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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys: Here is the next update!! I hope it was long enough as promised!!!!😆😆😆😆

Chapter 17

Maan had called Geet on his way to her house when picking her up…Geet was already sitting outside waiting for Maan with her stuff…he pulled up and saw a suitcase…

Maan: Yeh sab kya hai?

Geet: My stuff that I needed to get

Maan picked up the suitcase: did you pack your whole house in here…its so heavy

Geet: My books and other stuff that I need are in here

Maan: intni saree books? I can't even carry the suitcase

Geet: do mujhe mera suitcase…main kudhi utha sakthi hoon…(She goes and grabs the suitcase from him)

Maan: Geet what are you doing…let me carry it…why do you have to fight?

Geet: you started the fight..I didn't…chup chap carry nahi kar sakte…you are talking as if you have to carry the bag for 2 miles

Maan: Alright baba..sorry can you sit in the car now…we have to go

Geet: Fine…(she goes to sit in the car..Maan got in and looked at Geet)

Maan: Geet..listen

Geet didn't reply him back and kept looking outside of the window: Let's go we have to go back

Maan: Listen Geet…you cannot go anywhere alone anymore…

Geet looked at him curiously: Why?

Maan: Because we believe the master is someone very powerful! So I don't want to take any chance

Geet: who is he Maan?

Maan: that is not important for now your safety is important..I am going to drop you off at home and meet Adi

Geet: Fine…

Maan: Don't worry Dadima is coming today and she doesn't know anything about Dev…so

Geet: Maan don't worry I won't tell Dadima anything

Maan smiled at Geet: Thank you Geet

Vicky woke up in the morning and saw his butler bringing him tea…

Servant: Good morning Sir

Vicky: Good morning…where is your madam

Servant: She is downstairs sir

Vicky: Alright you may go now

He went to the bathroom and took the shower. He still couldn't get Geet out of his head..he could still picture her face…he loved her eyes and the fear she showed in them…He wondered if Dev has done his job? He quickly got out of the shower, wrapped a towel around himself. He went outside to his bedroom after making sure that no one is coming…he opened his secret box which included a cell phone and many different SIM Cards which were untraceable…he puts one of the SIM Card in the phone and calls Dev. He gets irritated when Dev doesn't pick up… "Did something happen"

"What Happened?"

He turned around shocked to see his wife Pari standing there: Vicky: huh nothing sweetheart…what are you doing up here?

Pari: "I wanted to see if you were up"

Vicky: Well you see me…I am up and ready

Pari: "Alright come downstairs quick I have breakfast ready for you"

Vicky comes close to her: What's the hurry with the breakfast... (He smiles and picks her up walking towards their bed"

He smiled at all the girls that were looking at him while he entered his office…this was his usual thing that he got accustomed too. He had good features; good body and he knew how to talk to people to get what he wants. Losing was not in his dictionary. He went straight to his cabin and called his secretary in. Not only did he collect extraordinary women for his private collection but he also just hires the best for his company. His secretary gave him the list of meetings for today and the messages that came for him.

He sat on his desk after she left closing his eyes. Something was wrong. His instincts never lie. Dev didn't return his phone call nor gave him a report of what happened with Geet. Is she dead or alive? He took out another cell phone which he keeps in his office with different SIM card. He called Dev again still no answer. He was getting frustrated. "No one betrays me!! No one!!!"

Something caught his eyes…

Delhi Times

The kidnapper has been caught!

An anonymous source recently came forth with new information about the kidnappings in Delhi. Dev Malhotra was arrested two days back by Detective Maan Singh Khurana who might have a helping hand with the kidnapping. The girls' ages were around 18-25. The source also revealed Dev Malthotra was also behind the kidnapping of his own wife Naintara Rathod whose mutilated body was found couple of weeks back in the jungle.

Is Dev the only person involved in kidnappings?

If not, who is the real person behind this?

Where are the rest of the girls? Are they still alive or dead?

These questions are still yet to answer, until than it is advised for all parents not to let their kids leave the house without proper precautions.

He read the newspaper again and again…each time he read the headlines his blood boiled…he threw the paper on the floor in anger…

"NO! I will not spare you Detective Maan Singh Khurana..Wait a minute according to the newspaper Dev was arrested the same night when he was suppose to kill Geet…that means Geet might be still alive" He smiled and dialed a phone call to someone…

Maan and Adi had come up with a decision to leak the information about Dev being behind this kidnapping hoping to bring out the master in front of them…they knew that when the master read the news headlines he would probably do something that will be enough for them to trap them. Maan had no time to inform Geet about their plans the night he dropped her home and by the time he came home after the meeting it was 2 am….

Maan went downstairs knowing Geet and Dadima would be at the table already…he didn't want Dadima to find about Dev this way but he had no choice but to leak the information..he was getting desperate to bring the master in front of everyone..he also knew that he would have to be extra cautious in protecting his family especially Geet.

Maan: Good morning Dadima

Dadima showed Maan the newspaper without saying anything: What is this beta?

Maan: Dadima it is the truth

Dadima: It can't be Dev..how?

Maan told Dadima the whole story of how Dev tried to kill Geet after seeing her…the fight between him and Dev…after interrogating him the revelation of kidnapping his own wife just for money…at the end of the story Maan holds Dadima's hand

Maan: Am sorry Dadima but it is the truth…I had to leak the story so that the master can come forth…I know that he would do something after reading the newspaper…

Dadima: I am not worried about myself I am worried about Geet (who was just sitting at the table with her head down)

Maan: Don't worry Dadima…I didn't reveal any information about Geet…the Master still might think that she is dead but just in case I will have full security around the house..and Geet

Geet looked at Maan: Ji

Maan: Don't leave the house…if you need to go anywhere let me know I will take you…no phone calls or anything…even when you are going in the garden make sure that you have someone with you at all times

Dadima: Maan aren't you taking it too far?

Maan: No Dadima…the master is very cleaver and I know if he does find out that she is alive he will come after her or harm her…

Dadima: alright beta jaisa aap thik samje…main upar apne kamre main jaa rahi hoon...(to give them some time alone)

Maan: ji Dadima…(Maan came and sat right next to Geet as Dadima left…he hold her chin to make her look at him) Geet I won't let anything happen to you..why are you so quiet?

Geet: who kuch nahi bus thori is daar gaye thi

Maan: mere hote hue tumhe darne ki koyi zaroorat nahi hai

Geet: ji mujhe maloom hai (both looks at each others eyes..Geet started thinking about their first kiss she felt shy..she removes his hand from her chin and puts her head down)

Maan smiles seeing her blush…he comes closer towards Geet puts his hand on hers and whispers "Don't worry I won't kiss you right now…" She felt butterflies in her stomach hearing him say that…she tries to remove her hand from his grip but he only held her hand tighter pulling her closer to him…he was about to put his other hand on her waist to hold her tighter when one of the guards came in… "Damn kabhi phone jaa phir kabhi log disturb karte hai" he lets go of Geet, the minute he does she runs away from the table to go straight to her room…

Guard: Sorry sir but we have media people outside of the house trying to barge in

Maan: Alright hold them there I will be out right now…

Guards: Theek hai Sir

Maan came outside after few minutes to see his whole driveway filled with media from every corner…he already advised Geet and Dadima not to come outside..

Reporter1: Sir what have you to say about Dev Malhotra?

Maan: I have nothing to say about him except that he is the kidnapper

Reporter2: How do you know for sure? Is there a proof?

Maan: Sorry I can't reveal that to you…we had a source

Reporter2: What kind of source?

Maan: Sorry I can't say anything about the source

Reporter3: What have you to say about Dev kidnapping his own wife? Is it true that he used your best buddy? How did you feel when you were making the arrest?

Maan: Dev is a disgusting human being that I have ever come across in my life. He sold his own wife for money. I would pray that there is no one out there as sick as Dev who can sell his own family for rupees. As for making the arrest my first duty is to protect innocents and I have done as that…

Reporter1: Are there more people involved in the kidnappings?

Maan: We believe that might be one more person involved in this kidnappings who is the real mastermind…I would just like to let that person whoever or wherever he is..I will find you!

Please excuse me now…(Maan started walking to his car to meet Adi…he made a phone call to Adi who was also having the same problems there with the media…)

Precap: Catch me if you can Detective Khuarana!


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Posted: 14 years ago
meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee SIMI
i is first again - sorry i had to read ur update a few times..somehow i forgot what happened after the kiss - lol not ur fault - its mine - my minds blank at the moment- but yh....omg i totally loved it
oh no - this vicky singhania person rings a bell to my head - i hear it go TING but cant figure out y
hmmmmmm i hope he thinks geet is dead and doesnt cause her more harm
n omg i have got to add when he held her hand and said he wont kiss here right then - forget geet...i was blushing!!!!!!!!!!!
hehehe
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update!!! can't wait to see what Vicky's planning!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
today i was missing its update now we have one............too good yaar...........love ya toon.......keep the good work...BAKI ka update padhne ke bad...lol



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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveee the update.
Continue soonnn.
Thanx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope nothing happen to poor Geet she been through a lot good job sis brilliant update pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wicked update loved it
love love maaneet
plz upadte soonxx!:):):)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmmm! Story gettin more n more intresting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
simi... d update was nice....
loved d maaneet moments....
m scared 4 geet, hope c n dadi wl b fine...
do cont soon.... thnx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Update
Loved it
Continue soon!
Thanks for the PM!

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