FF:SOULMATE-Ek anokha Abhiya:Update 11 May pg148 - Page 18

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awesome update...!!!!!👍🏼👏
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loved the whole part................awesomeeeeeeeeeee...........luv abhay in this story sooooooooo much..............thnx for pm.............update soooooooooooooon
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Originally posted by: sups2222

just perfect as ever.........this was cute update..abhay bonding wid people......msiha n abhay make cute bro n sis pair......js hope kabir n mish pair ho jaye........loved it.pia n kabir headed for srtong frndship.......loved the whole scenario.......thnks for the pm ........update soon...
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I like Abhay and Misha. They would make a great duo with Mish being such an extrovert with a hint sarcastic while Abhay is an introvert. They'd bring the best out of each other. Kabir ki Pair set hai with someone pretty powerful.
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loved the whole part................awesomeeeeeeeeeee...........luv abhay in this story sooooooooo much..............thnx for pm.............update soooooooooooooon

I wanted Abhay to be humanized in my FF yet inapproachable at the same time. Glad U enjoyed it as i did writing it
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loved both the updates!, especially the bonding part..

I want all the characters to come into their own now. The next installment will be tomorrow. Just trying to get a move on my other FF update today
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Piya went to relax a little. She was worn out due to lack of sleep and the party showed no sign of waning down. Kabir sure knew how to rock the joint. Abhay had let her go for a little while. Piya saw a girl looking distressed. She deliberated for a while wondering if she should go upto her and check if she needed anything. Piya followed the girl up the stairs. Something was wrong with this picture. There was a man in this room speaking to someone on his mobile. He seemed angry. His voice growing louder. The girl was crying and muttering something she didn't quite catch between sobs. Kabir's place had people jammed into tight spaces so she was surprised nobody was concerned about the girl. Well they were wasted with so much booze supplied in this party. The girl went in and ran into some guys arms. Piya could only see the back of him. Piya never saw this girl before this party. Their paths never crossed before.
The man-Sheila U know why i am doing this don't U? For a better future for us. I need to make it in the big times. Then i promise U once i get what i want i'm all yours.
Sheila-U don't get it do U? I could've waited but it's too late. I'm pregnant with your baby. I'll start showing in a few months time. What will i do then? U are all i have. U can't abandon us. U promised to be with me forever.
The man-Is this some kind of a sick joke? One of your attempts to keep me with U.
Sheila-I wish it was a joke but its the truth. I tried to tell U sooner but U were always unavailable. U never pick my calls. I had to track U down. Try to understand I need U more than ever.
The man strokes the girls hair with his hand then pulls at a big wad-Listen to me Sheila. Listen hard. I have worked so hard to get everything into place for four years. U think U will get in the way of it. U told me U were on the pill. It's your responsibility to take care of that side of things. Did i ask U to fall pregnant? Did i force U into bed? No. I will sort all this mess out. Get an abortion. I will pay for all the expenses.
Sheila-U want me to get rid of it? How could U even think that? It's my baby.Damn it. I won't do what U ask? U better tell your girlfriend the whole truth because i will expose U in front of everyone.
The man-Oh U will do as i ask or U will pay big time. If U so much as breath about this to anyone I will kill U. Nobody will believe a cheap tart like U over me. Now get the hell out of here before i do something i regret.
Sheila runs out the room in floods of tears. Piya tries to take a good look at the guy and notices he's wearing the same outfit as Danish. It can't be him? He wouldn't do such a thing to Panchi would he? Piya tries to get a closer look at the guy but by then he'd left the room. She trailed after him but no luck. She ran down the stairs and saw Sheila headed out of Kabir's mansion.
Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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Abhay began to ease into this party scene. He loved Misha's sense of humour but her being drunk heightened her personality even more. The girl was actually hitting on him which was quite a funny moment in itself. Abhay had already accepted Misha as his sister. He would do anything to keep them all safe. Piya loved Misha as a sister already so it made them all his sisters. They filled in that hole in Abhay's heart he had for his own sister Parvara. They would never take her place but he could see glimpses of Parvara in them. Abhay had let Piya out of his sight for a little too long for his own liking. He finally had a man to man chat with Kabir. They'd had a little bet going onwho could finsh a whole beer keg by themselves without dropping off. Abhay made sure Misha was out of the fun and games after all she wasn't exactly awake. Their fellow classmates cheered them on. Danish, Kabir and Abhay started drinking as much as they could. Abhay had the advantage he never got drunk. It was an advantage to being the walking dead. Danish was out of the race as he was spilling more than he was drinking. There were loud booos from the crowd. Danish was cheering on Kabir. They were beginning to feel the effects of over drinking but Kabir was still soldiering on. Abhay finished the whole keg off showing some of his acting chops off by pretending to be a little drunk. Kabir had given up by then. There were loud cheers for Abhay. He told Kabir that he had to bail. He was on the lookout for Piya.

Piya could see Kabir with Misha wearing the same coloured Sherwani. Kabir and Misha looked drunk as hell. She heard the crowd chanting Abhay's name but couldn't see him in this crammed space. Piya didn't get to see the detailing of the man she saw but both Danish and Kabir wore the colour but with different patterns. If only Piya saw this. Too late now. What should she do let Sheila disappear in the state she was in who knew what she was capable of? Piya searched for Abhay. He was missing in action. Piya made a swift decision to help the girl. She ran after her out of the mansion. Good Sheila was still visible well only just with the heavy rain making it hard to run as fast as she could. Her movement wasn't as fast as it was before. Sheila must be tired that was a plus it gave Piya a chance to catch up. She continued on until she caught up with Sheila panting slightly. The girl was headed past the trees near the river. Piya could hear alarm bells go off. It was pitch black. The rain was pouring down heavily. The ground was muddy, slippery even her shoes were ruined not that she cared much about them only she could feel the mud on her feet. It felt gross. Piya's long curly hair was in her face annoying her like crazy. She quickly tucked it behind her ears. Sheila reached the edge confirming Piya's fear were true. The girl was about to do something pretty stupid.

Piya shouted loudly-"Stop!"

The girl looked behind instantly stopping in her tracks. Piya could see the pain in her eyes. Her tears were mixed in with the rain making it difficult to see Sheila's expressions other than her shivering a little. Piya's moved slowly towards the girl with her arms reaching out as a gesture to show her she means no harm. Of all things to do why was Sheila here. Piya didn't know how she'd be any help for the girl. Piya couldn't swim so she was useless.

Sheila-"U should really go back. This isn't something U should see. Please leave me alone."

Piya-"I don't know the depth of your problem but i can help U Sheila. I know U don't know me but don't do this. U have to listen this is not the way. Think about your family what this would do to them. Don't take the cowards way out U can fight back."

Sheila-"Fight back! With what? U don't know what i've done. Who i've become. My parents will never forgive me if they find out the truth about the sin i've committed. I've shamed my family. It's a big deal for a woman in our culture. My family will never bounce back from this. This is my only solution to my problems. He doesn't want any part of this of us. He was just using me and i let him."

Piya-"I know about your condition Sheila. I didn't mean to eavesdrop but i over heard what U told the father of your child. I can only imagine what U must be going through but there is always a way. I will help U Sheila. My friends will help U if you'll let them. Panchi has gelped many girls in similar circumstances."

Sheila flinched at Panchi's name. Her mind was made up. Her death was the only way. Sheila had no choice. She felt more disgraced now than ever before. Heartbroken by the man who gave her nothing in return but empty promises. She'd fallen for it hook, line and sinker. He was good at manipulating her. Sheila for the first time had remorse for the life she'd ruined and for helping the traitor cheat on his other woman. Sheila knew the truth was she was the other woman.-"I'm sorry but talking about it makes it too real. Thanks for trying to help me but its a little too late for me." With that Sheila made a leap into the river. Piya ran quickly to stop the girl but it was too late. Sheila was down.

Piya screamed-"Noooooooooooo!" The terror in her eyes made her take a rash judgement. Piya didn't have her mobile with her. It was in Kabir's place it probably wouldn't have worked anyway the rain was too heavy. Abhay wasn't with her either. Piya screamed Abhay's name out loud before she was about to jump as if he would come to her side if he heard her voice quivering

Abhay could hear Piya's voice calling to him in an urgency he'd never felt before. He sensed she was in trouble. He couldn't feel her anywhere at this party. Piya had told him she needed a little peace away from all the noise. He rushed out of the place immediately. He should never have let his guard down. Abhay picked up his super speed powers kicking up a gear with his heightened senses going into hyper drive. He followed the muddy tracks on the ground leading towards the woods with the never ending rain flowing heavier. Abhay wasn't botheed by any of this. To him his speed had the Matrix effect with his surrounding moving slower than he did.. Oh shoot. He was forbidden to ever enter that place. Piya what have U done? He didn't have time t deliberate just take action and saw Piya jumping off. Abhay raced in faster than a speeding bullet but Piya headed straight into the cold river. Abhay rushed in and managed to get a hold on her and take her out. All he could hear was Piya trying to help this girl Sheila from killing herself. "Please save her she's drowning." Abhay could see the girl further down. He put Piya to one side on the banks to safety. He zoomed in for Sheila in no time. The girls eyes were shut but there was a faint heartbeat. He swam with grave emergency towards Piya and put the girl beside her. Abhay did all the initial checks. Piya was fine just cold. Shame he couldn't give her his jacket. He didn't have time to get it off.

Abhay scolded Piya-"Piya don't U ever dare do that to me ever again! We will talk about this later. Are U ok to walk?"

Pia nodded and squeaked out a weak-"Yes"

Abhay looked at Sheila. He knew he should check the girl first but to him Piya was his main concern. He felt around her. No broken bones or protruding foreign objects. She wasn't breathing so Abhay pumped her stomach to remove water from her system. Abhay gave Sheila mouth to mouth. Piya looked on with fear for the girls life. He repeated the process then the girl came to her senses. Abhay tried to get help on the way using his mobile but it got wet when he was rescuing Piya and Sheila from drowning. He tried shaking it. Nothing drat. What was he going to do? He couldn't leave Piya alone not with the heavy rain nor could he do the same to the girl who could catch pneumonia with this rain showing no sign of stopping anytime soon. Abhay gravely chose to help Sheila despite being torn to stay with Piya. He picked Sheila up.

Abhay-"Piya i don't want to leave U here alone but i have no choice. Promise me U won't leave here until i get back. I won't be long. Another thing don't jump in there again." Pointing at the river with his eyes.

Piya-"I'll be fine Abhay please go help her. I promise i won't do anything stupid."

With that Abhay ran like the wind too aware of Piya being left behind at the river bank. Sheila came in and out of consciousness' so he knew she wouldn't pay any attention to how they got where they did. Abhay finally reached somewhere Sheila would get medical attention. He placed Sheila in a hospital ward compelling someone to help her. Abhay zoomed back frantically to help Piya. She did as she promised. Piya was a little disorientated. She looked like he felt inside shaking.

Piya"-Where's Sheila?"

Abhay-"Safe now Piya just relax." They zoomed to Abhays place.

Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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Wonderful update . update soon👏

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