………………

After some time

So u and maan are married………………………….

Jii baba.woh.

I know beta.l

But now I want to fulfill my wish to get marriedmy daughter in a proper way.

As I need to talk………………..maan's dadimaa.

Savitri devi…………………………she hugged his daughter…………

They smiled.

After sometime.

Maan in structed ahmed and others

He came back to the town

Mr maan singh khurana…………………………….kaha hay aap………………………………..

Aap ko muje shaadi karke apne mehel pe jaana hay.

She smiled shyly.

Maan enter km.to find

Ane e and Vicky smiling mischievous smile

Where dadimaaa angry face

And surprised to find……………dadimaa

She said

Maan humne apke shaadi pakki kardi.

Maan gulped his salavia.shaadi daadi aap mazaak kar rahe naa…

Nahiio beta…………………..

Aur parso tere shaadi hay…….

Daadi please .muje apse kuch jarori baat karne hya

He murmered.

First time his toungue tied…………….

And feeling.weird

Closed his eyes

Ahmed sand others try to control their laughter seeing his angry boss………………..antics

Daadi mere shaadi hogayee.

Geet mere………patni.woh………………………..

Achaa……………………………..

He tell everything without opening his eyes

Everybody laughter loud………………………..

Where geet laughter……………………

He looked at geet.with anee and Vicky……………………………

He just glared her an d change dher expressions that ur going to pay for this.

She smiled cheekily.

And ran towards……..dadimaa.

Where mohindar.smiled at them,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

……….

Maan tried to catch her

But john and Vicky rescued

Just then…………………………..

Maan got a call and a letter

He open a letter.,a biggest shock in his life………………………….

The letter confirms that he is new ACP of ……..delhi.

And john and ahmed a rehis assistants………………………….

He looked at daadi

She blessed him,

And geet is very much happy

After one week…………………….

Geet and maan married along with rituals.

And finally.they are one

Maami and …………….her father did their kanyadaan,.

And maan andgeet are finally …………..became one……………….

Kismet

Jisko milna hay usko milta hay

Tere har saansoom mein……………………..too samatha hay

Tuu hoot oh mere zindagi ki har khusi hay…..

Tere muskhuraat mein mere jaan hay……………………………….

Tuje dekhkar apne poori zindagi gujurunga.

Everybody appreciated their pair…………………………………..

After that

Maan carried geet to his room….

Everyone at the room.

He placed geet into the bed.

He slowly……………………..removed her maang tikka……

And also ear rings…………………….wispering something but not kissing………………

He hugged her………………………………………

Geet close dher eyes………………..

Just then……….maan turned his face to the direction.

Yeh poori picture dekhne.hay kya.

Tume kya lagtha hya……………ki mein nahii jaantha hay tum log ne kamre meinb…..cameraa rakha hay

Muje se ulajna mat…………………….

Meintum log ko kal dekhlanga.

With that the screen. Disappears………………………

Where ahmed gave them a big smile.

Hello.

He is ACP Maan singh khurana…………………………

Geet still in trances not notice that she again been carried away to some place.

She open her eyes to find her in the same cottage

Where the story starts…………….

FB ends……………………………………..

Epilogue

Geet close dher dairy………./

Suddenly she enfulged into his warm embrace

Where maan start kissing her nape.

Maan aap aye.

Haa jab mere patni kisi ke khayol mein dhobi huwe hay………………………..

Maan she moaned.

As he is still kissing.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Maan aap fresh ho jayee hay naa mein apke liye kuch banungi…………………………….

Nahii geet hume chalna chaheyee

Kaha maan

Ghar sweety

Before that

She cannot complete the sentence………………………..

Her lips are sealed with his and ……………………………………………passionate love making session of them.

Next 4 years

Geet is very much busy.

She is running madly.

As anee is making fuss.

Today is her engagement……………….with arjun rathode.

Suddenly she felt……………two stong arms circled her waist.

Maan.stop it.

Muje bahut kaam hay.aap na jaha bbhi kahi bhi shuruwaad kar the hoo………………………………….

Maan please…………………..

He is kissing .her suddenly he felt a tug at his leg

Turn to find a 3and year old boy showing gun……………..

followed by………………2 yrs old girl holding a teddy………………………and a doll…………………..

what are u doing her leave my mom other wise

maan looked a t the boy at his toy gun……………………………

oh god…………….

Geet giggled……….

Agayaa na mere hero mere rescue kay liye

She lifted the boy and kissed his cheek,

Mom im a boy……………….he said in a baby language

With a attitude

Oh yes jr maan singh khurana…………………………..

Oh my boy………….

I love u

Just tehn the girl papa.bade daadi aapko bula……………..rahe hay

She spoke……………..in her baby language

Maan lifted his two yearold mehek maan singh khurana………….duplicate of his geet…………………

They reach down

Everyone surprised to find.them

The most adorable and handsome couple

Anee married arjun

And Vicky engaged to meera……………………

HAPPY HAPPY ENDING…………………………………………………………

Hope u guys love it

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...love the part where Jr. MSK shows his toy gun towards Maan. Cute...

Nice epilogue yaar

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