FF:SOULMATE-Ek anokha Abhiya:Update 11 May pg148

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-SnowKid-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

awesome part...............awww feel sad for abhay n mithali.............. thnx for the pm..............waitin for nxt part..........

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tanya.dsouza

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

awesum update..! thnxx for d PM......!!!!

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Nidz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Awwww Abhay n Maithili really had a terrible ending..
Thnx for the p.m..can't wait to read next..

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Gaya3Devi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

nice update dear. thanks for the pm. update soon

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey really nice update...OMG abhay and mathali had a really sad eading..poor those two oh well abhay can finish his unfinished love story with piya now...really well written and planned...keep up the great work and do write more soon...thankx 4 the pm..

❤️MONA

Glad U liked it.I will be writing more tomorrow but there will be a precap today

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701
OMG. I feel SO bad for Abhay and Maithali. They had such a brutal ending. 🥺

I could feel the pain, the shock, the loss, the love, the promise, the guilt, the remorse. Beautifully written! 👏👏

Thanks for the PM! And continue soon. You rock! 😃

I tried to show as much emotion in both of them in all shades be it happy or sad, This explains in a way why Piya and Abhay hooked uo so quickly in my FF. The foundations of love was present and the remnants of emotions they felt over Piya's lifetime never went away. Soon U will learn the different outcomes from each birth.

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

:::Pre-cap-Forgiveness:::

Abhay could see Piya's suspicion arise over his miraculous cut lip healing in record time. She did a thorough check with her fingers. They teased him a little too long. Abhay was concerned with Piya's weird behaviour, her eyes told him she hadn't slept very well. The dark rings under her eyes she tried to cover with make-up. With his vampire super sight he could examine the smallest change in a person straight away. Piya looked exhausted but to him she was always beautiful. Abhay felt guilty for not being there for Piya he could only imagine the pain she was facing with these dream. No they were more than that. They wer a way for her to remember her past lives. For some reason her dream were always revolved around her time as Maithali and her deaths. He was the cause of her pain. He just couldn't bring himself to tear himself away from his own problems and seeing Piya in that state would have tipped him over the edge. After all her suffering was his own doing. Burying his anger was difficult enough. He wanted to rip Kabir's head off last night. That was the intensity of his rage. He'd managed to tame it during the fight thanks to Misha in his arms. Abhay had locked himself in his room and tried to clear his mind which always worked with Piya in his thoughts. He'd noticed Piya occasionally glancing at Kabir. Abhay felt bad for them. He didn't want to ruin a good friendship despite Kabir sporting romantic feelings towards Piya. It was so obvious but he wasn't going to reveal this fact to Piya. She already rubbished such notion. A least Misha came round to accepting Abhay into the fold. He no longer felt like he was an outsider but he wasn't comfortable enough to want to join them all for get togethers.

Abhay-"U should go speak to him Piya. I know U are dying to patch things up."

Piya-"No way Abhay. He was in the wrong. If anything he should be the one to make the first move. I'm still angry with him for hurting U."

Abhay-"Seriously this is childish. I bet Kabir is thinking the same thing. For all U know he may be afraid of facing U. It's not easy for a guy to swallow his pride and say sorry. Trust me i should know. I'm a guy remeber."

Piya-"Thats just stupid. Well too bad. I'm not letting him take the easy way out."

Misha-"U know what? If U don't go Piya i'm going to Kabir for sure. He is my best friend after all. It was my fault the guys got into a fight. Ok babes see U in three!"

Piya-"Mishaaaaaa" With that Misha headed towards Kabir looking glum.

Abhay-"Well that should be resolved soon then we can all relax. Piya keep an open mind. Don't try to jump his throat ok."

Piya-"Fine. Seeming as we are both alone right now i was meaning to ask U something. I wanted to meet your parents. U know your Mom seemed a little distant U know." She noticed Abhay's face change.

Abhay-"I will have to work that out with her. She's a busy lady. Piya why the sudden interest in meeting my folks?"

Piya-"I'm just curious. U never speak about them. I want to know everything about U Abhay. That includes your family. U all come in a package. I've never known my family and ....."

Abhay(He could see Piya's voice trailed off. Great he made her sad)-"Ok. I will try my best but i'm warning U my folks aren't exactly normal."

Piya-"Abhay darling U aren't normal either. That's why i LOVE U so much. U are special."

Misha with Kabir trying to convince him to go speak to Piya. She could tell he was nervous. His face was funny and he couldn't help chewing his nails. Misha felt sorry for him.

Misha-"U should talk it out dude. Seriously. She wants to patch things up but only if U go first."

Kabir-"If i go she will eat me alive. I don't know how to say Sorry."

Misha-"How hard is it. Sorry! Be a man dude seriously U are letting the side down dude. That is not cool. Do U even care about your street cred? What will people say. Kabir scared to face a girl!"

Kabir-"Fine! But U have to be there."

Misha-"Ok bro. Thats the spirit."

Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago

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Kaheela

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

its very interesting ,so Piya wants to meet his parents, i wonder how will they react to Piya!, and how Piya and Kabir patch up!, update soon😳

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: ka7eela
its very interesting ,so Piya wants to meet his parents, i wonder how will they react to Piya!, and how Piya and Kabir patch up!, update soon😳

I will update 2morro. Don't have time today. Meet the parents should be fun. Only thing is Piya is looking for clues? Piya and Kabir patch up will also be in it. Plus more diary moments.