FF: IRREVOCABLY YOURS #3 The End Chapter P. 17 M&G

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#211

i just came across your FF.. & i couldnt make my self stop reading so i gave up & had to read the whole thing yeap 36 chapters in one go 😲
you have written it so beautifully & the flow just keeps you captivated 😉

loved geet she is so funny & her fancies put a hug smile on my face, while maan just made me drool over him & i had my own fancies over Mr Phurana 😍 🤣

you made me laugh so hard that i still remember some of the parts & cant help but laugh so much 😆
but you also made me cry when the track changed & my tears kept flowing😭🥺 😭 but luckily you made up for all my tears with the epilogue and at the end of chapter 36 my heart was broken 😆

i really hope you do write another FF cause i'm sure you can write another amazing story that will have all of us annoying you with constant messages to update 🤣

oh before i forget if you have written other FF's about Maan i hope cause i'm as crazy about him lol, do PM the links 😉

OMG this is the longest comment i have written well i hope you haven't gotten bored reading it 😆

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423728

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#212

Keep up with the super long comments! I love em! 😆🤗

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So I was saying

@SoIWasSaying

Sparkler

+ 12

Posted: 14 years ago

#213

hola dear,

i guess i'm prety late to comment but ur ff was very nice

really engagin

wish i had read it earlier

nice stry

really made me cry

luv u 4 this......:)

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#214

Hey Samira.

Finished reading Finally (thnx to my Internet service 😡 )

First when I started reading, I thought that characters are quite serious and loved their usual life. Geet going 4 social work made me think that she had lost someone to cancer (her childhood memory of hospitals) then Oh boy! what just happend to geet!😲😆

Geet became so funny and I thought that it was funny story and loved the idea of

1.Maan fighting and saving geet 👏

2.possessed Maan 😆

3.Geet's unhygienic condition 🤣

4.Maan caring 4 Geet😍

5.Geet's Karate kick🤣🤣

Maan broke Geet's heart by being recless & saying "It was a Mistake"😲🥺

Geet has wonderful Science practical knowledge 😆 Drooling over guys other than Maan.

Dev is Psycho Case (No doubt)😛

Geet's FB Email & password shows her obsession & what an email ID 4 MSPhurana🤣

And Suddenly comes the speed breaker (Cancer) to hinder smooth love journey. It was real sad when Maan was concentrating/comparing geet's and soon to be extinguished candle light.

Geet's pain was so acutely defined. (My Grandfather and Aunt also suffered from Cancer and died 😭) I understand, it is painful 4 patient.

I am Sorry 4 ur father but he must be very proud on a daughter like you who is bravely facing the world.

Maan's Proposal was DREAMY😍 & here comes old geet 😆

1.No shave 4 Maan (Saves Money)😈

2.70% ownership

3.No work

4. 6 children😲

Wedding was beautiful & geet's imagination😳

In the last chapter, I thought that she died. I literally cried at that 😭

But thnx 4 epilogue that showed a happy, chirpy Geet as always.

Maan fainted 😆

Phurana Family & their Vacuum Son😆

Great FF. Thnx 4 that ⭐️

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423728

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#215

LMAO! I cringe whenever I see the amount of comments I promised to reply too 🤣. I swear, I should have replied every time a new comment was posted. But once again, thank you everyone for your lovely comments !

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#216

read your FF in one go today, loved it. the comic part and the dialogues are just awesome

the part where Geet was really sick, and asked Maan to read her diary was beautifully written, for a moment i thought she left him and literally had tears...the children hospital part broght me back...

hope they had a happy life..with five more to come

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MaankigopiMadhu

@MaankigopiMadhu

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#217

Hello...GOSH,...LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE..THIS FF...OMG I READ IT IN A DAY..A FRIEND FORWARDED THIS TO ME .. YOU ARE SUPERB ... ARE YOU STILL ON YOUR HUGE HUGE HUGE BREAK OR DID YOU START WRITING? IF YOU DID, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD ME TO YOUR BUDDY LIST .. I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK...YOU ARE WONDERFUL... THANK YOU SO MUCH ❤️ 🥳⭐️
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Ayesha.

@cooldude10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#218

do you know i read this all over again? :) 🤣

it still had the same effectt... I LOVE YOU SO MUCH 🤗🤗🤗

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423728

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#219

Oh my god just noticed the new comments above! = | I'm glad to know that people are still finding this fan fiction and reading it 😳. Thank you so much for all the love and positive responses.

@ Ayesha - ROFLROFL! WOMAN you better love my next FF 😆

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#220

Samira! I'm pretty sure you're doing something illegal! It has to be against the law to write so well! I started reading this ff in the evening and was thinking about it all through dinner, so here i am, sitting in front of my computer, not able to tear my eyes away from the screen. I just lvoed the beginning of your ff, with Geet being saved by Maan then yelling at him. Oh, and the "horror" scene on the road was really cute.I was up dancing when Dev was being pummeled by Maan. And loved geet and maan's nok- jhoks and scenes like Geet sleeping and Maan doing some mischievous stuff 😈, Geet spying in Maan's room 😲, and well, the dialogues in general. The end was so sweet. When maan took her to the new house, i was so happy, and when they were on the bench after he read her journal, and thought she was gonna die and started crying, especially how he went to the hospital alone. But then Geet showing up and, as usual, arguing with Maan brought a smile back on my face. Lol, loved the part when she was cursing him and the doctor out, and then Maan fainted! 🤣
Wait, i forgot to mention: I loved how Maan was so possessive of Geet from the moment he met her. It was evident in almost everything he did (except when he called her filthy. I hated that scene...and the one where he initially turns away from her when she tells him she has cancer. They were both written wonderfully, and clearly showed the pain behind the words, but I just hated his sudden lack of faith and or judgement).

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