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Posted: 14 years ago
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hope ki serial m b kuch aisa hi ho jaye.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh wow gr8 dew i m liking it................pls continue writing.................a big clap for ur awesome workkkkkkkkkkk👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one dew!!!!

continue soon!

maaneet ko saath mein lao yaar!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

omg this is going great yaar

please update soon yaar
just love it
thanks!

thnks shaila ... will try to update it asap ... if not big will surely give u a small one ...

Originally posted by: neha-2

lovely..do update soonnnn..........!!!!🥳it wazz lovelyy..:):)

thnks neha ... will try to update it asap ......

Originally posted by: zebronics

hi

good update yaar
pls update next part, if possible today

thnks yaar.. will try to update it asap .....
thnks yaar.. will try to update it asap ...

Originally posted by: wajiha-1

great...
do continue soon

thnks yaar...sure .. will try to update it asap ...

Originally posted by: whitepearl

Hi Dew...What a lovely FF......It is going exactly the way it should be...I loved it...Atleast You made Geet realise her mistake and let her analyse her actions....Your FF has a ray of hope and that brings smile on my face......Thank You dear...Keep writting....

thnks white ... tht's gud yaar i 2 was so depressed as u aleaady know after watching friday's episode ... so thought of writing a OS ... which turned into a short FF ... sure .... will continue ...

Originally posted by: SakshiGarg

nyc!!!! plzzz continue soon!!!!

thank u ... sure .... will continue ...

Originally posted by: 18mypride

so niceeeee!! kash ke aisa ho aur maaneet jaldi miljaye..... oh plz cv's..

thanks .... hope so yaar ......

Originally posted by: ansah

wow...that was awesome really beautiful....

loved it and do keep writing

sure .... will continue ...

Originally posted by: Soni-Sanraj

Awesome part dear, it feell so real😳, plz do continue😍

thank u soni ... sure .... will continue ...

Originally posted by: Akanshagusain

awesome update plzzzz continue.................................

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Originally posted by: krati5

hope ki serial m b kuch aisa hi ho jaye.....

thank u krati ... hope fully yaar ....

Originally posted by: ttt0011

oh wow gr8 dew i m liking it................pls continue writing.................a big clap for ur awesome workkkkkkkkkkk👏👏👏👏👏

hi yaar ... thnk u ... sure .... will continue ...thnk u dear ...

Originally posted by: mina_angel

nice one dew!!!!


continue soon!

maaneet ko saath mein lao yaar!

thnk u mina ... sure .... very soon ...
Edited by dewdropred - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3:-

Mean while Maan is driving & thinking to himsalf – "geet kya mere pyar main kuch kamee thee ki tumhae mere upar bharosa hi nahin rahaan abhi … sirf dev mera bhai hain yeh janne kae baad mere upar jo bharosa tha wo bharosa uth gaya … kyun geet …. Hamesha mere upar bharose hain usskae baren main kehti thi naa … phir … tumhare uss bharose ka kya hua geet …

jo tumhe mere upar lift main tha …(The lift scene when they got stuck in lift after the dhaba episode … where geet says she has faith in him & knows that he can never do any thing wrong to her ….)

aur uss bharose ka kya hua geet jo tumhe mere upar tha …

jab tum bharish main bheeg gayi thi aur mere paas koi rastha nahin tha tumhare kapde badalnae kae alava …

(after the pee loon episode … when geet gets wet & Maan had to change her … & when he said that he did not see anything & changed her so that she does not get sick …)

uss waqt bhi tum mere upar bharosa karthi thi ki main kabhie bhi tumhare saath kuch ghalat nahin kar saktha … phir wo bharosa kahan gayab ho gaya geet … Y geet Y … Y did U do like this to me … what went wrong in between both of us ..… just bcoz of dev … u lost faith in me …

sirf dev mera bhai hain yeh jaankar tumhara bharosa mere upar sae uth gaya geet …. Aur tumhe laga ki main tumhae dhoka dungaa … dev kae saath dene kae liyae … no geet no …

Main yeh bhi jantha hun ki tumnae tumhari zindagi main bahut kuch sahan hain … tum ithni asaani sae kisi kae upar bharosa nahin kar paogi … kyunki jab jab tumnae bharosa kiya tumhara bharosa toot gaya tha …

(he remembers her words when he was at her home in hoshiarpur …. When he went to get signatures from her … Geet said how she was made to believe that what ever her family was doing they were doing it for her good & she believed them … after believing her family members & getting married … how she believed in someone whom her family chose … how she was cheated by him in 3 days … & this was not easy for her … as this man who cheated her was his brother Dev … so it's difficult for her to come to terms with this aspect of life so easily …)

main jantha hun geet ki tumhare saath jo kuch bhi hoshiarpur main hua usskae baad tum wapas kisi kae upar bharosa nahin kar paogi …

par tum wapas bharosa karnae lagi thi mere upar aur hamare rishte kae upar … par geet maine tumhara bharosa nahin thoda hain geet … bas meri yehin ghalthi thi ki jab tumne mere upar shakh kiya mujhe gussa aa gaya tha … tum yeh bhi janthi ho ki mera gussa kithna kharab hain … gussa mujhae pagal kar daethi hain … gusse main insaan insaan nahin rehtha …

aur maine bhi tumhari shakh dur nahin kiya … parr main bhi kya karoon … tumhare ilzaam sun kar mere hosh hi udh gaye thae … mujhe aise laga ki jis sae main ithna pyar kartha hun … wohi mujhe samajh nahin payin … iss liye maine tumhe jawab dena jaroori nahin samjha … par mujhe ab lag rahan hain … ki mujhae tumhe jawab daeni chahiyae thi … aur tumhari shakh dur karna tha par maine yeh nahin kiyan … kabhi kabhi hum yeh soch thae hain ki hum jissae pyar karthae hain wo hamare bina bole hi hamari baath samjhe … kya aise sochna galat hain geet … kya main kuch jyada maang rahan hun ... iss liyae hum kabhi kabhi hamari dill ki baath nahin bathathe …

par geet tumhe aise kyun laga … ki … mere tumsae shadi karnae ki wajah dev hain … aur yeh sab maine meri pariwar kae liyae kiya … aisa nahin hain geet …

shayad maine galat waqt par geet sae shadi ki baath keh di … par mera aise faisla laene ka wajah tho kuch aur tha … main bas geet ko bachana chahtha tha un sab logon sae … aur meri iss faisla ki wajah sae geet nae mujhe galat samajh liya.

Geet 2 herself while going to her room about calling maan & checking on him –"maan aap kahan pae ho … ek baar unko phone kar kae dekhthi hun … jab tak mujhae unkae baaren main pata nahin chalega mujhe kuch bhi acha nahin lagega … oye geet … agar tu maan kae baaren main ithna sochthi hain … tho aise kaam kyun kiya geet …. Kyun … geet teri wajah sae … tum dono ko aaj chot pahunchi …. Par unhonae bhi tho wohi kiya naa … jo maine kiya hain … agar maine unhae chot pahunchayi tho unhone bhi muhje chot pahunchayi … uss ka kya .... "

Geet checks for telephone … finds it but is debating on whether to call him or not & check on him … she is picking up the phone dialing his # and then hanging the phone … finally she decides to call but not maan. She decided to call meera ….

Geet calls meera … meera answers the phone …

Meera – hello …

Geet – hello … main geet meera …

Meera – geet tum kahan par ho … ghar kyun nahin aayi … yeh sab kya hogaya geet …

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will update if u all want me to continue ... plz let me know ... otherwise i will stop over here ...

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Oops Sorry posted the comment in the next page...........

Edited by .sireesha. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very emotional & touching part dear😳, so interesting do continu😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Amazing dew..

Loved it to the core!!!!

Continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.......❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️...........
Loved the way U stated all the instances when Geet Trusted Maan whole Heartedly.....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.......Loved each and every Instance......❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.......
Loved the way Maan understood Geet........❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.........
Thank God atleast Geet called Meera.......😊........
I hope Meera will help Maaneet...........
Eagerly waiting for the next part.............
Pls Update Sooooooooooooooon...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really awesome update....so loved it
it was awesome.....so beautiful
keep writing

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