FF: IRREVOCABLY YOURS #3 The End Chapter P. 17 M&G

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

OMG .... the first half i was laughing my heart out.... and the second half i tot i cudn't continue read.... as Maan's depression wen he saw that her eyes where closed ... his thot of loosing her... his plead to the Almighty...Omg it was killing.. but i steadied my heart and moved on further... to read ur wonder lines... when i saw the epilouge while scrolling... i was hoping let that scenes u mentioned above be the dreams of either of the one... but u made my day.. thank.. but i wud never forgive u for making tears roll down ma eyes...AWESOME UPDATE.... dear...loved it👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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423728

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

I can't believe it's over . I was just thinking about the next chapter when I realized that I didn't have too anymore. 😲

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

DAMN. great work!!! im really going to miss this fan fic!!

thank you for being such a talented writer!! you had so many hilarious parts in your story..especially with geet being all bold and having nasty thoughts! ahahha...that was most definitely a refreshing change from all the shy girls in all the other fan fics!

i got so sad when you were describing geet's almost death! so much pain and emotion in that part!! but then i saw geet was alive in the epilogue and got all happy again!

loved your fan fic! congrats on such a success!

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maaneet_pisces

@maaneet_pisces

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

wowwww!!!!the update made me cry, laugh, smile, smirk etc... its was beautiful...u are truly an amazing writer......the way you portray emotions is just WOW.....looking forward to your new ff :)

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Amiiish

@Amiiish

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Oh Sammy dear I dont know what to say.

First about this update:

It was full of emotions, be it happy or the sad ones.

I dont think this Maan exists in real, if you know plz do tell me😆

I had tears while reading the part before epilouge, I was like noo, I thought she was gone. But thanks for making the epilogue. You made me laugh again, with the delivery scene. Otherwise I would have been sad all day about this sad ending. THANK YOU!

I loved the spirit of Geet, not to sulk about her disease, just live the life no matter what. Cuz I too believe in that, though you have moments when you do not feel like it, or just want to sulk.

I must say this has been a beautiful journey, and your FF has been on of the best. You have just not captured all the emotions, but also made the readers feel the emotions, atleast I felt.

Im so gonna miss this FF and of course the FF writer.

It has been awesome interacting with you, and im surely gonna miss you, though I hope to see you around.

Once again a lovely FF, from the beginning to the end!

Lots of love/Amu🤗

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Geet Malhotra

@SapphireFlames

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

wow. this is just the perfect ending. i'd have cried my eyes out if u would have ended it on a sad note. 😭

but i loved the epilogue. especially the delivery part. Geet kabhi nahe sudhregi. not even in labor. 😆

and i'll miss ur writing too. love ya loads. for writing such fantastic FF. and yes, i have to mention. i'm in love with MSK/ MSP. 😆

after this. matlab, i was, even before. but now more so after ur FF. ❤️

but anyway, a loud loud round of Applause for Mrs. Maan Singh Phurana 🤣 AKA Saam. 👏

loads of love,

Geet 😳

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

wao!!an awesome ff n an awesome end.btw u made me teary tat u r ending this ff.bt ur end note tat u r jst a pm away made me cheer up.im gonna miss u really a lot so plz do stay intouch n dont remove me 4m ur pm list.ill b w8ing 4 ur next ff intro❤️best of luck 4 ur upcoming exams!!

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anupam

@shining_moon

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

hi samira

first of all u were so right....it was a super long chapter!!!!

it took u so many hour to write n me to read it😆

the first half was so emotional n romantic...the diary part just made me cry

it was awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

ok the epilogue was quite unexpected...after the diary part...n thank u so much for making such a beautiful happy ending⭐️😊

geet's pregnancy was a mood lightener.......😆😆😆

maan chose so very wrong words to compose her saying in pregnancy has made her look like a cow.......from where did u get such wonderful comparisons🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

n maan fainting in OT was simply hillarious😆😆😆😆😆

this was a near perfect end.........I'll not say perfect as one can always get better n with ur imaginative skills u can do wonders!!!!!!!!!!

n for ur new IDEA I would like to say just one thing GO FOR IT GIRL....IT WOULD DEFINATELY CREATE HISTORY!!!!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

sincerely loved ur ff n the proof is my longest ever comment

do keep entertaining us with ur skill

may god bless u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

👏Hey sam! Thank u so much 4 ths wonder ride, ful of twists n turns,fun n fear,joy n excitement. M not tat good wit words jst cn say i realy enjoyd readin all ur updates to d core of my heart. I m a bit sad 😭tat u wont b writin 4 a long time bt i realy hope to read ur ff once again. Concept 4 nxt ff is wonderful 😃m eager to read hw u'll shape ths nw concept.waitin till u rest n thnk abt d nw ff. Hope to hv ur pm soooon.thanx 4 an amazin wonderful fantastic ff.👏

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#140

hiii sammy.........😛😛

the last update was mindblowing in terms of content, the magnitude of emotions that it unleashed in all ur readers...........i am truly speechless...........and in a state of trance

u made us fall in love with two characters....giving it a larger than life status by ur powerful,focussed and compelling writing..👏👏👏👏

it was such a pleasure to read ur FF..............a big thank you and lots of hugs and kisses for u..........😃😃😃😃😃

u introduced me to so many emotions thru ur ff.....that i never knew existed in me.....probably wer dormant........

the first part was so heartwrenching that it literally had me in tears..........

the epilogue lightened the melancholic mood set by the first part................and brought a big smile on my face......😛😛😛😛

this update is a masterpiece.........one of its kind.........since it made me cry and made me laugh..............making me realise the true meaning and worth of love, hapiness and faith..................and i am sure it is goin to be remembered and cherished forever by each of us😛😛😛😛

i feel sad that we wont be able to get to read the wonderful updates anymore...but i guess all good things have to come to an end.............

i sincerely hope u come up with another mindblowing FF......and dont take a long hiatus from writing.............as a writer of ur calibre needs to take writing as a profession.........

all the best for ur exams.....all ur fans are going to shower u with blessings, wishes and all luck for ur exams and ur bright future................

take care

god bless u😛😛

will be in touch with u😊

reva

Edited by revav - 14 years ago