Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye- AR last part-page50 - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
HEY ASHU.....WOWWW just loved it yaar.....intresting concept 👏....nd that lady....tumne to mujhe darra hi diya tha......eagrly waiting for the nxt part.......but i
know that u r going for holidays......so enjoy ursel😃f......I am going to miss ur writing.....thank you sooooo much for the PM....
take care
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey love ur partz and it seems u didnt pm me plz pm me ur ff i love them
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hey ashu....nice ud...agreed with these words..."history will repeat itself"....ok...enjoy ur chutti....bye...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiii
sorry 4 da late comment
been abroad
awesome updates
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loved AR
loveing ur ff
loving the concept
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cant wait 4 more
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Dear How R U so cold yaar but ur ff is really a mind blowing one Happy New Year so sweet AR have bond plz continue it soon & plz add me in ur pm list

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hey i really like your ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 7 - Complete!

Kabir: this is too freaky for me. i need some air. i'm going to go talk a walk and get some fresh air.

Kabir walks out before anyone can say anything

Anji: okay pehle abhaay aur piya aur ab tum dono? chakar kya hai? i mean this is TOO strange! something is wierd!

Muskaan: waise it's quite late waise i think we need to all think over everything and let everything sink in so why don't we call it a night?

everyone slowly leaves the riddhima's room except armaan. he simply gets up and closes the door then sits back down.

Armaan just stares at riddhima, they both know they need to talk but dont seem to find the words to say it, neither are certain of how to break the silence. something needs to be done or said. but what? hesistantly riddhima begins

rid: armaan kya humne sahi kiya?

arm: kya matlab?

rid: woh lady ne kaha tha ki kissi ko bata na mat aur kissi ko barosa mat karna....

arm: haan, i've been worried about the same thing, but they are our friends. we can trust them right?

rid: i trust them, but i'm just scared. i dont understand what's going on....i'm so confused i just...

armaan simply pulls her into a hug and caresses her back

arm: mujhe bhi pata nahin, lekin i promise ki whatever it is we'll figure it out together. you're not alone okay?

rid: but armaan do you think ki we've been reborn? i mean? do you believe in such things?

arm: to be honest i;ve never given rebirth much thought before but i definetly don't not believe.....i mean anything is possible right? whatever it is but i want to find out more about that couple abhay was talking about. i got a feeling he left something out. like he knows more then he's saying

ridz: haan piya too...we should talk to them in the morning.

arm: it's getting late we should probably go to sleep too. don't worry okay?

armaan gets up to leave

rid: armaan?

armaan turns

arm: haan?

rid: woh mujhe bohot ajeebsa dar lagraha hain. *tears* like i cant explain it, par i'm really scared armaan. woh baaki sab sogayi hain, aur i really dont want to be alone tonight. kya tum yahaan so sakte mere saath? *tears* i mean don't misunderstand nothing like that. i'm just really scared aur i dont know why but i mean without even knowing you for more than a day, i trust you most. please armaan? *tears*

arm: heyy rona mat, sure lekin yahaan toh sofa bi nahin hain? you dont mind sharing the bed do you? i mean will you be uncomfortable?

rid: nahin i trust you armaan. pata nahin kyun lekin i feel safe with you...

arm: i'll be right back i'l just go change okay?

ridz: haan, okay i'll change too

armaan soon returns in his pajama pants and a white fitted shirt. riddhima wear also wears pajama pants and a tshirt. They get in bed and fall asleep. Riddhima isn't on his chest or anything. They simply hold hands, thats it...

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On the other hand, Kabir is still on his walk....

kabir: kyun? kyun bhagwaan? you know na i love her soo much! bachpan se i love ridzy, lekin uska armaan se....kyun?? kya likha hai tumne mere liye? kya karoon?

a strong wind blows....

kabir sings:

Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa (pataa)
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa

Yaada teri yaada aati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai
Tanhaion mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai
Kyun hoon abh bhi main yun bekaraar
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa (pataa)
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa

Faasle hain magar phir bhi tu door nahin
Maanke hum to hai, par tu majboor nahin
Har lamha mujhko ye tadpati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai
Tanhaion mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai
Kyun hoon abh bhi main yun bekaraar
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa (pataa)
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, doondhe apni manzil ka pataa

Yaada teri yaada aati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai
Tanhaion mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai
Kyun hoon abh bhi main yun bekaraar
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa (pataa)
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa

KAB: i need to talk to her...haann i'll go talk to her right now!

kabir makes his way back to the hotel

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Back to AR

riddhima suddenly wakes up screaming

rid: nahin pleasee pleeaseee AMAN BACHAOOOOOO AMAN WOH MUJHE MARDALEGA!

armaan wakes up with a jolt and is shocked to see ridz just waking up and she is visibly crying hardly! he sits up and hugs her.

arm: hey shona kya hua?? shhh sirf ek sapna tha!

rid: nahin aman woh mujhe mardalegi! mere peeche arahatha! he was chasing me! aur aur uske haath main ek bohot baara sword tha! i couldnt see his face but aman he wants to kill me! he'll kill me!

armaan: shhh kuch nahin hoga tumhe i promise. lekin aman nahin armaan

rid: kya?

armaan: you called me aman. mera naam armaan hai buddhu

rid: nahin i said armaan

armaan thinks no shona you called me aman....

arm: hey dont worry okay? main hoon na? i wont let anyone hurt you. i promise.

armaan moves back a bit and kisses her forehead.

arm: waise can i ask you something?

rid: kya?

arm: you mind if i sleep with my shirt off? kya hai na ki i'm not used to wearing a shirt at night..toh...

rid: haan no problem...

armaan takes his shirt off and riddhima sleeps again, but this time on armaan's chest with her arm around his waist and his arms around her.

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Back to Kabir:

Kabir walks into their hotel suite and walks over to ridz room. he contemplates knocking as its late, but decides against it. He just slowly opens the door.
Kabir is shocked! Riddhima is sleeping on Armaan's chest, who just happens to be shirtless.

Yes he has lost her....his unspoken love for her had gone un-noticed....he lost....but had he?





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part complete!


Edited by ammy_ka_ashu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

wowwwww u updated....loved the part dear...awesome as always....loved the way Ammy console Ridzy....and whats with kabir yaar.....I hope wo AR ke beech na aaye...try to update nxt part soon...thanks for the PM.....

take care
GEET
Edited by sweetdesire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous update dear
loved it
u r doing a wonderful job
keep it up
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