FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 55

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

127.9k

Users

83

Likes

3.1k

Frequent Posters

-pixie- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
Devi: I have a question for you....Is there any fictional character that you have based this Maan on? I don't know why ...but he just seems to be very familiar but I just can't place him...

Loved the update...I love these two..the tension between them is enough to power an entire city 😆 or so I think...

I think its time the hunted became the hunter and upped the game, what say you?

But I totally loved this picnic!

Please update soon... <Yeah yeah I know I am being greedy...sorry but I just can't get enough of these two>
538783 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Devi: I have a question for you....Is there any fictional character that you have based this Maan on? I don't know why ...but he just seems to be very familiar but I just can't place him...


Loved the update...I love these two..the tension between them is enough to power an entire city 😆 or so I think...

I think its time the hunted became the hunter and upped the game, what say you?

But I totally loved this picnic!

Please update soon... <Yeah yeah I know I am being greedy...sorry but I just can't get enough of these two>


Maan? lol... he is a mish-mash of the Maan from the show and I am sure the tons of alpha male heroes out there... but no one that I can specifically identify...
kyphfanz thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Devi: I have a question for you....Is there any fictional character that you have based this Maan on? I don't know why ...but he just seems to be very familiar but I just can't place him...


Loved the update...I love these two..the tension between them is enough to power an entire city 😆 or so I think...

I think its time the hunted became the hunter and upped the game, what say you?

But I totally loved this picnic!

Please update soon... <Yeah yeah I know I am being greedy...sorry but I just can't get enough of these two>


oh yes! I feel better reading that someone else mess up with the names, other thn myself 😃
Sigma thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Ah...poor poor Shiv...first no waterfall....now no wife🤣

🤣🤣🤣 good one
Devi superb as usual 😃
-pixie- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kyphfanz

oh yes! I feel better reading that someone else mess up with the names, other thn myself 😃

Mess up with names? How?🤔

538783 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Mess up with names? How?🤔


I think she thought that you meant to ask about Shiv, b/c this is Shiv-Gauri's thread, but I got you - you were asking about Maan ;)

-Devi
macho_muffin thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

heyy devi!!

ahhhh poor confused shiv!!😆
wow what a marriage!!....they go from vocabulary fights to romance to ignoring each other all over, or should i say just gauri, again!!😆....i think this is the gazillionth time he questioned god as to why he is the only one who stuck with such a wife....lol....need i even say i lovedd the part?....really dude, i think you might have to take a lot of effort to actually just write an okayish part....actually, i don't know if thats even possible...this was such an awesome update😳....i lovedd gauri's gasps and shiv's reaction to each one of them!!😆....atleast they are moving somewhere with their feelings!😉....and i have to say i have learned more vocab from this ff than my high school vocab books!😆....just brilliantly written and hilarious!!👏....please do continue soon!!....wanna see shiv manofying gauri!!😉
-pixie- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sridevi27

Maan? lol... he is a mish-mash of the Maan from the show and I am sure the tons of alpha male heroes out there... but no one that I can specifically identify...


LoL! No wonder he feels so familiar..😆..I honestly wonder why all romantic heroes are usually alpha male (not that I am complaining)...

and I am in love with Shiv...He has this strange combination of boyishness, maturity and machoness which makes him completely adorable!
-pixie- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sridevi27


I think she thought that you meant to ask about Shiv, b/c this is Shiv-Gauri's thread, but I got you - you were asking about Maan ;)

-Devi


The question was only for Maan...the rest of the comment was for Shiv and Gauri...Sorry for the confusion!😳
538783 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Hello dear readers,
My other FF, Love and Despair, has finally come to an end.

I am posting the last link here, because it has a tad bit of Shiv-Gauri in it too...


I am unaccountably emotional that it has ended... so, I highly doubt that I will be updating anymore today.... there is always tomorrow though ;)

-Devi

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

4 months ago

The Palace of secrets Season3 Mohan-Radha,Shiv Shakti SS

The Palace of secrets Season3 Part 1 Long ago Heavenlybliss and Salley had asked me to write something like the movie Bhool Bhulaiyya.This SS is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

4 months ago

Friendship story

I am planning to write a friendship story. I will choose the love interest of Paras Kalnawat and Karan Kundra according to the choice of the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Saumya96

2 years ago

SKR FF 6:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 107

Hello everyone ☺️ This is Saumya ❤️ I have completed the five long threads of my FF "Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story Following are the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".