FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 80

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Posted: 14 years ago

Heyy Devi

sorry for not replying to the earlier updates....college is just plain hell dude!!😆
awww i am loving this change in their relationship....when i saw gauri missed her lectures, i was like aww okay, whatever....but omgg shiv's action was just soo sooo absitively posilutely adorablee!!😳....his comment were the icing on the cake!!😆....i totally agree with the food one, heck i am not allowed to eat cuz apparently they got cameras in my lecture halls too but i still do!😆....but that was just sooo touching....honestly, i am lovingg his small lovable gestures for gauri...they seem soo trivial but in realiy, they speak tons in themselves!!😳....and i lovedd how he started saying I....but it went to gn all of a sudden....hmm i wonder what he was gonna say!😉
Edited by macho_muffin - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Where can I order a copy of Shiv?

Loved the update...wonder what he was going to say...Is he going to call her while he is away?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Where can I order a copy of Shiv?
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if u ever find out could you send me a copy too or let me know???😉 😆 xxx
Edited by Mariam...x - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Pixie and Mariam let me know too plz 😆

Gosh that was so sweet of him.

The update was as brilliant as always Devi.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Nadia

xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nadia...il be sure to send you a message the day i find a Shiv copy 😆 you have to assume though that there will be more than one or Shiv might just be a rare entity 😛 xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhhhhhh he is sooooooooooooooooooo sweet....he sat in the lecture for her!!!! so cute....

very nice devi....waitin for more...as always....
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was an awesome update!! Loved it!!!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Devi, can i have this Shiv as my husband😳
i loved the way Shiv's taking care of Gauri's little things ☺️ how sweet
when gauris goin to found out abt Shivs kurta n gauris dupatta...cant wait to see gauris face
plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
I wonder A REAL MAN exist to live up the dreams of many hearts.
Amazing that you are Sridevi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I have a lump in my throat. Does it get even better? Are you going to create balance between them? Shiv is leading....I like relationships to be balanced...

Shiv
- Typed up her report
- Found ribbons in the scavenger hunt (he wouldn't care much about finding ribbons if it wasn't for Gauri's enthusiasm)
- Helped her through the madness of the night
- Attended lectures for her...that too 3 of them!

Gauri
- Made him sleep after he had a sleepless night typing up her report
- Helped him when he was in pain while he helped her find release through the madness of the night.

Am I missing anything? Please bring it to my attention. Also, here's an update of their hidden feelings..

Shiv
- When he lost himself feeling her legs during the swimming episode
- When Gauri's mom passed away and she stained his kurta with her tears which he has secretly preserved as his own treasure.
- He has been desiring her since that day in the pool.

Gauri
- When she felt his lips on hers when he gave mouth to mouth to save her during the swimming episode
- The eventful night at the formals 10 years ago...when she secretly enjoyed his necking...




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