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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sanaa!
r u ok??
no updates from so many days.......hope ur fine!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: eternal_maaneet

@ All: I am totally ok sweethearts, just in Mumbai and very busy. Will update tomorrow for sure. Sorry!!!!

Was hoping to see MSK n ended up seeing Sunil Shetty!!! ;)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 74

Sameera is in her room when she hears a knock on the door. She asks the person to come in and Pia enters. Sameera stands up looking at her and says. 'Pia tum? Maine toh socha tha ke tum mujhse kabhi nahi milogi. Kya badal gaya?' Pia looks upset and says, 'Kuch badla nahi hai, Di. Wahi aap, wahi main. Bas jo aap thi usse zyada bigad gayi hai.' Sameera looks angry and says, 'Pia! Main tumhari badi behen houn.' Pia smirks and says, 'Badi behen? Kisse mazaak kar rahi hai aap? Mujhse ya apne aap se? Accha khaasa ghar chod diya aapne. Ek baar aapki koi galati na hote hue aapka ghar toota lekin aaj Aman ke saath jo aapne kiya uske liye kisse dosh degi?' Sameera says, 'Main waise bhi Aman se pyaar nahi karti, Pia.' Pia walks up to her and says, 'Aap kisi se bhi pyaar nahi karti. Mujhe jaane diya, Aman ko khud se door kar diya, apni khud ki beti ko bhi de diya aapne. Kya paane ke liye? Maan Singh Khurana ko, jo har haal main sirf aur sirf Geet ke hai.' Sameera says, 'Main praishchit kar chuki houn.' Pia says, 'Apne dil ko manane ke liye yeh kehna theek hai lekin I am sorry, yeh praishchit nahi hai. Uss din agar aapki goli Maan Veerji ya Geet ko lag jaati ya aap Dev se na milti toh yeh cheezein ho chuki hoti, Di. Itne gire hue iraade hai meri badi behen ke. You were supposed to be my inspiration, Di.' Sameera glares at her and says, 'I was not trying to be one, Pia. Just because main tumhari behen houn, iska matlab yeh hua ke main galati nahi kar sakti, bhatak nahi sakti, apne pyaar ko paane ki koshish nahi kar sakti? Main ek ordinary insaan houn, Pia. Geet ki tarah mahaan nahi houn.' Pia raises her voice and says, 'Aap kabhi ho bhi nahi sakti. Aur baat mahaan ki nahi insaniyat ki hai. Geet logon ka dard mehsoos karti hai. Main kya houn uske liye? Khurana parivaar ke godh liye hue bete ki hone wali patni. Lekin Geet ne jo mujhe maan diya hai woh meri sagi behen ne mere pyaar ko nahi diya. Aapne mera dil toda hai, Di. Aur main aapko kabhi maaf nahi karougi. Jab tak Maan aur Geet ki zindagi se aapka aur Naintara ka saaya nahi uthta, main aapko maaf nahi karogi.' Pia turns around and walks away as tears start rolling down Sameera's cheeks.

Aarav from the security company is sitting with Maan, Dev and Vicky. He is showing them certain equipment and talking them through the arrangements for the house. Maan looks very edgy and concerned with whatever Aarav is saying. Maan says, 'Aarav, yeh sab toh bohot risky sound karta hai. Geet ko kuch ho gaya toh?' Aarav says, 'Maan Sir, hamari poori koshish rahegi that we cover all posts lekin aisi situations mein kabhi baat haath se nikal jaati hai.' Maan eyes widen in horror and he says, 'Haath se nikal jaati hai? Aarav, main apni patni ki baat kar raha houn. Main surety chahta houn and that too 100%.' Aarav looks helplessly at Dev and Vicky. Vicky says, 'Bro, woh poori koshish karege and we have to be positive. Isse disclaimer samajh leejiye. Aarav ki company ka track record bohot accha hai. Aap please naraaz mat ho.' Dev adds in and says, 'Sach Bro. Hamare paas aur koi raasta nahi hai.' Maan is about to say something but notices Aarav, gets up and walks away. Dev follows him out requesting Vicky to stay behind. Dev catches up with Maan and says, 'Rukiye Bro.' Maan stops and looks at him furiously. Dev says, 'Main janta houn aap tab kuch bolna chahte the, Bro.' Maan replies, 'Raasta hai, Dev.' Dev understands and says, 'Main khud yahi karne wala tha, Bro. Lekin Geet agar khud complain nahi karegi toh main kya kar sakta houn?' Maan says, 'Geet ki jaan par ban aayi hai, Dev. Kadam kadam par woh apne aap ko aage daal rahi hai. Logon ko maaf kar rahi hai. Aur main usse behas nahi kar sakta. Maan Singh Khurana jo apni koi bhi baat kisi se bhi manva sakta hai. Woh Geet se haar gaya hai. Har baat meri bhalayi ki hai, mere parivaar ke liye hai. Geet ka kya?' Dev says, 'Main janta houn ke yeh sab hone se meri jaan bachti hai, Bro lekin main apne liye nahi balki aapki aur Geet ke liye keh raha houn. Woh mujhe jail nahi bhejegi, yeh aap bhi jante hai.' Maan looks helpless and says, 'Main ek baar toh koshish kar sakta houn na, Dev?' He goes on to tell him what he plans to do and Dev says, 'It's worth a shot, Bro.' Maan looks contented and leaves the office.

Geet is waiting for Maan for quite a while before she falls asleep on the couch. Maan comes inside and sits next to her. He rests his head against the couch and continues to look at her. He thinks, 'Geet, tum sahi salah deti ho. Main tumhe manata houn aur kuch aur karne par majboor kar deta houn. Kya soch raha tha main, tumhari zindagi ko kis tarah dau par lagane ke liye? Maine apni soch ko tumhari baat se aage kyun rakhta houn? Tum sahi thi aur main galat aur main yeh galati ko sudhaar ke hi rahouga.' He stands up and walks to his cupboard. He takes a suitcase out and begins packing. He tries to do it noiselessly but Geet wakes up and is confused seeing him pack. She walks up to him and says, 'Yeh aap kya kar rahe hai? Kahin ja rahe hai kya?' Maan continues packing without looking at her and says, 'Hum dono ja rahe hai, Geet. Kal sham ko.' Geet sees him looking away and stops him with her hand. She says, 'Aap aaj security company se kal ke intezaam ke liye baat karne gaye the. Kya hua?' Maan says, 'Woh mile toh the lekin humhe ab jaana hai toh uska kuch ho nahi payega.' Geet says, 'Maan, upar dekhiye.' He looks at her reluctantly and she says, 'Maan Singh Khurana ki aankhon mein darr sirf Geet Handa ki salamati ko lekar aata hai. Toh bataiye, aaj kya museebat aan parhi hai mujhpar ke aap Delhi chodne ki baat kar rahe hai?' Maan replies, 'Aisi baat nahi hai, Geet. Humhe sach much yaha se jaana hoga mere kaam ki wajah se.' Geet says, 'Toh aap chale jaiye. Main yaha peeche se sambhaal lougi.' Maan says, 'Geet, pagalon jaisi baatein mat karo. Main akela nahi jaouga.' Geet says, 'Toh phir yeh bag khaali keejiye aur pooja ke baare mein mujhe bataiye. Kya hone wala hai ke aapne yeh jhooti trip banayi.' He hugs her close to himself and says, 'Main kis muh se tumhe kuch bataoun jab maine khud tumhari baat sunne se mana kar diya.' Geet asks, 'Kaun si baat?' Maan says, 'Yaha se chale jaane ki. Yeh poore plan mein tumhari jaan ko khatra hai.'

Geet breaks away smiling and says, 'Yeh aapka darr hai? Aaj tak gayi houn jo ab jaougi? Maan aap research kar leejiye, patniyan aksar baad mein hi jaati hai. Main itni jaldi kahin nahi jaougi. Agar mujhe kuch hona hai toh woh toh kahin bhi ho sakta hai, hai na?' She kisses his forehead and says, 'Mujhe kuch nahi hoga, Maan. Yakeen janiye. Maine tab bhi jaane ki baat apne liye nahi balki iss khandaan ke liye kahi thi.' He is not convinced and looks down. She gets an idea and lifts his chin up with his hand and says, 'Inn aankhon mein dekhiye, aapko darr nazar aata hai?' Maan has a very slight smile on his face and says, 'Nahi.' Geet says, 'Phir aapke darr ki koi wajah nahi hai, Maan. Hum yeh sab ka saamna karege aur koi bhi haal mein.' She starts walking towards him as he takes a step backward. She smiles seductively and says, 'Aap ghabra kyun rahe hai?' He says, 'Main kyun ghabraouga?' She says, 'Aap nahi ghabra rahe toh mere ek kadam par aap do kadam peeche kyun ja rahe hai?' He comes forward, kisses her neck and undoes her dori and starts to unzip her kurta but she feels that his hands are unsteady and his body is tensed. She slides her hand across his back and pulls herself closer. He looks in to her eyes as she comes forward to kiss him. There is a sense of urgency in his kiss and an intensity in his touch that blew her mind. He takes her towards the bed and removes her kurta. When he does, she stops him and begins to unbutton his shirt. He tries to remove but she does not let him but comes behind him and removes it instead. She kisses his back and then places him on the bed covering his chest with kisses. He finally calms down and places her on his back and hides his face near her neck nibbling at her ears. Her breath is heavy due to his proximity and passion towards her but he gets concerned. He says, 'Tum theek toh ho na, Geet?' She pulls her towards himself and says, 'Isse zyada theek toh main ho hi nahi sakti, Maan.' He smiles and hugs her as she says, 'Hamesha ke liye sirf mere Maan.'

Saanson ke yeh sholey saanson mein tu gholey pal mein pighal jaaye hum
Hothon ke angaarey hothon pe hamare rakh de toh jal jaaye ham
Yeh pyar woh aag hain jis mein nahi hai kuaan
Lagti hai jab yeh agan jal jaate hai jism-o-jaan
Ban gaye aaj ham do badan ek jaan
Ae mere humsafar ae meri jaan-e-ja
Meri manzil hai tu tu hi mera jahaan
Ae mere humsafar ae meri jaan-e-ja

Dev is with Myra in her garden. He says, 'Kal mujhe Naintara ko ghar se door rakhna hoga, Pia taaki Aarav ghar aa sake security arrangements ke liye.' Myra says, 'Usse shak nahi hoga, Dev?' Dev says, 'Naintara mujhse attention chahti hai, Myra. Usse woh mil gaya toh woh kaafi kuch kar legi.' Myra does not seem happy and looks away. Dev is concerned and very hesitantly makes her face him by placing his hand below her chin. He says, 'Kya baat hai?' Myra says, 'Woh tumhe wapas apni baaton mein phasa legi toh?' Dev pretends to think and says, 'Hmmm.. Yeh toh sahi hai, Myra. Naintara ne mere bro ki zindagi barbaad karne ki koshish ki aur mere bacche ko maarna chaha. I have every reason to support her. Balki main abhi jaata houn.' She hits him and says, 'Tumhe mazaak soojh raha hai?' She walks away but he does not let her go and pulls her towards himself. He lets go of her hand as she comes close to him and says, 'Meri manzil Naintara ko iss ghar se nikaalna hai, Myra. Main uski ki hui koi cheez aur kahin hui koi baat ko bhoola nahi houn. Toh uska saath dene ka sawaal hi nahi uthta.' He longingly touches a strand of her hair and says, 'Meri manzil sirf tum ho, Myra.' Myra is shocked to hear this and says, 'Dev'?' He nods and says, 'Main jab tak tumhare saath nahi ho sakta jab tak Bro aur Geet ki zindagi ki khushiyan poori tarah wapas nahi aa jaati lekin meri kahani ka anth tum par hi hai, Myra. Yeh karne ke baad main tumhare paas aaouga zaroor aur tab tum jo chaho kar sakti ho. Mujhe taal dena ya zindagi bhar ke liye meri ban jaana. Main tumhare pyaar ke laayak nahi houn, Myra lekin Geet ne hi kaha hai ke haath na barhakar main shayad kuch na paoun lekin agar pa gaya toh? I love you, Myra. I really do.' He kisses her forehead and walks away hurriedly and Myra puts her hand out and inaudibly says, 'Jawab toh sun lete, Dev. I love you too.'

Edited by eternal_maaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was a great update!!!
What's the plan for the Pooja day that's made maan so worried? Seems like kuch bada plan kiya hai...
Has Sameera realized her mistake? I am a bit confused here. She said na ki maine pashchatap kar liya hai, something like this.
Pia-Sameera talk was good! Hope Sameera realizes what she's doing if she hasn't till now.

BTW missed your updates since last few days. Glad you updated today 😊

Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update sanaa............
really missed ur updates..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sana

nice update..
but this time took a long tym to update..
cont soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update!!!
really missed ur updates
cont soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
loved the way pia confront sameera.
maan is worried for geet and it's obvious .....
geet gave assurance to maan.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update... luved maan's concern for geet.. has sameera realized her mistake?? liked dev- myra convo.. plzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part!!
Thanks for the PM..
continue soon

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