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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhz

fabulous part.............loved the dance sequence.......loved it vry muchhhhhhhhh....thnx for pm.........update sooooooooooooooooon

The dance sequence was a challenge in itself. I didn't want to copy anything from the show itself. How many people do Salsa in a club right? I wanted it light and fun but romantic at te sametime with a hint of turmoil for Abhay. Thanks for commenting on that. That was my high light for this update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prcns

nice one👏👏

Abhay proposed to Pia😍......wow. 😍

More like made it official they are a couple to the whole world. Glad U liked it.
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really nice update! keep it up.😉
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:::Dance OF Love:::

On the dance floor most of the couples dance toPitbulls "Hey Baby Drop it to the Floor."Piya moved in sync with Abhay wrapping her arms around him as if to warn off any females from prying him out of her arms. She could see how some of them were looking towards Abhay. She wasn't a possessive kind of person until she met Abhay. He brought out the fierceness in her. The need to keep Abhay as close to her as possible. Abhay made her feel like she was the most beautiful girl in the world. She felt blessed to have him in her life. Abhay fit in her life like they were meant to be together. Yet at the same time she'd felt like she didn't deserve Abhay. Abhay whispered to her that she's his Perfect little butterfly. Abhay seemed to always know what to say. Abhay looked over towards Kabir. He could feel anger rising from him. He felt bad for the guy but wanted him to get over Piya. It was her choice to be with whoever she wanted. Piya saw Abhay's eyes darting towards Kabir. Piya made Abhay look at her.
Piya-"Don't look over there at him Abhay. He's enjoying his date with T."
Abhay-"He's burning a hole in the back of my head. Trust me he doesn't like T that way. He's always wanted U."
Piya-"Abhay! We are just friends. This night is just about us. Not about anyone else ok."
Abhay-"Then U stop looking around at others too. U think i haven't noticed you looking around with your smile suddenly dropping."
Piya averts her eyes away from Abhay's face to the floor. Abhay lifts her head towards him. It made him mad that Piya didn't even know how beautiful she was to him that all the others pale in comparison to her. They weren't even in the same league as Piya she was the only one that made him whole. She made him feel as humane as possible despite his inner beast that made him seem inapproachable. Piya made Abhay feel overprotective towards her. He'd never allow anyone to ever hurt her. Not in this life or any other. He'd already done something he wasn't supposed to by contacting someone he wasn't supposed to. A connection that was still alive from his human life.
The DJ changed the song to Rihanna and Drakes "What's My Name?" The mood completely changed. Abhay moved Piya so close towards him that it took her by surprise. They swayed side to side.
Abhay-"Piya U do realize that i only have eyes for U. Not once have my gaze left yours apart from that moment i was looking at Kabir directly staring at us. While U on the other hand have been busy. U make feel alive."
Piya-"It's just so hard to believe U would ever want a plain Jane like me. Everytime i come close U pull away."
Abhay-"Piya if U only knew. Its not the place or time to reveal everything about me. Just trust that we are made for each other. No woman will ever make room in my life. I only cease to exist for U. Its hard for me to be sane around U. I don't deserve U."
Abhay finally gives her a light little kiss on her lips but pulls away quickly. Piya saw his eyes change all of a sudden. Piya didn't know what was going on. She didn't drink any alcohol but her eyes were seeing sudden changes. Abhay looks away. Piya knew she saw something. She wasn't going to let this drop but she wasn't going to confront him either. He would let the world know that they were an official couple. Abhay told Piya that he needed to go however he wouldn't be far. Piya showed her disappointment with a frown. Abhay had done a vanishing act on her again. She always wondered where he'd go and how it was possible for him to get back to her in record time.
The music stopped for a while. One of the managers from the VIP room arrived with a microphone in his hands. Someone was going to make an announcement. Piya looked at the person coming in from behind the manager. He was Abhay. What was he doing? Abhay took the microphone. Everyone stood still while he spoke.
"Hi everyone! Tonights drinks are all on me. Its the happiest moment of my entire existance. I want to divulge a small secret that i doubt is even a secret. Piya Jaiswal I LOVE U. I am the luckiest guy in the world for having U in my life and i want everyone to know this. Thats it people. Enjoy the rest of the night."
There was a loud applause as Abhay reached Piya she gave him a huge hug and the biggest kiss on his lips. She told him "I LOVE U TOO." He let go of her again. She was making him feel the after effects of her kisses. He didn't know how to control his desires. His need to be with her yet a fear rose inside of him. The fear of crushing her frail body. He couldn't go to that dark place. She made him want to drink. He'd never experienced this before. Then again he'd never reached this level of intimacy with her previous births.
Abhay looks over to Misha again. This girl sure knocked the drinks down trying to prove she could handle being one of the guys. Abhay pointed Piya towards Misha. They walked over towards her. Piya regretted leaving misha. She was her own worst enemy trying to be a guys girl.
Piya tries to stop Misha from drinking but when Misha has her mind set on something she does it. Misha ends trying to loosen Piya by daring her to take a drink to see who can handle their liquer. Piya reminds Misha that she's not of legal age to drink yet. Misha laughs it off. Piya looks at Abhay trying to get him to help her out. Abhay asks Piya to call Panchi while he takes her away from the bar. Misha resists using a little force but Abhay has her contained. He lifts her over his shoulder and takes her outside for some fresh air. He orders one of the workers to tell Piya where they are and to bring some coffee to wake Misha up.
Misha-"Put me down U brute. I was having fun." She was checking Abhay out. He was definately built well. His body was hard like marble. He had a cute butt. Misha couldn't stop laughing.
Kabir notices Abhay walking off with Abhay. He immediately jumps to the conclusion that Abhay is trying it on Misha who is in no state to be around guys like Abhay. Wasn't it enough for Abhay to steal the only girl that made him feel anything real from him. Ontop Piya was sucked in big time by his smooth talk. No someone had to stop this guy. Besides his date was a flop. Piya wasn't one bit bothered by T. He couldn't understand what possessed him to even take T out. She was a non starter. Hadn't he learnt his lesson she as a self absorbed little girl who hasn't grown up yet. She had no qualities that would even come close to Piya. His Piya. Why couldn't she love him? Why couldn't he tell her the truth or confessed sooner? All these questions was tearing him inside. He was past all this. Kabir told T that the dae was over but she wasn't even listening to him too busy on her iphone. Figures. Some women and their toys. T was attached to the iphone. All night that was all she did and all night it was always how do i looks Hot na. This girls vanity knew no bounds.
Abhay couldn't let Abhay to get away with murder. Misha needed his help. In this condition she was no good drunk. Kabir was sure Abhay got her drunk to take advantage of her while Piya would be in the dark about his dark side. Kabir rushed outside and charged into Abhay like a bull in a china shop. Abhay's quick reflexes stopped Misha from being knocked over. Abhay grimaced with his dark eyes challenged Kabir. They were positioned ready for a fight. Abhay left Misha on the floor. She wasn't fit enough to stand upright.
Abhay-"This isn't what U think. Misha needs help!"
Kabir ignored Abhay giving an explannation as he took his chance and went for Abhay and kept on charging at Abhay while Abhay kept moving superfast to avoid any real harm to Kabir. Even though he really wanted to cause some serious damage. Abhay could feel his anger come to the surface. He pushed Kabir away to the ground. Kabir got up again tiring slightly. Abhay couldn't touch Kabir just in case he couldn't stop himself. He didn't want the beast inside him unleashed. All the hard work he put in would have been for nothing. Abhay could hear Piya and Panchi with Danish.
Piya arrived with the cavalry. They could hear a brawl. Abhay didn't want anyone to see his powers at work so he stayed in one spot just ducking his head every time he saw Kabir lashing out. Piya came in screaming at Kabir to stop this madness. Panchi took care of her sister while Danish tried to control Kabir taking extra caution to the blows Kabir was throwing towards Abhay. Eventually Kabir got Abhay's face when Abhay's focus strayed towards Piya, He didn't want her getting in the middle of this. Piya being Piya rushed over to Abhay. This time shielding him away from Kabir. She put herself at risk for him.
Piya-"Kabir if U even once thought of me as a friend just go. Before i say something i regret. Keep away from Abhay and keep away from me. Go home or better yet get back to T."
Kabir-"Piya U don't understand he had Misha drunk! He was sneaking her out while U were still in there." Kabir pointed towards the Viper Club.
Piya-"Misha got herself in this state. Abhay was helping her. While i got Panchi to take care of her."
Kabir-"What by taking her out in the middle of the night out of the club outside. Open your eyes Piya."
Piya-"Did U even ask Abhay what he was doing with her? I highly doubt that. Instead of helping Misha U just went to attack mode."
Kabir-"But Piya is saw him he had her over his shoulder."
Abhay-"I tried to tell U but U kept charging at me even with Misha over my shoulders." Piya turned round to see Abhay's bloodied lips. Piya was enraged.
Kabir-"Just leave. I don't want to see U. Danish take him away." Piya could feel her tears stinging her eyes.
Panchi-"Misha get up darling. We gotta go home. How am i going to cover this from Mom. It was upto me to look out for her."
Kabir went home with Danish. He seemed upset by Piya's reaction. He was trying to be a good friend.He jumped the gun. Fight first ask questions later didn't help. Danish drove him home. He knew his cousin was disappointed with him. Kabir didn't feel so good about himself either.
Abhay helped Panchi with putting Misha in the back of the car. He told Piya to go with them. He didn't want Misha to get in trouble besides Panchi would need help getting Misha out of the car. Piya refused to go opting to be with Abhay. However Abhay was adamant Piya leave with Panchi. He assured her he'd be fine. The bruise would heal up. That was one positive about being a vampire he was indestructable. His healing powers amazed him though it was a slower process compared to how it was when he first turned. The fact that he drank animal blood made him weaker than most vampires. With Piya gone Abhay left in his own car back to his fortress. He wrote everything that transpired to his emotions all on his diary that he kept under his bed.
Piya and Panchi managed to get Misha out of the car and took her in her house. Misha mumbled something like super hero. Panchi shut her mouth. They went up the stairs and put Misha to bed. They came out of Misha's bedroom went downstairs. The lights came on. Their father Arnav went to see what all the fuss was about. Piya was shocked to see the guy he was someone she knew. She was pretty sure. He looked older. She was too tired. Panchi asked Arnav if it was ok if they could drop Piya off. Arnav was a warm hearted guy. Piya liked him. He reminded her of her Dad. She was only 7 or 8 when her Dad left their so called perfect little family. Arnav dropped her off. She thanked Panchi and Arnav and went to her room and crashed on the bed..
Piya had the same recurring nighmare like she always did. She knew every little scene that played in her brain. Italways started off good then the shots cut replaced by various other ones always with a guy Abhimanyu that she was certain of and a woman. She was seeing everything from her point of view. These heavy emotions that bombarded her mind like a storm that was never ending. Then her loved being stoned in front of her while she pleaded for his release. The pain. Her pain. Everything was red. ABHIMANYU. Darkness. It scared her so much.Piya could feel herself held by someone. It felt so real. His painful eyes face smeared with blood. Dark red Blood dried up. A last gasp "Abhimanyu I forgive U My love." Then everything was black. Piya half expected Abhay to be by her side but he never came. Piya tried to sleep but sleep wouldn't come. Piya started reading Abhays journal. It normally calmed her down



it ws sooo gud n sooo sweet! plz continue..i cant wait 2 read d nxt prt...kewl!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_maitri03

it ws sooo gud n sooo sweet! plz continue..i cant wait 2 read d nxt prt...kewl!!

I am so pleased U liked it. There's alot in store for our favourite couple. Piya will soon find out a truth she wasn't aware of.
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really nice update! keep it up.😉

Thanks again. I am trying to keep it as different from the show. All from my own imagination barring the campus scenes.
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:::Dear DiarY:::

Journal March 1400
The months are flying away but with Maithali by my side it doesn't seem like times slipping away. The more i get to know Maithali the more i love her. She is everything to me. The reason i exist seems to make sense when she is around me i feel alive. I am adjusting slowly with my thirst for blood. I just about manage not to want to pounce Maithali. She understands when i have to storm out the Cabin leaving her behind. It's still a struggle but i am adamant that i will perservere with my bloodlust. Hunting animals is getting easier although thats not what i hunger for its better than attacking a human thus making me a monster in every other way. I fear Maithali and i will get caught eventually by someone. She spends too much time with me. I'm not complaining but i fret something sisnister is round the corner.
I have met some of Maithali's friends. They all seem intrigued by me yet scared at the same time. Bijli seems quite taken by me. I liked the expession on Maithali. She had the green eyed monster all day long. Maithali kept close by keeping a distance between Bijli and me. I couldn't stop laughing. Pooja's a nice girl though a little quiet. I hope i didn't cause her any discomfort. I am still getting used to having humans around me. Not an easy task. They smell too good. Maithali didn't even speak to me for the rest of the day. I gave her the silent treatment which didn't go down too well. It was a joke. How was i to know she'd take it seriously?
April 1400
Maithali has invited me to meet up with her in the carnival a few months time. I'm not so sure if this is a good move on my part. I've not been near a crowd full of people apart from Maithali and her friends. How will i react? Will i be overwhelmed by this unsatiable hunger i am battling everyday. Will people know the truth? I don't want to let Maithali down but it could spell trouble for us as a couple. I can never refus Maithali. She means too much to me for her i will do anything. Risk anything. She says it's ok then so be it.
May 2010
Maithali sneaked in to see me at night. She never listens to anything. I told her its too risky what if someone saw us? The moon is full tonight. I hold my beloved and just dance to this beat Maithali is performing at the Carnival. She is a great dancer. Full of energy. Her moves make me crazy in Love with this enchantress that has me captured. I only ever think about her. She has invaded every part of my brain cell. The only other times are taken over by the need for blood. I shake that feeling off. We sit by the fire we both made holding each other. If this was heaven i am in it.
June 1400
Carnival time. Maithali brought me my favourite colours White and Blue clothes she made specially for me. I had no idea this girl was a domestic goddess. Was there anything she could not do? She wanted to see me in it. I got changed in it. While she had her back faced. I caught her peeping which made her jump when i spoke. Her face reddened. This amused me. She teased me with her eyes and ran out of the cabin. I rushed after her and held her in my arms. I asked her wasn't she going to ask me if i liked the clothes! She replied back in a simple "I don't care."
I told her anyway that it was Beautiful. Her face lit up. She gave me a peck on the cheek and left to go home.
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:::Dear DiarY:::

Journal 11th june 1400

I went against my own gut feeling to the Carnival with Maithali. She seemed ecstatic that we were going together. I wore the clothes Maithali made specially for me. There were flowers everywhere with food stalls filled with aromatic fragrance. Several stalls with toys, women's accessories' like jewelry to shoes. It was filled with colour and laughter. That is what I had missed being around civilization. The were balloons everywhere. Lots of lamps lit in the night. Dancers were getting ready to perform. A conjurer. It reminded me of my human life one I left behind yet ached to go back to. I lived a live in seclusion out of keeping ones I love safe. Maithali is like a kid in a candy store. Filled with excitement. Biji and Pooja met us up. They were aware of my presence but I did not scare them anymore it was like they had accepted me. Knowing Maithali might have had a hand in getting her friends more accustomed to my bizarre existence. I was relieved my hunger for blood remained at bay. Human scent was strong. It was everywhere but I was determined not to let it overpower me. I am in control. I kept telling this to myself.

We went to this knife throwing area where people are used as targets. This was out there. Dangerous. Maithali wanted a go but I refused to let her put herself in harms way. This was a different Woman not one I fell in love with. Did she have a death wish or just trying to scare the life out of me. I put my foot down and let her know that if anyone was the target it was me. I was dead after all. It wouldn't hurt even if the guy missed. She was stubborn to the very end until I told her I will do anything she wants so long as she doesn't endanger herself in any way. She agreed. The knife thrower started throwing the knifes very fast. They outlined my body. Maithali was cross like I spoilt her fun. She'd told me I'd have to dance in front of everyone with the dance I'd helped her practice.

Maithali showed me some of the things she loved like pottery making. It's a complex form of art. I must admit. She paid the man as we both got a lesson on how to make it. I have found that I am a quick learner. I did mine in record time. I suppose my keen eye for detail and coordination came in handy. Maitali was pleased. I haven't seen this playful side to her. She amazes me so much. I held her hand to put right the wet clay that almost went pear shape after Maithali got a little carried away and started giggling in the process. This was fun the both of together in public. It made it seem like we were a real couple. Pooja had lightened up and decided to join us with her fried Krishan. She seems to be taken by him. Maithali had told me she was going to dance in the Carnival with her friends so it was my turn to come good with my promise. Iit would be fun but what if his cover would be blown. He was so pale like the dead.

The announcement was made for the crowd to gather round for a special dance in honor of the chief of the village. Maithali, Bijli, Pooja along with several other girls started off the dance with men playing the big drums. Musicians were playing instruments the girls dance beat for beat. I had my eyes on Maithali she is a fantastic dancer I always knew it but I didn't know she was this good. I was a little envious as normally it was me she danced for. The boys jumped in. Maithali gave me my cue to join in. I came and let go of myself for the first time. I never felt more free. I was with the one I loved and we were like everyone else for this moment. We went round and round holding each others hand. Then swapped partners until we got back to our original partners.

We didn't hug each other as it wasn't acceptable to do so in front of elders but Maithali's cousins had spotted us together. Her father was present. He looked like he was out for blood. My blood. This was a bad idea. Why did I listen toy U Maithali? I told Maithali I couldn't handle this scent of being around too many humans. With the length of time I'd spent it was a miracle I lasted as long as I did. I retreated back but told Maithali's friends to keep an eye on her and not to allow her to come find me. It wasn't safe. With that I vanished.

30thJune 1400

I saw Maithali again with a small bag. She was upset. I couldn't bare to see her like this. She wanted to run away from her family. They wanted her to marry a guy from her village she'd never met before. She had shamed her family by cavorting with a stranger. They were angry at her disobedience. She was never at home. After a long heated discussion they were emotionally black mailing her to leave me and wed some guy she had never met before. Maithali appeared like she was on the edge about to flip anytime. I listened to her whilst I tried to calm her down in my arms. Maithali blabbed everything about me apart from my being a blood sucker to her family. They weren't having any of it. It was a no point blank. She told me her parents had her under house arrest. She'd persuaded Bijli to help her.

Personally as much as I hated to admit it her parents were right. Maithali deserved better than anything I could give her. I told her maybe it was the right thing to do. I was unpredictable. Only just controlled my thirst. I couldn't give her a family she'd desire, children, security I was a demon in hiding. Maithali needed more than a half fulfilled life of what I could give her. It tore me apart telling her this. The reaction I got was as I expected Maithali wanted to throttle me then hang herself. Her flowing tears were my undoing. I finally gave her my answer I will take her far away from all of this but I warned her it wouldn't be a bed of roses. The road ahead was bleak. Maithali would miss her family. I knew what that did to a person. She said she'd thought it through. As long as she was with me it would fine by her.

I could hear people in the distance. Maithali had been followed by her family. Bijli was with them crying. There was a priest with them. What was going on? We were cornered. I was weak. what were they doing to me? They entered the cabin and snatched Maithali away from me while they sprayed some water. I was stunned. Water never had this effect on me before so why now? The priest was muttering a prayer i wasn't familiar with. It seemed to make me go weak in the knees before i lost conciousness.

When i gained conciousness it was dark. I was disorientated. I was surrounded by a crowd filled by villagers. Shamans and Priests. I was bound in a cage. My skin burnt. Maithali! Where was she? He didn't couldn't see her. My body was charred by some water that the priests splashed all over me. It finally clicked. It was Ganga Jal. So i did have a weakness. Men huddled around trying to get the best view. There was murmuring, gasps of awe filled with disgust. My hearing was weak but i could pinpoint Maithalis cries. Her voice had gave him hope that she was fine although i ached to be close to her. To stop her tears. She was making herself ill. He could hear her voice going. Did they torture her? They wouldn't would they? Her own father? Her cousin's? If they so much as hurt her there would be hell to pay so help him! He'd find the strength to break free if he had to. At this point he felt helpless. His body was regenerating. Healing fast. He could see all eyes on him looking on in disgust, with hatred. For the first time he felt like the prey since becoming what he was.
He could hear Maithali pleading with her family.
Maithali-"Please free him. Don't let him suffer. Or let me suffer the same fate as him. He did nothing wrong."
Maithalis father-"He's an animal and he's got U under his spell. The priests have done all they could to free U but nothing is working. U still defend that devil."
Maithali-"Don't do this! Father listen to me please he hasn't done anything. He didn't choose this!" (Her voice trailed off with sobs of despair.)
1st July 1400
They brought Maithali in. Her eyes killed me inside a thousand times over. They were blood shot. Dark circles. Maithali what was she doing to herself? She was pale like she was starving herself. At this rate she was on a suicide mission. They made her look at me. Her dark eyes never left mine. New set of Tears forming. I struggled against the bars. Her father and Cousins were observing us. As we're the villagers. Her father stated what he thought of us! How can U love this demon despite knowing what he is? He is an abomination. U can never be together he will be the death of U!
Maithali-"So be it. Do what U must. I will die with my last breath loving him. If i die at his hand it will be better than i killing myself because that is what i will do i warn U. He never made me fall for him it just happened. I have tried to reason with U make U see that he has a soul. He has never harmed anyone despite all the torture he's gone through. U think this isn't torture enough to see him cage up like some animal. You've punished him to the extent that is inhumane yet no harm remains permanent. He heals. U guys are worse than animals. I will always love him. For me he is not a monster but a piece of me. My soulmate."
I looked directly at Maithali shocked at her admission. She was going to go that far. No way i won't let her. She didn't have the enrgy to hold her gaze. One of the villagers throws a stone at Maithali.
"Stone her to death. She is possessed by this creature. Let her die with him. Execute her love but let him see her die before him at nightfall. He preys at night so we strike at nightfall."
Maithalis father objects as the villagers take his daughter away from her. Maithali has no fight left in her as she gives in. I wasn't going to let her die. Not on my watch. I washeavily guarded. Whatever they did seemed to be wearing off. Either that or i was becoming immune to it. I broke frees with a lot of effort. They brought Maithali over. Her father was sedated. The villagers were armed with stones. Some of the old folks started throwing them at Maithali. I quickly went out trying to protect Maithali with my body as a sheild. Maithali tries to Sheild me with her body. Despite being so frail all she wanted was to keep me safe. I could hear her cries Maithali-"Leave us alone. Please don't do this! Leave Abhimanyu."
I shouted out "If U care for your life Leave us. Leave her!"
They continued to attack her. attack us and suddenly i had snapped. Attacking everyone in sight. I saw red and lunged for everyone tearing men women apart. Sucking the life out of them. Quenching my thirst for blood. The more blood i drank the better i felt. My strength had come back. I was an animal that saw no humanity just food. There was a pool of blood with the ground covered by bodies piling on top of each other. People trying to run for fear of death of ME. I was invincible. On fire. The more i drank the more i craved blood. It was overwhelming. I became the creature they all despised. The thing i was afraid of is what i'd turned into. Maithali's father arrived trying to kill me but Mithali shielded me as she was stabbed by her father and fell into my arms and i did the unthinkable. I had bit into her tender skin and sucked the blood out of her. Pure ambrosia. The memories had flashed in my head and i came back to earth. My love lying in my arms. Her limp body had me come back to my senses. I saw the blood. Of the people i'd killed. Of my Love i had drained. I screamed so loud it pierced Maithalis father's ear drums.
Maithali(In a whisper)-"Abhimanyu. I'm glad i die at your hands. Don't punish yourself. Promise me U will Be safe for me. I forgive U. I LOVE UUUUU...."
I cried tears of blood at the loss of Maithali at me hands. I cradled her in my arms. Staring at her lifeless body wishing to die. I never promised her anything but her words echoed in my ears. I looked at her father. He was in shock at the death of his daughter. We had killed her. I told him to leave i spared his life. I went to a place i vowed never to go to.
Present
Piya was shaking in rememberance. The vivid dreams. They began to make sense. Why was she reliving a memory that wasn't hers. Her own heart ached for Abhimanyu. For Maithali. For their unfinished love. A love that could never be united. She had started to cry so much that her clothes were wet. Her eyes stung. So this was what it felt like to love someone to the extent that they would rather die than be apart from them. Did i feel like that with Abhay? I knew i loved him but this couple went beyond the norms of all boundaries in Love. If there was a tragic love story this was it. Abhay reminded her so much of Abhimanyu. His eyes spoke more to her than his words did. She felt at times he was keeping something from her. She seeked answers but feared what it would be.
Piya looked at herself in the mirror. Dark circles from lack of sleep. It was time for Uni. She got ready and left. Abhay was already waiting for her. He looked dashing as ever. Whereas she looked like she'd seen better days. Misha was as expected looking worse for wear. Serves her right. Drinking. What was she thinking? Abhay gave Misha a sympathetic look.
Piya-"So how are U feeling?"
Misha-"Don't speak so loud man. My head is banging. By the way Thanks U guys for U know last night. Abhay I'm sorry Panchi gave me an ear full. I didn't mean to cause more problems with U and Kabir."
Abhay-"Its cool. Its not like we saw eye to eye anyway. He was just looking out for U. Both."
Piya-"No need to defend Kabir Abhay he should've seen reason. Listened to U first before gunning for U like that. He could've hurt U. Yet U never once laid a finger on him. Why? Abhay why? Kabir is a good fighter that's what everyone's been saying. U should've blocked him."
Abhay-"Trust me if i hit back i don't know if i could hold myself back. First rule of Karate only fight for self defence and if its needed. Kabir's punch wasn't anything i couldn't handle."
Piya touched Abhay's lips. There was no cut or sign of any battle wounds. Strange. Magic. could it be Magic? No it was something else. Piya saw Kabir and rolled her eyes at him. Completely blanking him as they head to their class.
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hey really nice update...OMG abhay and mathali had a really sad eading..poor those two oh well abhay can finish his unfinished love story with piya now...really well written and planned...keep up the great work and do write more soon...thankx 4 the pm..

❤️MONA
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG. I feel SO bad for Abhay and Maithali. They had such a brutal ending. 🥺

I could feel the pain, the shock, the loss, the love, the promise, the guilt, the remorse. Beautifully written! 👏👏

Thanks for the PM! And continue soon. You rock! 😃

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