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FaithnFate

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Posted: 14 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: jazzerette
Ah...poor poor Shiv...first no waterfall....now no wife🤣

i doubt that...... he's a badass 😈

wait n see bomb is placed......how it blasts😉

Edited by 1kaarzoo - 14 years ago

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her_story

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Posted: 14 years ago

#532

xcellent update. i agree with shiv, he did marry a difficult woman... bt i m finding it difficult to imagine shiv reading neruda.. and i luv him evn more nw..

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taanni

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Posted: 14 years ago

#533

i just don't get it , how shiv controls himself around gauri........

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ansah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#534

great one it was....really loved it

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#535

Devi,

I read this entire FF in one go and it's absolutely amazing. You are one very talented writer especially when it comes to the steamier updates LOL.

Looking forward to the next part!

Nadia

xxx

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Sadaf

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Posted: 14 years ago

#536

you made shiv read 'neruda'!! ahahah thts funny but very romantic ;)

I loved the soft peck he gave her...

oo I cant wait for Shiv to realize he is in love..tho at the moment, I feel none of them are anywhere near it..

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Dhrashtee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#537

absolutely loved the update.... plz cont soon....

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Amna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#538

"I didn't either… the man has more secrets than Mata Hari and more layers than a French pastry!"

"No no, you are right Shiv. Absolutely. Sex is sex. Procreation is procreation. No need to confuse it with anything else… And I am pretty sure that a wife is not necessary for sex. So, you don't need to wait for me at all. Go ahead and find another willing sex-buddy to scratch your itch. And then you can frolic in the water-fall or roll around in the mud or do anything you want, really…"

🤣🤣🤣
Devi this was scintillating!!
BRILLIANT MARVELOUS FANTASTIC!!!!!

i am soo happy Shiv is starting to change and love their reactions to when they see the couples!!!
This was an awesome update!!
When he told Thalia that Gauri's his wife i was like YAY!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE continue soon!!!

~~Amna

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#539

tht was written so well...i feel bad for gauri...make them be together now..it sucks they are the only couple who aren't together...do update soon :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
tht was written so well...i feel bad for gauri...make them be together now..it sucks they are the only couple who aren't together...do update soon :)

Ah dear... but their story is just starting, while the others' are ending... (and if you really think about it, the others really suffered for their love... well, all except Maan. Vicky got beat up... Dev almost died... Maan, on the other hand, has been breezing through... 😉... but since he is Maan, we will forgive him 😉)

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