FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142

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Amna

@cutiepie9512345

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Posted: 14 years ago

#771

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im speechless!!!
NO WORDS!!
your excellence speaks for itself

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Hasina

@kellz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#772

Devi you are a master at words

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#773

Devi,

This last update - Final Hour was just WOW!

I have no words to describe it. I mean the concept/symbolism of him touching her and the matches inside her were lighting up one by one....was just breathless.

I just have no words to express it. I feel that my words will have no weight against yours.

All I have to say to you...that after reading your Love/Despair and this FF.

I HUMBLY BOW TO YOU! for such a talented piece of writing.

It is just amazing.

Rachana

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#774

at this point...i can't say anything other than WOWWWWWWWWWW...now i am waiting for a romantic morning after..

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wilddevil2010

@wilddevil2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#775

Another Awesome part
It was beautiful

Pls continue soon

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: kellz
Devi you are a master at words

I totally, completely n blindly agree!

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#777

Its hard to tell what can be more powerful....a woman who gives herself in full abandon or the one who engulfs herself in a blanket of shyness.

To a light a fire is the destiny of the match...even though the fire engulfs the match and squeezes out the life source of that small piece of timber....and what remains is a bit of ash...the remnant of both the match and that which lit the match.

Lambi si ek raat ho

Lamba sa ek din mile

Bas itna sa jeena ho

ke mil ke gale jab mile

Haan wohi...bas wohi

Saason mein rakha hua tere hoton ka sapna hai bas wohi...

This is one of my favorite songs...the second on my playlist. Very apt...perfect fit!!