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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: tej_deep

Its very interesting. Plz continue.


Thanx so much...will update 2nite


Originally posted by: swetha10

nice one.. hmm dev seems really dangerous... do continue soon


hahah thanx so much..yeah dev is creapy and scary

Originally posted by: .sireesha.


wow thats a Fabulous Story dear.........👏......

Loved it.......❤️.......

Thats Very Interesting...................

OMG what will happen to Geet now?😲😲

I hope Maan saves Geet in time.................

Eagerly waiting for the next part..............
Pls Update Sooooooooooooon...............


Thank you so much..and thanx for round of applause lol..ahha geet will be reavealed soon


Originally posted by: krati5

i'll b waiting 4 nxt update


thanx will update 2nite


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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sanjulee

this fiction is very different from others

i love the way u written the story
maan is detective & geet is kidnapped
i m eagerly waiting 4 the nxt part
how geet & maan will meet
plzz cont soon
& plzz pm me!!!
thanks


Thank you so much...will update 2nite


Originally posted by: ansah

awesome update it was dear...loved it

hope for maan and geet meeting
in next one


thank you...


Originally posted by: Sadiq24

Awesome ff please add me to
Your pm list thanks


u have been added ot the list lol

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

the story is moving in a gud pace....
very interesting continue soon


Thank you will update 2nite



Thank you

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Just read chapter 2 and 3.

OMG Dev is the kidnapper. And who's the person he's working for?
Geet's kidnapped :(
Lets see what Maan does now.
Update soon😊



Thankyou so much..iwll update 2nite...the person will be revealed slowly lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Great Update!

I'm eagerly waiting for Maan and Geet to meet! The story is coming out great! I wonder why the heck the master guy is kidnapping these girls! Very Mysterious! Waiting for you to give us some clues about him! I hope you update really soooooonn! -Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Note: Hopefully this is long enough lol...sorry if its not up to expectations..but I find this kind of challenging to write about....since I want to reveal everything slowly and develop plot of each character...
Chapter 4:
Dev drove somewhere far...where they were only surrounded by trees everywhere...he looked at Geet in the backseat who was still unconscious...Dev stopped the car in the middle of nowhere and picked up Geet and placed her over his shoulders....and started walking deep into the woods...he was hitchhiking for about 20 minutes...until he saw who he was looking for...

Master: Is that the girl?
Dev: Yeah, the one you asked for
Dev gave Geet to the master while master gave Dev a briefcase
Master: here is your payment
Dev: Is it the right amount?
Master gave him an angry look...
Dev got scared...uh um I was just double checking...
Master: Don't ever question me...and now go away from here before anyone catches you
Dev left with the money and drove back to his home..."Sorry girls what can I do...money is everything these days" and laughed out loud...

Dev heard his phone ringing...checked the caller ID and smiled
Dev: Hey Maan
Maan: Hey Dev where are you?
Dev: ohh I had some work to take care of
Maan: ohh well come over to my house Dadi is waiting for you
Dev: umm ok I will be there soon
Maan: Alright bye
Dev: Bye
Sorry Maan but I will make sure that you don't successed in this case...

Geet woke up in the still feeling dizzy and unable to think straight...everything was blurry around her...it took her couple of minutes to adujst her eyes..she then realize that she was in a room...everything in the room was so perfectly placed it seemed new....she was on a bed with her hands tied...she tried twisting her hands around but to no avail it was too tight..

Geet: Where am I? She started screaming...HELP! HELP! Somebody get me out of here!
Suddenly a door opened...a man with another mask on came in the room...Geet thought he is not the same person that was at my house..he is different...the way he is walking...
Master: Hello Miss. Handa..I see that you have awoke
Geet in an angry tone: Who are you..where am i...
Master: laughed...still have the attitude I see...well we have to do something to break your attitude and teach how to talk properly
Geet: Untie my hands right now and let me go
Master: Is this a way to behave after all the trouble I went into to make sure you are comfortable? Look around this room...I gave you a comfortable bed to sleep on and even provided you some clothes...and you are talking back to me....(coming closer to Geet)
Geet stared at him in shock as he gets closer and closer....soon he was sitting on the bed with her and leaned closer to her face
Master: think of this as your own home as my guest...but the only difference is that you can't leave...
Geet: Why are you doing this? I don't know you?
Master: but i know you...so that is good enough....I only collect the best and beautiful girls..for my own pleasure...but too bad I have some business to take care of right now...I will be back tomorrow and touched her face....
Geet tried to jerk his hand off...
Master holds her cheeks really tightly: don't do anything that you might regret later...He unties her hands...make yourself comfortable...As he was about to leave the room...
Master: ohh before I leave...there are couple of rules you have to follow...
1.) Don't EVER try to call out for help or else the only punishment would be death
2.) Don't try to find a way to get out of this place because there is no escape
Please try not to break these rules...

As he left, Geet sat on the bed hugging her legs really tigthley and started crying...she had no clue who he was or why her...is he the same person that kidnapped
other girls?
Geet decided to make some mental notes so if or when she escapes she has something to tell the police about...

Precap: Master: you shouldn't have broken the house rules
Girl: Please please give me another chance...
Master: Sorry, I don't believe in second chances...
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Loved the update well done and keepit up.👏...... if you can plzz update 1 tomorrow 😊

Edited by maaneetfan123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
dont tell Geet i'll raped by the kidnapper pls do something Dev is evil number one when is Maan gonner find out about Dev evil plan pls do cont soonnnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
well continue your FF .
its differnt to others and intersting also
you have potenail to write the suspence so do it
update ....nicely writen
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Awesome!!!!!

Oh no!! Who's the girl in the precap? I'm scared!
It might be Geet...
I really hope Maan finds her soooooon!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
hey just read ur whole FF right now and its really good.
very interesting storyline.. hope Geet and the other girls are saved by our very own MSK!
It reminds me a bit of the movie "Taken".. watch it if you haven't already!
con't soon plzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
wow. interesting story. plz add me to ur pm list

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