'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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Ashi-ArTi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#641

very nice update

looking forward for next part...

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-SharNeela-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur
full to confusion :(

LOL...you're new to my writings (relatively speaking). But ask some of the regular ones, they know...my stories make sense at the end. Till then...mystery continues 😉

-Neela

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manjeet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#643

fantastic update

luved tanmay n nupur convo...brilliantly written

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#644

neela kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos hoa is update per k...

ek tu tanamy k jana ...efsoos hoa..pata nhi kyun...

aur yeah jo umeed mili hai nupur ko...yeah aur dara rahi hai humain...

shrt coment k lyan maafi chaty hain...thori ulhjan mein hain...ap se baad mein baat keray gau...

PS..ap ny mera aur laiba k disucsion tu parha hoga...tu kya kayal hai ;)

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-SharNeela-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
neela kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos hoa is update per k...

ek tu tanamy k jana ...efsoos hoa..pata nhi kyun...

aur yeah jo umeed mili hai nupur ko...yeah aur dara rahi hai humain...

shrt coment k lyan maafi chaty hain...thori ulhjan mein hain...ap se baad mein baat keray gau...

PS..ap ny mera aur laiba k disucsion tu parha hoga...tu kya kayal hai ;)

koi khayal nahi hai ji 😊 per haan...ajeeb hi lagna tha yeh update. aap aur Laiba ki convi baaton se lag raha hai k humain kaafi maar parne wali hai 😕 per Laiba ne ek baat kahi humse jo hum baaqi zindagi jab tak likhte rahenge yaad rakkhenge..unhone kaha k har writer ki ek apna andaaz hota hai aur usse ussi mutalliq chalna chahiye. And I agree with her. Readers k comment hamare liye bohat ahmiyet rakhte hai aur isi liye unke comments ki mutabik kahani aage barh rahi hai per ending phir bhi wohi hoga jo hum chahte hai. zahir si baat hai har koi uss ending ko accept nahi kar payega aur kuch readers ko wohi munasib lagega aur kuch hai jo kabhi samajh hi nahi payenge. kher...happy or not I cannot guarantee but it will be my kind of ending 😊

-Neela

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: sharneel

koi khayal nahi hai ji 😊 per haan...ajeeb hi lagna tha yeh update. aap aur Laiba ki convi baaton se lag raha hai k humain kaafi maar parne wali hai 😕 per Laiba ne ek baat kahi humse jo hum baaqi zindagi jab tak likhte rahenge yaad rakkhenge..unhone kaha k har writer ki ek apna andaaz hota hai aur usse ussi mutalliq chalna chahiye. And I agree with her. Readers k comment hamare liye bohat ahmiyet rakhte hai aur isi liye unke comments ki mutabik kahani aage barh rahi hai per ending phir bhi wohi hoga jo hum chahte hai. zahir si baat hai har koi uss ending ko accept nahi kar payega aur kuch readers ko wohi munasib lagega aur kuch hai jo kabhi samajh hi nahi payenge. kher...happy or not I cannot guarantee but it will be my kind of ending 😊

-Neela

bs hum yeah chahty hain...humain ab koi fikar nhi ...

laiba ny bulkil sahi kaha ...aur islyan hum zara kaafa thy...ap yeah janti hain

ap k munfarid andaz hi humain ab k tareero ke taraf kheejta hai...

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

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bs hum yeah chahty hain...humain ab koi fikar nhi ...
laiba ny bulkil sahi kaha ...aur islyan hum zara kaafa thy...ap yeah janti hain

ap k munfarid andaz hi humain ab k tareero ke taraf kheejta hai...

Ajeeb hai na.. Tragedy Queen ending likh rahi hai aur humein koi fikr nahin.. :)

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Ajeeb hai na.. Tragedy Queen ending likh rahi hai aur humein koi fikr nahin.. :)

yeah hi tu kamal hai laiba IN ka...wasy pata nhi ...Qayeenat meray lyan tragedy nhi tha...ab bhi neela ko tragedy queen nhi manti

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-SharNeela-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

yeah hi tu kamal hai laiba IN ka...wasy pata nhi ...Qayeenat meray lyan tragedy nhi tha...ab bhi neela ko tragedy queen nhi manti

@Laiba...hahhhaa fikr iss liye nahi kyun ki you guys are immuned to the horrific endings I give 😉

@Fiza aapko hum kaise bhoole..its true. At a certain stage of Qayenaat, my hands were shaking. I was seriously thinking about changing the storyline..why? because coincidentally Nupur in MJHT also died in season 1 pretty much at the same time and I could see all my readers sinking into pain. I just couldn't bring myself up to writing the same which would have hurt them even more. But I do remember..somewhere down the line I had courage from some of my readers and I wrote what I wanted to write...although during the whole process I was in most pain as I continued to write knowing that Nupur has died already. sigh!

kher...again I would also deny the title that I am tragedy queen. I don't think I ever gave a tragic ending...I always made love conquer, even in my OS Aashna and Rehguzar. And I will continue to do so. For Intikhaab too, love will conquer.

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
yeah hi tu kamal hai laiba IN ka...wasy pata nhi ...Qayeenat meray lyan tragedy nhi tha...ab bhi neela ko tragedy queen nhi manti

Iagree... Its a nice nickname though... Par for me she has never been a tragedy queen..

KAJ ko dekho toh mujhe toh kisi bhi angle say woh tragic ending nahi lagti...

Aur phir aiy baari Qayeenat ki... Yes indeed it was the only ff that have have ever affected me that much.. I was really disheartned when I got to know about Nupur's death...it tpok a while to come over that...But over all it wasn't a tragic end.. It was actually a happy ending..

where Mayank finally accepted Mehak... and Mehak.. I shouldn't say anything about her as I didn't understand her at all.. But still she was a true friend... She kept her promise, after facing so many things she kept trying until she suceeded... And at last she did... Aur Nupur I'm sure woh jahan bi thi na she must have been really proud of her friend and her love...

It had tragic events but in the end it was all good... :)

Originally posted by: sharneel

@Laiba...hahhhaa fikr iss liye nahi kyun ki you guys are immuned to the horrific endings I give 😉

@Fiza aapko hum kaise bhoole..its true. At a certain stage of Qayenaat, my hands were shaking. I was seriously thinking about changing the storyline..why? because coincidentally Nupur in MJHT also died in season 1 pretty much at the same time and I could see all my readers sinking into pain. I just couldn't bring myself up to writing the same which would have hurt them even more. But I do remember..somewhere down the line I had courage from some of my readers and I wrote what I wanted to write...although during the whole process I was in most pain as I continued to write knowing that Nupur has died already. sigh!

kher...again I would also deny the title that I am tragedy queen. I don't think I ever gave a tragic ending...I always made love conquer, even in my OS Aashna and Rehguzar. And I will continue to do so. For Intikhaab too, love will conquer.

2 Neela ffs par kar immune ho gaye... :)

Waise Neela aap say ek baat pochni thi... who gave you the nickname of "Tragdey Queen".. I heard it around "Ashna" I lked the sound of it... issliye copy kar liya.. Lekin diya kis ne? 🤔