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Posted: 14 years ago
HAHAHA Maan is so cute .. And anu.. I hope that he really is moving on cause POST SOON.. i want to know what happend when she calls him :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
do continue
loved da update
i hope anu like pari
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Posted: 14 years ago
awe sho cute
😛thxz for the PM and please update soon😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hate this Pari 😡😡

and geet is the boss, she should had tell her it's my order. ughhh

loved the maneet part though

gr88888 part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet: oh.... She sighs and hides her face on his chest.... Kissing them gently.... There lips again slowly... As they start To kiss Passionately.... Bothe started to nibble on one another lips... It started to get rough as the time went by Intell maan stole her tounge.... Playing... Sucking it.... It was a long passionate one... Maybe an hour..... Warm sliva strews to drible down... They kissed without breaking the seal for too long... Geets hand was no where near on maans cloths... In was under... All his button was off.... Only hanging loosly on his shoulder.... And geets palu not covering her chest anymore.... Her whole saris pilly was off.... It was acting as a spread....
Lucky the car door was locked and dark black mirror window....

Perhaps you could use a pointer or 2 .. this recounting of yours is actually painful to read! Check this out for comparison:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1529956


If nothing else, please do make the effort to distinguish 'their' from 'there' .. plus it never ceases to amaze me that you youngsters do not take the trouble to run spell-check before you go at break-neck speed to post .. just look at all the words in your text above that the system finds objectionable (it puts those funny red squiggly lines underneath text for a reason!!). Do you not consider that to be important - at a MINIMUM??!! Your thinking that you have writing ability is quite another matter altogether!! Good thing it's a free world!!

'Both', not 'bothe'
'Intell'? did you mean 'Until'?
'tongue', not 'tounge'
'saliva', not 'silva'
'dribble', not 'drible'
"Maan's clothing" not "maan's cloths"
'loosely', not 'loosly'
"sari's pallu', not "saris pilly"
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update👏👏👏
loved it😳😳😳😳
can't wait for da next part😃😃😃
con soon😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. luved naughty maneet.. hmm howz anu goin to react to geet's call??? do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
its been more then half an hour dnt u think its time for a update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lol killing my self laughing.
DW! I managed to read it fine.
X

Originally posted by: SValeCalGal

Geet: oh.... She sighs and hides her face on his chest.... Kissing them
gently.... There lips again slowly... As they start To kiss
Passionately.... Bothe started to nibble on one another lips... It
started to get rough as the time went by Intell maan stole her
tounge.... Playing... Sucking it.... It was a long passionate one...
Maybe an hour..... Warm sliva strews to drible down... They kissed
without breaking the seal for too long... Geets hand was no where near
on maans cloths... In was under... All his button was off.... Only
hanging loosly on his shoulder.... And geets palu not covering her chest
anymore.... Her whole saris pilly was off.... It was acting as a
spread....

Lucky the car door was locked and dark black mirror window....

<font color="#006699">Perhaps you could use a pointer or 2 .. this recounting of yours is actually painful to read! Check this out for comparison:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1529956
</font>

<font color="#006699"> If nothing else, please do make the effort to distinguish 'their' from 'there' .. plus it never ceases to amaze me that you youngsters do not take the trouble to run spell-check before you go at break-neck speed to post .. just look at all the words in your text above that the system finds objectionable (it puts those funny red squiggly lines underneath text for a reason!!). Do you not consider that to be important - at a MINIMUM??!! Your thinking that you have writing ability is quite another matter altogether!! Good thing it's a free world!!

'Both', not 'bothe'
'Intell'? did you mean 'Until'?
'tongue', not 'tounge'
'saliva', not 'silva'
'dribble', not 'drible'
"Maan's clothing" not "maan's cloths"
'loosely', not 'loosly'
"sari's pallu', not "saris pilly"
</font>

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update! PLZ continue soon....cant wait to see how Anu will react to Geet calling him!

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