ARSH FF- A HOPE TO BE LOVED..Note on page 150.. - Page 80

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: coolpriya05

sorry di for not commenting regularly😊bt di the part was just superb,mindblowing,fantastically awesome😃




ohh priya baby... thanxx for the lovely comment love u 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niki4life

I just got caught up wid ur FF when i was reading about shilpa's worst torture....i was really able to feel the pain in my heart....

Your FF is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can you plsss pm me when u update...as i can't always keep up with the FF bc;z of school.....thanxxx <3




hey nikki... am glad u like this... thanxs for your lovely comment..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago


HEYYYA GUYS......😃 OKKK TODAY ALSO I AM DOING A LATE UPDATE....😆 VERY SORRY FOR THIS... GUYS I REALLY LOVE YOUR ALL COMMENTS... AND I AM GALD YOU ALL APPRECIATE MY FF.... LOVE YA ALL......

FORM AISH....😳




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Posted: 14 years ago

Eloooooooo ji guys... Ayesha here....🤗Guys i am really really happy to see all your lovely comments.... okkk so here is a another beautiful part form me.........


PART 15:

Next morning Shilpa's house:

Shilpa quietly makes her way to the kitchen.... Just now Veer called and told her that they will be back after two hours...... And yet again the order was that she had to make the lunch for them by the time.... SHilpa lets outs a sign and starts thinking.... How on the earth was she going to make lunch..... She glanced at her injured hand.... But yet again she had to try.... SHe gets back into work and starts struggling to make a lunch.....
Armaan: What do you think you are trying to do shona..........?
Shilpa jumps back as she heared Armaan.... As she jumped back suddenly the bowl in her hand falls down......
Armaan: ( lil worried) Are you okk Shona...... I didint mean to scare you.......
Shilpa: ( with a smile) Nooo I am fine...... but what are you doing here......?
Muskaan: ( walks into the kitchen and interrupts) Shilpa....... We should be asking that question to you..... You are trying to cook food in this condition.... Noo way.... We are here to help.... Armaan.... i have brought all the vegetables......
Armaan: Great Muskaan...... Good job...
Rahul: ( butts in teasingly) I am just here to see the love birds cook together... wait... i doubt you two will cook... I dont think soo....
Armaan: ( glaring) Rahul...... Stop your nonsense now.... And help us in cooking...... BA****** will be back anytime soon.....
Shilpa: ( shocked) Armaan........
Armaan: ( nervously) Okk sorry.... no bad words.....

Eventually the foursome start up with cooking..... Actually it was three of them.... Shilpa was instructed just to guide them..... Armaan turns around to see Rahul and Muskaan bickering.... Taking up the advantage he walks behind Shilpa and hug her......
Shilpa: ( in fear whisepers) Armaan.... What are you doing..... They might see....
Armaan: ( nuzzling in her hair) DOnt worry Shona.... They are buxy on thier bickering... They wont notice......
Rahul: Then you are wrong Armaan... We actually have noticed and right now we are enjoying all this.....
Shilpa quickly moves away form him and sees Muskaan trying to supress her laugh while Rahul stood grinning Shamelessly.... Armaan glares back ar Rahul and turns to Shilpa... Shilpa quietly guides Armaan on making a dish....
Armaan: Lets put Poison in their food........
Rahul & Muskaan: ( together) Great idea !!!
Shilpa totally shocked keeps looking at them with her mouth open.... She turn out and shakes her head.... Three of them were crazy.....


With that they make a lunch having lovely moment and bickering with eachother..... After a while Armaan, Rahul and Muskaan moves out of the house... Muskaan quickly leaves as she had to go to cafe'...... As Muskaan leaves Armaan turns to Rahul and speak.....
Armaan: 1 Hour left for them to come.... All set Rahul......?
Rahul: ( confidently) All set bro..... Let the fun begin now......!


After an hour Raichands walk back into the house.... Shilpa opens the door and stands quiet.... They themselves were engrossed in their own talks... After sometime as they return to dining area for lunch Shilpa quickly set the table for them...... While she kept putting her plates her hand collides with a glass and teh water falls on Tina's dress......
Tina: What the hell ...... !!! HOW DARE YOU....... YOU RUINED MY CLOTHES U IDIOT...... !!!
Shilpa: ( nervously) I am..... I am sorry.... Plss.... i didnt do anything deliberately......
Meera: ( tauntingly) Oooh really..... you were just jealous cause she has such a beautiful dress...... and you ruine it..... This girl is such a pain for me........ I just hate her.....
Veer: ( moves towards Shilpa with a deadly look) I thought something might have gone into your mind after your punishment.... But i guess i have to start all over again.....


Veer moves his hand to slap Shilpa hard.... But a strong hand stops him and hold his hand in midway....... Veer angrily looks to get a shock... It was non other than Armaan.... Veer saw a type of anger in his eyes.... Shilpa stood herself shocked to see Armaan here....
Before Veer could speak up Armaan gives a hard blow in his face..... Veer falls down and holds his bleeding noes...... Totally bewildered he looks at Armaan.......
Meera: ( runs towards Veer and holds him) WHAT THE HELL......... !!!
Armaan: ( calmly) Sorry.... But i am not sorry for that......
Veer: ( angrily gets up and moves to Armaan) WHAT....... What do you mean by that........?
Armaan: ( coolly) Ohhh.... i mean that i am not sorry for my actions... And this was just a first and last warning for you all..... DONT even think of hurting her...
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Shilpa just stood not knowing what to do.... She just keeps staring at Armaan.....
Veer: ( angrily) WHAT RIGHT DO YOU HAVE ON HER..... Huh..... You dont have any......
Armaan: ( cutting back his words) Of course i do have right on her.... She has nothing except me... soo i have full right on her....
Veer: She cant go from here...... She has to be here.....
Armaan: Ofcourse she will go from here.... That also very soon.... But after bringing out your truth only......
Veer: ( sarcastically) OOOh Really..... hahhah.... You think people will believe you... they will never know what we do to her... How we beat her.... No one will get to know how we torture her.... Cauxe it will happen only in our wish... Sooo you cant bring out the truth.....

Armaan just keep smiling listening to his comment.... Tina runs out of the place as she saw him defend Shilpa.... Meera and Veer stood confusedly seeing Armaan not react..... Just then Rahul walks into the house....
Rahul: ( cheerfully) Hiii Shilpa.......
Shilpa just kept looking at Rahul not knowing what to say.....
Shilpa: Uhhh... ya..... ya hi......
Rahul: Armaan.... Successfully recorded everything.... Nice video anyways.....
Veer: ( in fear) What.... What is this.......??
Armaan: ( coolly) OOhh this.... Actually you know mt friend Rahul have recorded everything..... soo as i said i can bring out the truth......
Veer: ( uncertainly) Wait...... i am ready to do what you want.....

Armaan just go and sits on sofa and think for sometime.... After sometime he gets up and starts his talks....
Armaan: You are not allowed to touch her anyway......And i shoudl be allowed in this house... And i am allowed to take Shilpa wherever i want...
Veer: ( totally baffled) NOOO.... NOOO WAY...... !!
Armaan: oook then... Rahul send it to the address i gave.....
Meera: ( interrupts) Noo...... we accept the conditions......
Armaan: hmmm... Thats better now.... soo lets start form today..... i want to take Shilpa on a date....
Raichands dont even speak a word instead keeps glaring at Armaan.... Armaan grinning wide turns to Shilpa to see her in daze....
Armaan: Shona... Go and get ready.... we are going for a date....
Shilpa: ( confusedly) Uhh yaa... hmm... i will come... But will you wait for me plss...
Armaan: ( softly) Ofcourse Shona.......


Shilpa goes to her room totally confused.... How on the earth Armaan thought of doing this.... But yet again...... he have handled the situation.... He have saved her from them....

SHILPAS CLOTHES......



ARMAAN'S CLOTHES....




Shilpa walks back to the living room to see Armaan sitting coolly while raichands kept galring at her..... Suddenly she feels Armaan take her hand.... As she turns he smile at her.... Shilpa return back the smile and walk out with him.....

Lover's park:

Shilpa: ( happily) Armaan.... I cant...I cant beleive this... you actually brought me here........
Armaan: Cauxe you love this place a lot Shona... you have always had sad memories in this place..... Hereafter i want you to have only happy memories......
Shilpa feeling blissful moves and hugs Armaan.... Armaan husg her back with all love he ahd... both stayed in each others embrace for sometime... After sometime Armaan moves out from the hug and pulls her close.... Shilpa stares back at him with love... She feels his passion rising now... She saw the same passion in his eyes.... She nervously holds his waist and looks down... Armaan moves his hand to her chin and makes her look at him.... He look at those beautiful green eyes.... And then he moves her gaze to her lips... he looks up to see her close her eyes... Not able to control himself anymore Armaan gives into the moment.... He puts his lips on her and kiss her lovingly... Shilpa felt a current pass her body as his lips touched hers.... She also gives in and respond back..... As the kiss deepens Shilpa feels Armaan's passion rise as he kept continuosly caressing her back.... Shilpa quickly withdraws from the kiss and turns away breathing heavily.......
Shilpa: ( whispers) Armaaan....... Plsss....
Armaan again turns her towards him and holds her close.... Both kept breathing heavily with thier eyes closed.... Their foreheads touching.... Armaan open his eyes and caress her swollen lips....
Armaan: I never felt like this before Shona... This si the first time.... First time i have felt soo much love....
Shilpa: ( shyly) Armaan.... i also felt the same... for the first time....
Armaan: ( with a smile whispers) In that case.... This is my first love Shona.... Just like you.........

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.
Dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai'

Aankhein doobi doobi si surmayee madham,
Jheelen paani paani hai bass tum aur hum,
Hmmm baat badi hairat ki hai,
[Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai] ' 2 times

Hmmm khawab ke bhoj se, kapkapati hui,
Halki palkein teri yaad aata hai sab,
Tujhe gudgudana' satana yuhi sote hue,
Gaal pe teepna' meechna bewajah besabab.

Yaad hai peepal ke jiske ghane saaye the,
Hum ne gilehri jhoothe matter khaaye the,
Yeh barqat unn hazrat ki hai.

[Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai] ' 2 times
Hooo..hoooo''.hoooo'


NOTE: NO precap....😆 guys this was part 15... i have written very fast fats... plss forgive me if there are mistakes...😆 okk guys plss do comment on this part... love ya....

GUYS AM NOT ABLE TO SEND PM TO SOME.. THE LIMIT IS EXCEEDED.... SOOO PLSS FORGIVE ME IF ANY DIDINT GET...




Edited by aish_lovv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me first
amazing update yaar
loved it
loved the blow given by armaan to veer 👏
Edited by sammy4u - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res...

woow di... Arsh kisss in first date itself!
great di...

continue soon!😃
Edited by sarenas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb part dear.
Thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome part dear...loved the way armaan handled raichands...continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
aish loved it dear
awesome update
keep it up dear
update the nex part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey awsome part dear

its such a passionate kiss
thanx for the pm
love uu
salina

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