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Trisha

@Tishuu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#861

Simi...........Y o y do I feel the guy is no other than Adi.....

think of it..............no one knew that MSK will visit that place...other than Adi........ - and vicky knows better than to stalk MSK....afterall he's concerned with killing geet

erm apart from that..........

theres other moments toooo.......hmmmm i duno - my 6th sense says its him....or someone else involved in the detective business very close to maan...........

hmmm i know u cant tell me.................n im not asking u to....well not unless it's in the update......but if it is him - then be prepared........i shall be couriering you a load of stuff that i want you to throw on him!!!!!!!

No one cheats with MSK

and I mean NO ONE!!!!!!!

Or else....apart from Geet Handa......(soon to be Geet Khurana) they'll have ME: Trisha Tishuu Tishii K to answer to!!!!! (just in case u wondering - the K is not for Khurana....hehehehe and nor is it my current surname.........but it will be soon 😛)

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#862

Originally posted by: shivangi783
You're keeping the suspense about the 'guy' intact in this update too.
Is it Adi?

Originally posted by: swetha10
sad update.. geet in coma.. poor maan felt really bad for him.. whoz maan's stalker now?? very curious to knw.. do continue soon

Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ
gr8 part..... loved it

Thank you guys!
haha am glad you guys like the suspence part hopefully I keep doing the smae good job if you agree
will update soon
To be continued 😆

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: NoorFatima
have one thing to say: UPDATE SOON zyada torture mt krna plzzzz

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
perfect n awesome part

Originally posted by: chubzy
Ths story has lots of suspence! Very intriguin.

Originally posted by: trishap
great part

Thank you everyone!
the update will be up very soon!
Will continue soon!

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious
fantastic 👏

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
OMG....... Geet again in Danger!!!!!!!!😭

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
Loved da update
Do continue
It was amazing

Originally posted by: red135b
just came across your ff. i think it's fantastic. please keep it up

Thank you everyone!!!!
Geet's fate will be revealed!
Red135b you are on da pm list if you are still interested 😆😆
Will update soon!

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: i rok
nice update....

Originally posted by: Ameena4Eva
awsome update loved it
love maaneet
omg i think its vicky in geets rm
plz update soon

Originally posted by: lody
Am angrey and sad no more word

Thank you everyone!!!!
Will update soon!

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: Tishuu
Simi...........Y o y do I feel the guy is no other than Adi.....

think of it..............no one knew that MSK will visit that place...other than Adi........ - and vicky knows better than to stalk MSK....afterall he's concerned with killing geet

erm apart from that..........

theres other moments toooo.......hmmmm i duno - my 6th sense says its him....or someone else involved in the detective business very close to maan...........

hmmm i know u cant tell me.................n im not asking u to....well not unless it's in the update......but if it is him - then be prepared........i shall be couriering you a load of stuff that i want you to throw on him!!!!!!!

No one cheats with MSK

and I mean NO ONE!!!!!!!

Or else....apart from Geet Handa......(soon to be Geet Khurana) they'll have ME: Trisha Tishuu Tishii K to answer to!!!!! (just in case u wondering - the K is not for Khurana....hehehehe and nor is it my current surname.........but it will be soon 😛)

TISHUUU!!!!
I scroll up from my comments that I am replying back and see your name lol
hmm Adi or soemoen else will be revealed
Tishii K???? WHAT??? YOU SERIOUS!!!!
I know I only know you thru India-forums but I am very very very very happy for you soon to be mrs.lastname K hahah how lucky are you tht ur "New" last name is going to be with K like Maan's last name 😆
CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#867

HEY GUYS!!! Here is the next update I have one request don't kill me 😆😆😆😆😆 On the serious note this fan fic is reaching its climax but not till like after couple more parts BUT if it is going to end I will have one question for you guys..but for now am going to save that question until later!!! 😆😆😆😆

Until than Enjoy!!!

Chapter 24

The next day Maan decided to visit the place again. He walked through the thick jungle again...He knew in his heart that he is getting closer and closer to catching Vicky but he needed to find out the place fast and arrest Vicky as soon as possible and stop his crimes forever...he felt bad for his wife who doesn't know what kind of a monster she married but there was always one quesiton that played in his head...how was he home at the time that Geet was attacked?? Was she lying? Is she part of the plan too?? Then his mind diverted toward Geet...her lifeless body lying in the hospital covered with bandages and with broken bones...he shook his head to get that image off of his head before he gets mad...he started thinking about one thing and one thing only...VICKY!
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Back in the hospital...Geet is in her room still lying there in breathing through her life support...the guy entered her room...he looked to see if it was clear in the room...he goes near Geet and stands beside her bed...
The Guy: Too bad you have to go like this (he bends down and whispers in her ear) You really were beautiful..I have to say the best piece that Master has collected as of yet (he caresses her hand) You have really pretty hands...I don't feel like doing this..but what can I do I have to follow Masters order and keep busy Maan distracted before he finds out the truth...(He whispers in her ears) Don't worry we will send Maan to join you soon...

He goes over to the side of the bed to pull the plug which held Geet's life...when Geet started moving her hands slowly...her heartbeats started to increase and her body started twitching..the guy looked at her shocked and scared..he stopped midway from pulling out the plug..he looked around the room to hide somewhere...he could hear the nurses running to the room...before he could sneak out of the room...he saw the door knob turning..he quickly hide behind the door...nurse entered the room and looked at Geet while The Guy slipped out of the room without being noticed...
Nurse paged the doctor: Doctor..doctor please come in room 202

Doctor came running in the room soon after: I can't believe this..she came out of her coma..stabilize her condition and call her relatives..

Nurse: Sure doctor
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Maan came in the open space after walking in the thick jungle like forest...he looked around each and every corner very carefully...he tried thinking like Geet..the cliff that she had jumped from..is about three miles away..so from the cliff to where he is standing..the house should be somewhere close by...he looked near trees and bushes...he removes some leaves from the ground and notices some very faint footprints...he starts digging on the ground near by where he himself don't know what he is looking for...after few minutes of digging he gets up frustrated not able to find anything...he kicks on the tree "ugh where did you hide them Vicky!" Maan was walking away when he heard a hollow sound coming from under him...He bends down and removes the fake grass that was covering the wooden door...he opens the wooden door very slowly...he quickly takes out his gun and starts going down the stairs....

He slowly walks down the stairs not making any noise...at the end of the stairs there was a big wooden door...he opened it slowly...it was everything the way Geet had described..wooden stairs..furnished room... The living room was cleared...he goes against the wall listening for any movements...after a while he quickly goes in the hallway...he points his gun straight...the hallway had many doors..he assumed all leading to different rooms where girls would be held...he looked at every painting on the wall "He likes to collect paintings...that too expensive..." He opened one of the door slowly...he saw a girl sitting there in the corner...she looked at him and than she looked at the gun in his hand...she started going more and more against the wall as if she is trying to disappear within the walls of this nightmare house...
Maan: Don't worry am not going to hurt you..I am here to save you..what is your name?

"My name is Anjali" (Still showing fear in her eyes)

Maan puts away his gun knowing that she is scared of him... " My name is Maan..Detective Maan Singh Khurana..you can trust me" He goes over to the girl and sits besides her.. "I am not going to hurt you..I am here to help you and others from here" The girl hugged Maan holding him tightly, Maan stroked her head and let's her cry..the fear and nightmare that she went through all this while...After a while Maan holds her by the shoulder "Anjali listen..do you know if the master is home?" She looked at him with fear hearing his name...Maan continued: "Don't worry he won't do anything...how many other girls are here you know?"
Anjali: Maybe two or three more are here

Maan: Ok Anjali listen I need a favor now listen to me very carefully ok

Anjali: Alright

Maan: I want you to help other girls escape while I make sure that the house is clear..after you free the girls..at the end of the hallway...there is a living room...in the living room to the right...you will see a big wooden door..the door will lead to a staircase...the staircase will lead to outside...you got that?

Anjali: Yeah I got it...what about you?

Maan: Don't worry about me...first do what I say...ohh one more thing...when you are outside...here take my phone and call the police station right away and notify the police officers that Det. Maan Singh Khurana found the hideout of the master and give them the location (he tells her the location)

Anjali: Alright...

Maan: now go and hurry while I make sure that the house is clear...

Anjali left the room after following the instructions of Maan while he checked the room making sure that it is clear..he went to the hallway...he stayed right behind Anjali as she let out all the girls... "hurry" the girls left towards the end of the hallway toward their escape..Maan checked every room to see if anyone were left behind and if it was clear...soon the house became quiet..he started going toward the living room when someone hits him on the head...he turns around slowly and was shocked... "Dev??" He smiled at Maan.. "surprised to see me Maan?" Soon everything around turned black as he fainted on the floor...

Precap: And we twist and twist!

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#868

😲😲😲😲😲😲DEV😡😡😡😡😡😡

That's it - don't hold me back...........He is in for it now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh myyyyyyy - how the hell did he get out??? See What I mean.......keeping Maan distracted??? and Dev getting out of jail.....only one person my finger points at................ADI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Arghhhh

Y are all Adi's total dimbooooooooooo's.................... (yh I have a huge thing against Adi's now........- not the show one tho - hes a cutie😳)

Oh noooooooooooooo - he doesn't know what he has unleashed - I knew it.......him finding the girls and all - it was tooo goood to be true!!!!!

hmmmm

Ok back to your reply earlier

erm erm erm lol I realised I hadnt commented for a while and wanted to comment and then realised you were replying back - and then had a slight inkling you might miss it by accident lool

hmmm welll - erm erm it's not final final....but erm....😳😳😳 hehehehhee............there's no harm in dreaming positive right?😆 hehehehe Thanks tho........

Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#869

Lovely update.
Twiste after twists
I demand next part soon.
Lol just can't wait.
Ty for the pm
X

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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Azmii

@Azmii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#870

Hey.. I have been a silent reader for a long time now so i just touche that its time for me to comment :p
Ur ff is just too gooood, just luv to read the ff's
The update was fab

Edited by Azmii - 14 years ago