FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 57

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Posted: 14 years ago
u stop there!!??!! OMG ill call that mental harassment :|

coming to the update- ooo boy! that was amazing- ahaa poor gauri! cant wait to read ahead ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgggggggggg...this is going to get really interesting...i know it is..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay I admit I was moping around missing my Khuranas but what was this yaar???? Well,now I'm totally distracted..all thanks to you😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Devi dear a very intrestin update! Bt y u hv to give a cliffhanger? Plz cont asap
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Posted: 14 years ago

hmm i guess shiv's promise to her on their first night is coming true...........

she really is gonna want him to touch her

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Posted: 14 years ago
and the FUN begins!!!!! don't stop pls pls pls continue 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Devi!!
Such a brilliant twist to the tale ..
now please do not leave it too long before you update ...
i am sure none of us can wait too long...
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Posted: 14 years ago
I hope it is Shiv at the door....

After thinking about it I am not sure if anything serious will happen..Since it is always Shiv who stops before things get too out of hand...

While she definitely needed an external push to move forward..I feel he is looking for some emotional commitment from Gauri before he takes the leap

Waiting for the next part


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Posted: 14 years ago
Devi,

OMG! that was brilliant! Can't wait to find out the results of this wonderful experiment gone wrong.

Nadia

xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
I'm glad you stopped right there, cause reading at work, glad there is no one around yet, will calm down by then....I can't stop myself laughing but have to control and work with grinning😆...I can well imagine whats coming next....full turn on comedy...looking forward for the weekend...Sri you are full of mischievousness. 😉

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