Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye- AR last part-page50 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow yaar..the last part was indeed really eerie...but anyways dying to know more bout the progress in your ff...this is way too different from any other ff's i have read....so good attempt...pls do pm me once u have updated...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 6

Kabir leaves and AR freshen up and head downstairs. The hotel restaurant the gang went to was actually outside, so they used the back entrance to walk over when an old lady wearing an all black dress with long sleeves and crazy grey hair jumps in front of them, making riddhima jump into armaan's arms.

lady: " dyaan se rehna! ab toh sirf shuru hua hai! ab jo tum ek saat ho, tum baach nahin sakta! is baar bhi wohi hoga jo pehle hua tha! dheere dheere sab yaad ayenge tum dono ko! bach ke rehna! kiski ko vishwaas mat karna ek dusre ke alava! history WILL repeat itself"

armaan: kya history? kya matlab jo pehle hua tha? aur kya yaad ayenge? what do you mean??

the lady doesnt say anything. She just smiles a wicked grin and runs off
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ridz: armaan mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai

arm: shh dont worry shona. main hoon na. kuch nahin hoga.

ridz: lekin what was that bach nahi sakta history will repeat itself aur dont trust anybody?

arm: hmm idk lekin we shouldnt tell everyone what's been going on anyways as they will think we have gone crazy. aur as far as history is concerned, it never repeats itself. that is why its history. sab kuch theek hojayga don't worry shona.

ridz: i guess

arm: ab chalo we have to go join everyone for dinner

ridz: haan chalo..

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piya: wow finally! itne der kyu laga diya?

arm: woh sorry hum bas baat kare the aur samay kya andaaza nahin laga.

abhay: koi baat nahin ab chalo betho.

they had saved seats for the duo but they were on opposite ends of each other.

misha: hmm waise ridzy tum meri seat lo, i'll go sit next to kabir. *she switches seats letting AR sit nxt to eaxh other* btw kya tum dono ki beech kuch chalraha hai?

ridz: what?

misha: no i was just asking like that since you haven't let go of armaans hand once yet..

ridz just blushes

ridz: misha aise koi baat nahin hain...

misha: sure sure, waise let's order i'm starving

Anji: wow! they have international foods! thai, chinese, ect.. waise this place is impressive for some small village.

Atul: lekin don't you think its strange? like some small town we've never heard of before. such a grand hotel? horse riding trails, international foods?

Piya:yea it's so wierd...and you know i feel like someone or something keeps calling me. Like meri koi anjaan rishta hai is jagaa se. like i can't explain, but i feel like i've been here before.

Abhay: yea me too

Anji: really? i don't feel anything of the sort?

Abhay: idk lekin you know piya and I were talking with some guy on the trail and they were saying how this town is famous for rebirth. Apparently lots of people come here and supposedly begin remembering their past lives. There is some temple far up the trrail. it's like love temple or something lekin wwhen lovers from a previous life go in together they claim to see things. Apparently that temple has some sort of power. lekin its actually a copy of another temple in goa. the temple in goa is the original. Some tragedy happened their many years ago and now people go their to pray for some old couple who died there. I really want to go see the temple in Goa. The story seems interesting

Armaan and Riddhima look at each other thinking the same thing,

arm: woh story kya hai abhay? like what happened there? to the couple?

abhay: i'm not certain lekin they were in love and were married. they were in grave danger of something and died at the temple. an influential couple or something. I really want to go to goa and find out about this couple. i don't know why but i'm drawn to it as if i am related to it somehow.

piya: me too, like pataa nahin kya rishta hain meri is saabb se lekin kuch toh hain.

arm whispers to ridz: should we tell them?

ridz whispers back: let me ask them something first, depending on the answer.

ridz: kya rishta lagta hain? like rebirth or something?

piya: it's like i've heard the story before. like it's not my love story but that of a close friend. like i was trying to protect them, but failed.

abhay: me too, it's like i've gotten a second chance to protect them. i don't know why, but i think i was reborn. like i know you guys will think i'm crazy, but i need to know what happened exactly. i need to find them and help them this time.

piya: me too

anji: well idk about rebirth, but whatever it is i'm with you guys. i'll help however i can.

everyone else agrees, except armaan and riddhima

ridz turns and nods to armaan

arm: we have to tell you guys something. we actually hid something from you.

kabir: kya?

ridz: we went to that temple

arm: and we saw us getting married

sap: kya?

arm: haan i know ki it sounds wierd, lekin it's true.

ridz: armaan i think we should tell them everything. from the beginning. let's go back to the room first.

Since everyone had finished eating during the talks they went back to the room.

Riddhima explains to everyone about the dreams, and shows her sketches to all. then armaan explaiins what happened at the temple and with the old lady.

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what will everyone say? did they do the right thing by telling everyone? should they have kept it a secret? should they have listened to the old lady? find out in the next part :D

btw i am going out of town for a while. so no updates or comments from me until sometime in january.. i promise to read/catch up and post parts when i come back!

-Ashu



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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Ashu..:) how r u???
well the part was pretty interesting..:)
so itz not only AR who have reborn but their entire group.:)
and that lady wooo that freaked me out...lol
i dont know but i dont think she shud've told their group..i'm just scared now.:(
but hope everything goes well..:)
thanx for the pm :)
tc :)
Preet <3

P.S. have lots of fun while u r going out and dw update when u cum back..:)
tc :)
Edited by cutiepreet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm loving the progress of this story
i'm eager to know more about it
pls continue soon & the part was awesome
thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome


thnx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal
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Posted: 14 years ago

yaar ashu...

that was reallly interesting..

so abhay n piya r also having rebirth...

im guess they shouldn't have told everyone...

who knws wat happen.......

n that old lady....yaar u scared me a bit...

bit im curious to read further so update soon...

n enjoy ur holidays...........

thnx for the pm.............

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepreet

hey Ashu..:) how r u???
well the part was pretty interesting..:)
so itz not only AR who have reborn but their entire group.:)
and that lady wooo that freaked me out...lol
i dont know but i dont think she shud've told their group..i'm just scared now.:(
but hope everything goes well..:)
thanx for the pm :)
tc :)
Preet <3

P.S. have lots of fun while u r going out and dw update when u cum back..:)
tc :)


hehehe don't jump too far! as everyone has guessed AR have been reborn, lekin its not the whole group

abhay and piya are hinting towards it so maybe....

as for the rest of them.... well picture abhi baaki hai mere dost :D

and thankss i will have fun! i'll be lazying around the beach for weeks.... hayeeee how i wish i could live on a beach!
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 prt!!
loved da way story is moving!!
thnx 4 da pm
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!

AMOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey frnd the part was realy nice.
Thanx for the pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 14 years ago

great part!!! love the way the story is going!

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