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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Geet has to cry it out otherwise she will go into
Depression continue soon thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maan
geet can b so rude
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Sorry for late reply

Here goes replies to all th parts on which i didnt
Part 99
That was dhamak
Geet ka accident
How culd u do that yaar
She was pregnant n Maan toh didnt got to knw that happiness also
How culd u
Atleast Maan got that she loves him
Part 100
Im hating this Anu
Why culdnt it been Anu's accident yaar
Maan got good news as well as bad news
Looks lik he gonna loose himself in the question that he deserves him or not
Part 101
Can Geet stop acting childishly
Crap man she is hurting Maan to hell
Her words she is seeing his words but wat abt the words she said to him now
Wat was she thking saying all that to him
She evn isnt trusting to watevr Heer is telling
Im jus hating Geet's this behaviour
Part 102
Man Geet is so childish
Liked the way Maan was teasing her by eating the food in frnt of her
Maan was feeling her pain
Maan teeling her abt miscarriage
Baapre Maan will be dead agn
Part 103
Geet baapre kitni ziddi hai
For her stubbornness she got punishment also
She always takes Maan's breath away yaar
Why the heck he needed to get that Naku's topic
After so long Geet was getting cossy coosy n all
Maan plz lend him sum brains yaar
Part 104
Geet's anger was valid wit that Nakusha
Maan was breaking down
I still cant get it that why the heck Anu is telling its his Geet
Its jus Maan's Geet
Loved the way Geet was seducing Maan
Maan controled himself n atlast spoke the bitter truth out
Part 105
Why is it that if anythg happens evryone blames at Maan
It was Geet's carelessness that she was walking on road lik that
Maan had saved her once
But nahi that also Anu blmaed on him
Why is it that he has to suffer always
Mana Geet is in shock that she lost her baby but why isnt she thking that she didnt gav Maan taht sum days happiness also whch she had after knwing that she is pregnant
Im jus not liking that how much pain Maan has to suffer n still be strong


NP HUN LOVED IT
xxxxx TY SOOO MUCH
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Posted: 14 years ago

***TREMBLE OF LOVE***

part 106


Geet woke up late! Her timetable seems to fall in places! She didn't care much about her life anymore! Or cared about Maan!

Maan: shall we go to the office? This might change your mood a bit!
Geet: yea! Whatever you think!
Maan: geet!
Geet didn't bother to look back. She simply started to walk towards the car.
Everyone was observing them in the office. There was a distance in there relationship. Maan sat in the office thinking about geet and geet cried now and then...

Anu: how are you feeling?
Geet: good thanks!
Anu: I hard! I am sorry!
Geet: it's ok!
Anu: i hope bro is alright! It's his 3rd child probably!
Geet stopped looking at her folder instantly! She completely forgot that Sammera aborted two child before! Actually god knows how many?
Anu: I Guss it's all normal for him! But I am so sorry for you. First time.
Geet sat there she could have killed anu now with out any hesitation!
Anu: you know bro! I am so sorry! Only two weeks have passed since the incident and you are already back in to the office.
Geet looked way in tears!
Anu: shows how careless he is.
Geet: but he....
Anu: he is my brother! I know him geet! I have known him all my life... And you only 4 months! I can see the clear mistake.
Geet: can you leave me alone!
Anu: sure geet. I know you need time to think.
Geet walked out after that. She knew well anu wasn't lying. She have seen everything with her own eyes. Geet closed her eyes... Suddenly All her concentration went in... did this effect maan? Of course it have! It's are love. But did she care about his other child... She closed her eyes! Of course it have. He was about to marry sammera for sake of the child! It was tragic that she wasn't pregnant! What if she was! She didn't like the fact! .....Some reason the fact that he have been in close relation with others started to creep her out.

Maan: shall we go? Geet?
Geet was no where near in this world!
Maan: geet? GEET! He shouts. Geet jumps... Coming back to the world.
Maan stood in front of her. Maan holds her hand. She didn't like that. She snaps her hand back. Surprising maan.

Geet: yes! Let's go.
Maan walked out geet flowing. He was a bit curious.

Maan: is everything alright?
Geet nodes!
Both kept quit! Nun spoke a single word!
Geet looked outside... She started to become isolated! Somehow Maan wasn't attracting her anymore! She didn't care for him! This wasn't right! Maan drove home! Now and then she looked at maan! Confused at her own thought!
Maan: is everything alright? You look worried!
Geet: I am fine!
Maan clearly knew she wasn't fine. Something was bothering her. Something deep!
They arrives home... Geet walks out and starts walking towards her room with out Maan. That was odd! She never done that before! She always waited for him!
Geet sat on her bed! Restless! Not sure how to behave! Or react!
Maan thought it might be because of there baby!
It's midnight! Geet woke up! Maan was sleeping on the other side of the bed! She preferred to stay way. Maan gave her space!
She looked at him for a minute then looked other way.
Geet thought about what anu told her earlier! She still didn't understand Maan. What type of man was he? He demanded he fell in love with her when he was with sammera! Not just that he also was with her. God knows how many night they have shared together! Geet didn't like that idea at all. Then she aborted there child! So nothing new for him! He can't even feel my pain.
Geet closed her eyes! She couldn't sleep. What was going on. Why can't she ignore this sick thought! She did it before. What if Maan is becoming bored of her like he did with his other GF? Geet was confused. She had no clue what she was thinking. Nun if them was making any sense to her.

Suddenly maans eyes open finding geet staring at the ceiling. He comes close to her.

Maan: ka hua?
Geet jumps. She didn't realize maan was up.
Geet: ap soye nahi?
Maan: tum tik to ho na?
Geet: ha!
Maan: why are you lying? What is bothering you?
Geet: it's nothing!
Maan: nahi! What's wrong?
Geet: I said nothing!
She leaves the bed!
Maan flows her. Extremely confused.. He holds her by hand...
Geet: what's wrong with you?
Maan: are you going to explain?
Geet snaps and starts to walk out again...
Maan puls her back.
Geet: leave me alone! I don't want to talk to you.
Maan looked at her in confuse.
Maan: if this is about are child then...
Geet: "NO! This is about my child. It's not yours. It's my! If you cared about this child even a Tinny bit you would have showed some emotion. I know you have lost child with sammera before this might not matter to you but it does to me. So leave me alone!" She shouts. Maan looked at her in shock... He just couldn't believe what geet just told him. Every word hit him like a bullet! He was out of words. He couldn't speak. It hurt him. Hurts him allot. Firstly she mentioned about his and sammeras relationship. Secondly she mentioned about there aborted child! And what hurts him the most how could she even think that there child didn't matter to him. Geet looks at his angry eyes but failed to understand his pain.
Geet: I am In pain! Leave me alone.
Maan frees her. She just gave him sock of his life. Geet walks out.
Maan sat there thoughtless. How could geet say those word? How could she. She never loved me. If she did... She could have never mentioned those word to me.


one more Q :D

i am not really a daty daty type of girl… so never been hurt by a boy… so have no clue what it really feels like…😕 to be hurt… if u lot don't mind me asking…. could anyone explain???😕 plssssssssssss😭 i know bit stupid thing to ask… i so hop i never do get hurt by any…. bcs i am the one to hurt them hehe

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Hay you all'. MAAN IS IN PAIN😭'. how could she even mention those word to him' i am so sorry making u all cry but doo keep faith in me :D😃' but truly even i was hurt when i wrote it lol' seriously how could i be sooo😈 anyway its ~TREMBLE OF LOVE~ heheh LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS> SOOOOOO SWEET. :D SO PLS PLS PLS DO LEAVE ME SOME MORE

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res u knw wat i feeel soooooo sorry for maan but u wat i dnt blame geet at all
its anu's fault!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat a bimbo!!!!!!!!!! hw dare he😡😡
hes sooooooooooo getting a piece of my jooti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
arghhh wat a retard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n geet - hw cud she even fall for it?!!?!?!?! her words were harshhhhhhhhhhh - way tooooooooooo harsh!!!!
poor maan - haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
cnt even console him cos he DOESNT exist!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishuu

res u knw wat i feeel soooooo sorry for maan but u wat i dnt blame geet at all

its anu's fault!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat a bimbo!!!!!!!!!! hw dare he😡😡
hes sooooooooooo getting a piece of my jooti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
arghhh wat a retard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n geet - hw cud she even fall for it?!!?!?!?! her words were harshhhhhhhhhhh - way tooooooooooo harsh!!!!
poor maan - haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
cnt even console him cos he DOESNT exist!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆


shhhhh😆
he is real in are mind 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
why soo many misunderstandings b/w them?
i hope maan talks to her and she realizes what she said was wrong
cont' soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry i will comment after reading next 2-3 update.......... i cant see maan all sad sad.......poor maan🥺.......maan this is for u 🤗🤗.......... stupid anu😡.......... update soon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor maan
hate anu
so evil
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
aww felt so bad for maan when feet said all that
wont blame geet either
its all anu's fault
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Edited by kashndsel4eva - 14 years ago

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