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Posted: 14 years ago
babe when r u updating next???? i wan read more pls
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys WOW thanx so much for your lovely comments..SORRY I don't have time to reply back to everyone but am really really thankful for everyone commenting on the last chapter...

Ok this chapter is really short...but don't worry next chapter will be REAAALLLLYYYYYYY Long lol...This chapter is important!!!


THE MASTER'S MASK WILL BE OFF IN THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!! dun dun dun I had to end the torture for you guys and progress the story lol...
Enjoy!!!!


Chapter 16

Kissing Cont'd:

A lot of things were going around inside their heads…they expressed all their feelings that they had for each other with that kiss…Geet wanted to stop all this but couldn't get herself to stop kissing him back…Maan held Geet by her shoulders to hold her on the sofa while he kissed her passionately. He slowly moved his hands inside her shirt holding her by her waist…Geet felt shivers down her spine with the sudden touch…he slowly caressed her waist moving his hand to her back to pull her towards him when his phone rang (Sorry to stop it right here lol)…both broke out with their kiss embarrassed…

Maan got up to pick up his phone cursing himself for losing to his feelings like that when Geet went through so much…Geet shied and kept her head low while Maan talked on the phone…

Maan: Yeah Adi..what happened?

Adi: ….

Maan: What you serious…alright I will be there right now

Geet looked at Maan hearing him going somewhere right now…Maan hung up the phone and looked at Geet…

Maan: ummm I have to go…Adi might've found the master's name who is behind this from Dev's house

Geet: alright..

Maan: umm Geet I will drop you home…get your stuff

Geet: its fine I can go by myself

Maan: No I will drop you…come on

Geet: but Maan I have to do something here you can go

Maan: Fine I will have a driver come here and pick you up…

Geet: Alright

Maan looked at Geet before leaving the house: umm Geet…about what just happened

Geet looked down: Maan you have to go

Maan smiled: Alright we will talk later

Geet heart started beating fast she herself didn't know how she was going to face Maan later after this…it was hard already to stand here talking to him…Geet looked the door and went to the couch smiling…

Maan reached Dev's house where Adi and the entire police from the department were present.

Adi: Good thing you came

Maan: Who is the person? Did Dev tell you anything new?

Adi: Dev hasn't spoken a word ever since you beat him up and I don't think he will either

Maan: hmmm

Adi: We looked through his phone records to track the person but apparently every time he called Dev it was from different numbers that are untraceable

Maan: He is smart

Adi: Yeah he knows to play this game…he truly is the master

Maan: We will see who is the master at the end when I catch him…the name? (Getting impatience)

Adi: Here is the name…but we can't be so sure if he really is the master..so far he is the only name we found on this envelope addressed to Dev…so we are assuming it is him

Maan looked at the name: Vicky Singhania?

Adi: Yeah…so you know why I called you ….it will be hard to prove he is behind this without a solid proof…

Maan: I can't FREAKING believe this…

Adi: Maan calm down…we will get something on him…we are going to keep an eye on him and see if we can come up with something…he is bound to make a mistake sometime IF he is our guy

Maan: I am going to go and pick up Geet

Adi: Maan listen

Vicky Singhania the only heir to Singhania group of industries (I couldn't think of any other name lol)….his father left him in charge of all of the businesses…he had the control to do whatever he wanted and no one can dare to stop him. No one knew who he really is not even his own family…and he made sure that no one would ever find out either….he smiled. Police will never catch him either…they can't lay a hand on him even if they tried (he chuckled) But soon he became serious when his thoughts went back to Geet...he couldn't get her out of his mind…she was so beautiful in every way…he wanted to hold her and touch her again….she indeed was something special and she proved it when she escaped he liked her even more seeing her strength. Suddenly, the person right next to him started moving and woke up

"What happened? Why are you awake?"

Vicky: Nothing sweetheart go to sleep

"You sleep too"

Vicky smiled: Alright (he pulled her close to him and closed his eyes…all he saw was Geet..he smiled as he slept peacefully thinking about Geet)


Precap: I won't leave you Detective Maan Singh Khurana!


Sorry to disappoint those who thought it would be ADI 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I still laugh thinking about it...I mean imagine if it was ADI...how would he be like a villain..he is so sweet 🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haha awe the scene between Maaneet was cute wonder how their reaction will be later on and haha I actually thought it was adi to but I guess you did the unexpected which actually would have been an obvious but it wasn as our mind was stuck in adi being the master (hope that makes sense) anyways great update and can't wait for the next 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow passionate kiss yu break them part poor Geet still she in danger what evil Vicky his amazing update pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh no, iwanted to read more about maneeet

nice update tough

update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update!
maan better get to geet before that vicky finds her again!
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update love maneet scene...... pls update soon yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome its getting interesting part by part
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVELY!!!
never expected Vicky ROFL!!
and the last part bout Adi LMAOO!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhh WOWWWWW..i am so glad u are back Simi..u were greatly missed :) and the update was awesome as always 😊

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