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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update............pls continue soon.......also pls include me in ur PM list.......


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HEY hi lovely update
hmm plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
your FF is going superbbb .... keep it up ⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago

**TREMBLE OF LOVE**

part 95


Geet: hello....
Anu skipped several heart beats....
Anu: geet....
Geet: ha... Au... Actually we need all the designee...
Anu: umm... I will be in the office in few minutes!
Geet: thanks! She hangs up...

After 30 minutes anu Arrives...
Geet: thanks... How are you feeling now?

Anu: better!
Geet smiles... Have you taken your medicine?
Anu nodes...
Pari just looked at anu... How he just agreed and answers perfectly with her...
Geet: are you staying for the whole day?
Anu: I might as well... They are my designee.
Geet: alright.

Anu was lost again in geet... That how beautifully she looked... He was trying his best to accept her and maans marriage... But he seems to loose it...


It's 6:00pm... Anu Pari and geet were in the same room... Working on the design... Geet didn't pay any notice at all... But anu kept looking at geet... And Pari realized... She was adding up was this anu... Geets anu????....
Pari: geet...
Geet: Bolo...
Pari: tell me about this resort that maan have brought for you?
Geet looks up... Anu snaps his pen straight way...
Geet: it's really nice...
Pari: you are dam lucky... I was there when maan... finalized everything... Must say... I loved the bedroom...
Anu clenched his first under the table... Trying not to look at any of them...
Geet: thanks.. Looking at anu.... Geet knew well what he is going through, just to control his uncontrolled feeling.


Maan walks in... Which makes pari shut up... Maan noticed anu was angry and geet was looking at him... He didn't like that at all...
Geet didn't even realize maans presence...
Maan: geet!
Bothe anu and geet jumps...
Geet could see clearly his jealousy and anger in his eyes...
Maan: I will be waiting for you outside...
Geet leaves...
Leaving anu and Pari...

Geet didn't realize maans action... But she guessed he didn't like her being with anu... But she again thought... He is the one who decided her to work with him... Then why would he be worried... And anu.... He is not like before at all... He have changed.... Not much... But it's a beginning....

Maan couldn't get his head right... He knew he is the one who decided everything... But still he felt extremely uncomfortable... He didn't like geet looking at him... Or his look at geet... He trusted his geet.... But he couldn't trust the geet who was once madly in love with anu... He wonders... Have that geet disappeared somewhere... Somewhere far... Like he wanted... Somewhere she will never come back.... He wished that was true... He wished, This geet is only his.... Only belongs to him.... No one els.... His geet.... Maan ki geet......
Maan couldn't think straight.... But why she was looking at anu.... Why she cares when he is angry.... Does he still have affect on her.... He cursed his own thought.... No this can't be true. Never. I won't let that happen. I would never let that happen.... Never....

Bothe were lost in thought.... Arrives at the mansion...
Geet: apko ka hua?
Maan: nothing!
Geet: itni chup chap ku ho?
Maan: just felling a bit lazy!
Geet: umm...
Maan: ...
Geet: suniye...
Maan: bolo...
Geet: are you mad because I was working with anu? But it was your decision!
Maan snaps back... "when have I suggested that I am angry! And why are you bringing anu in?"
Geet: no... I ....
Maan: I what geet? Can you try not to bring him in are conversation...
Geet: au ap...
Maan walks out of the car in anger...

Both didn't talk much.... Actually, not mentioned a single word to one another

Both laid on the bed... Silent... Geet wasn't sure what's her mistake and maan not willing to explain...

Geet: ap hamse itna gussa ku ho?
Maan: ignores...
Geet slowly makes her way to his side of the bed.... Hugging him from the back....
Geet: bato na... I don't like the silent!
Maan: ignores...
Geet: suniye.... She called him lovingly....
Maan: bolo....
Geet: can you... Please face me.
Maan twists him self round. Holds her tight by her waist.
Maan: ka hua?
Geet smiles naughtily...
Geet: geet missing her husbands bak bak.
Maan: so I bak bak!
Geet nodes teasingly.
Maan slowly starts to kiss her cheek... "how about now?"
Geet: "geet want more!" He smiles and pines her to the bed... Kissing her lips... Before Bothe could say a word they were lost in one another passion...

Next day maan and geet were very busy at work. Had no free time. Nun at all'.



sorry u all'. i lol' :D SLEEP' lol

well will update to 97 :D

x

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

that was awesome update👏👏👏....loved it 😳

great one...do keep writing😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
i wonder whats going to happen next w/ this Anu.. he needs another girl...maybe pari? lol
con't soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!
i loved it when geet wz manofying maan.....geet missing her husband's bak bak...hehe how cute!
update soon!
but after u sleep 😊

luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update plz keyama find another geet too for anurag so our maaneet can live in peace..continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

**TREMBLE OF LOVE**

part 96


Pari: I don't think this design is suitable at all!
Anu: it looks good enough!
Pari: no! There are many complication with this blueprint!
Anu: I don't see any!
Pari: You need to observe this very carefully!
Anu: umm! I have... More then few times..
Pari: maybe few more time! She added cuttingly.
Geet: I agree with Pari!
Pari: thank you.
Geet: yes ... I can observe many complication.
Pari: I know! Shall we give him some example?
Geet: no! Anu, you required some serious change before we submit this to maan!
Anu: alright!

Pari looked at Both in shock... She just couldn't believe how easily He agreed...
Pari: I have been trying to explain this to you for the whole meeting and now you agree????
Anu: there is difference between you and geet!
Geet: enough!.. She gets irritated and leaves the room. Knew exactly what anu will start again!

Geet walks to maans cabin but he was busy. Covered by files.
Pari helplessly running from her cabin to maans cabin, trying her best not to make maan angry.

Outside of maans cabin!
Pari: how do you live with this kharus? Ufff... You know, nowadays I have given up going to the gym! I am getting enough exercise in this office.
Geet laughs...
Pari: now I wonder why may sammera left! And I can grantee you will leave him one day soon!
Geet just stood there silent... Sammera! Again! She just couldn't stand her name! Specially not with Maan!
Geet: umm!

Before Pari could utter another word... Maan shouts: PARI!... She ruses in...

Geet started to walk way again... Why have this sammeras name coming in between us again!

Anu: are you alright?
Geet: umm! Yes! Thanks!
Anu: you don't seem to be alright! Your face giving me a different expression.
Geet: umm! Actually!
Anu: what is it?
Geet: it's nothing!
Anu: geet... Please do consider me as something. I can't live like this.
Geet: anu you should move on. My presence should not concern to you anymore. You know the fact very well. You are nothing to me.

maan observes them again from far.... geet again failed to realize.... after while when she was about to walk off.... geet noticed maan.....


later on in the car....


Geet: what's wrong?
Maan: nothing!
Geet: why are you mad at me again...?.... geet could guss from his facial expression....
Maan: I am not!
Geet stops him straight way... "you are the one who wanted me to work with him! It was your decision! Not my!"
Maan: thats not mean you will just look at him..... And forgot even the presence of me in the room...
Geet: I didn't realize you were there!
Maan looks at her more angrily and walks off...
Geet: Suniye... Suniye...
Maan ignores her... Completely...
Bothe drives back home... Maan ignored her completely...
Geet didn't understand what's her fault... She knew well he is extremely possessive about her... She liked that... But not sure what she have done wrong....

Next day at work... Geet decides to leave the project... Giving everything to Pari...

Pari: are you sure?
Geet: yea... I will be working with maan with the other project...
Anu walks in... Geet ignores him... But shocked to here she is Leaving this project...
Anu: why are you leaving...
Pari leaves...
Geet: nun of your concern!
Anu: it's maan! That's why! It's always him! You always choose him over me!
Geet was about to walk out... She turns round: yes! It will be him... Because I love him....
Anu looked at her in surprise... "I care for him....
Maan was about to walk in... But stops listening to geets voice...."
Geet: that's why... He is my husband... And I will always choose him... Not my x lover....
Maan was heart.... She only chooses him... Because they were married.... But.... He....
Maan leaves straight way....
Geet: I love him... I can't see him upset.... Not because of this silly project! Not for anything in this world... Nothing....
Anu looks at geet.... Her every thought was linked to maan... Everything... Every aspect...

Maan walked out straight way... He couldn't believe his ear... Geet only chooses him because he was her husband... And how stupid was he... Counting everything as her love... How could he even think like that... He went for a drive again.... A rush drive...
Maan couldn't concentrate... He couldn't digest... Geet doesn't love him... He couldn't think... Not At all... She still probably in love with anu... That's why she is always worried about him... That's why she can't control when she is round him... Always looks at him...
Always... It's probably me who is forcing her in this relationship... That night... If I had controlled my self... Geet probably would have been with anu....

Geet comes back home... Finds no maan... Dinner time... No maan... She calls him... No answer....
Dadi: beta kha lo... Maan probably will be busy in a meeting...
Geet: no... I will wait for him...
Dadi: per...
Anu looks at her... Bit worried... He also tries to call him'


next: geet worried 😭… will update few more parts then pm u all toather…. pls leave some lovely comments…. i will be bc in few minutes….

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm..maan should have listened to her fully...

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