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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update please add me to yr pm list thanks
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For mature audiences!!😉
Yaar me serious.....😲


Chapter 30:

She took a deep breath inhaling the scent of fresh flowers that she had in her hand. It was time to make things right, how long could they be upset for. Knowing Geet she was the type who wanted everything sorted. And if her husband-whom she loved most, was angry at her because of her naughty act, how could she be happy.

She walked through the doors smiling and nodding at the staff.

"Time for some maan-ofying" she thought smiling.

He was in deep thought thinking about what happened. Obviously, one couldn't concentrate and he was very hot-tempered, especially when it came to Geet.

There was a knock. Before he could say anything she came in and shut the door behind her.

As soon as he saw her he pretended to scan through his file and looked down.

She walked upto him and placed herself opposite to him, across the desk.

"Maan I know you're mad, and I know I shouldn't have done that……" she began nervous…

He ignored her.

"Maan idhar toh dekho na….." she said pouting.

He lifted his eyes up, but his head remained down. His eyes couldn't stop themselves from responding to that sweet pleading voice.

"I'm busy right know…" he said looking down again.

"Magar-"

"I have work, ghar pe baat karain gay"

"Acha, fine…but I brought you lunch, woh toh kha lo please…" she said sweetly.

"I will later…" he said not looking up.

"No! now…."she sad grabbing the file out of his hands. How much was she going to beg, enough.

"I said NOT NOW!"

Tears welled up in her eyes.

He ran a hand across his hair in regret.

"Geet listen just please leave ghar pe-" he said pointing to the door and being calmer now.

"Main yahan tumhe khana dene aayi thi aur apologize karne, mage tum-" she cried like a kid now.

He looked at her feeling guilty now.

"You know what WHATEVER!! It's not like I'm only the one who does everything wrong here atleast I can admit it, it wasn't even a big deal…." she began non-stop.

That ticked him off.

"Kya matlab hai it wasn't a big deal, you were advertising yourself!" he said evenly shouting now.

"Yuck!!! Advertising? Tum itne…Oh my god forget it……I'm leaving, I can't believe you said that Maan…" she said turning around towards the door.

He jerked her back.

"Let go of me…." She struggled.

"No!" he pulled her closer

"Stop it Maan I was using words, jab bas nahi chala toh manhandle karna shuru kar diya?" she said angry and shouting.

"GEET!!!"

"Shut-up!" and with that she pushed him away and left.

He stomped back to his desk and saw the flowers and the food. After five minutes of cursing everything guiltiness washed over him…..

"Ufff!! Why did I do that, and bechaari itne pyaar se laayi thi!! Maan your soo stupid!" he said punching the whiteboard.

She went into the car crying non-stop and she cursed him and herself.

"Kyun main gayi thi, dust-danav!! ULLU!! Aise baat karte hain??" she said.

"Madam maine koi baat nahi ki"

"Chup hoo jao yaar gadi challa!!" she said frustrated at the driver.

It was his turn now, he was at fault too. So he left now it was evening time and he had to make things right now.

She walked out of the door, saying bye to dadi-who supported her.

He came home and ran to his room. Dadi who was watching nodded her head.

"Geet!! Geet!!" he said entering.

He looked in the bathroom, the halls….everywhere upstairs, then he went down.

"Dadi-aap ne Geet ko dekha?" he asked extremely panicked.

"Maan hum soch bhi nahi sakte the aap aisa karain gay! Jab Geet ne hume kaha ke woh apne ghar jaa rahi hain humne poocha ke Rano aur bemaar nahi ho jaaye gi…"

"Kya woh chali gayi!!! Aur MAAA!!!" he said shocked.

"Waise ab aap ko fikar toh honi nahi chahiye…." She said showing extra-fake anger.

"Dadii????" and he ran out the door with that.

Dadi smiled at both of their innocence. She knew problems were normal…but they were too cute. She smiled and walked away.

She was sitting on her bed crying and hugging teddy.

"Ab woh kyun aaye ga!? Use toh bas ghussa hi aata hai! Hayye main akeli kaise yahan?........Mom aur Dad toh kal hi nikal gaye goa ke liye!!" she said aloud.

"Ab main gurds ke saath thodi na hangout karoon gi!!" she said hitting the pillow.

He went upto the gate. He got out.

"Sir Geet maam ne strictly kahaa hai kisi ko andar nahi aane dena" one of the guards said.

"But shes my wife……

"Sir lekin-"

"Tumhe koi idea hai how mad she is at me, do you know how important it is that I meet her!" he said desperateness obvious, he couldn't help it.

"Theek hai saab, magar please use the ladder because humme apni naukri pyaari hai…" the other said frightened.

"Lagta hai tum logon ne Geet ka acha roop nahi dekha huwa!" laughed Maan.

They all laughed silently….

Maan took the ladder and put it outside the window.

Geet was in her room and very frightened she had herself wrapped in the cover and the light from her huge wardrobe area was shining, everything in the room was visible though.

All of a sudden she heard a crackling noise.

"Altu jalaltu aayi balaa ko taal tu….aisa hi kuch tha na?" she said whispering but freaked out.

The window opened and she could now feel the breeze.

"OH GOD!!!" she panicked in her head.

"Geet guards bahir hain aur just pretend to be asleep if it's a chor I don't care-that much magar if it's a ghost I DAMN CARE!!" she whispered.

Maan heard her and chuckled silently.

He shut the window while signaling the guard it's all good! With a thumbs up….

Then he walked over to the bed.

She now felt someone's presence just inches from her.

Before he could uncover the quilt off of her forehead fully she snapped up and gave him a good punch in the stomach.

"AAHHHHHHOOWWWW!!!"

She grabbed his hair and started pulling wildly.

"GEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

She bent down and saw him.

"Kisne kaha tha sajde main sarr karne ke liye! How was I supposed to know it was you!!" she said rubbing his head.

"Ouch Geet tumne kitni zor se!!" he said whining.

"Acha na sorry Maani-bohat dard ho raha hai?" she asked wondering that he had abs and the punch wasn't even full force yet….

"BOHAT!!" he said holding his stomach now faking the pain.

"Really?"

"Hmmm" he said relaxing on the pillow.

"Acha toh tum….oye main abhi tak office wali baat nahi bhooli leave!" she said folding her arms across her chest, while on her knees and the quilt wrapped around her lower body.

"Shit!!"he thought.

"Geet about that I'm sorry….please maaf kardo?" he said pulling her into his lap.

"Maan chodo!!" she said pushing his chest away.

He pulled her even closer.

"Acha seriously I'm sorry sweetheart! And for everything, main kya karta jaanu I'm possessive you know that…(she looked at him now relaxed in his lap)…haan aur mujhe aise behave nahi karna chahiye tha you cried and main bohat buraa hoon that I let you cry…" he said guilt visible in his eyes clearly.

"I'm sorry too, I shouldn't have worn that…" she said pouting.

"And performing on that song, and talking to that guy, and looking so DAMN UNRESISTABLE!!!" he said jerking her close.

"And you shouldn't have been a jerk when I came to apologize, and when you dragged me out of the party so aggressively!!!" she said louder.

He covered her mouth.

"Maa aur dad sun lain gay!!!" he said whispering.

"Sweety their at Goa remember?"

"Ohhh…" he said after a few seconds.

"Acha then that's perfect! Waise bhi tumne hi kaha tha you don't have a problem if it's a chor" he said coming on top of her naughtily.

"Nahi Maan move!!" she said covering her self with the quilt laying back on the bed now.

He was on top of her with his legs on either sides of her legs, and he was pulling the quilt off of her now.

She was giggling and pulling it to her side too.

He pulled the quilt and she was holding it soo tightly that she jerked up with the quilt her lips merely two centimeters away form his.

Blood rushed through her entire body.

His eyes met with hers and his arms slithered around her, holding her now.

He leaned in closer and she leaned back.

He pulled her closer, and more secure now…

She was stuck now….

He came soo close that their noses touched now….

She closed her eyes.

He brushed his lips across her glossy ones.

As his hands moved up and into her hair she fell back, her eyes closed.

He looked at her now.

She was wearing a white tube top that hung above her belly, and striped short-shorts.

She opened her eyes and saw his pair…

They looked at her naughtily.

"Maan" she said curiously.

He came on top of her supporting himself on his hands. He looked at her eyes full with love. She ran her fingers across the hair on his forehead.

"I love you…" he said kissing her cheek.

"I love you too" she said smiling at his gesture.

"Wifeyyy…."he said laying beside her now and pulling her closer.

"Kya??" she said turning to face him.

"Tum itni hot lag rahi ho" he said winking.

"Don't indicate anything Maan I'm very tired tumne mujhe thaka diya!" she said turning to the other side now hiding her slight grin.

She was tired for that and wouldn't mind kissing here and there but she loved teasing him.

He tuned towards her back and moved her hair towards the pillow, leaving her shoulder visible. He then leaned in closer and she felt her body turn hot instantly. She closed her eyes. He kissed her softly right on her spine.

"Maan" she said through pleasure.

He sofly bit her there and worked up to her shoulder then went on top of her. Now he was facing her, he had shifted from the right side of the bed to the left.

She opened her eyes and saw him.

He pulled her towards him. Her chest collided with his ribs-softly though.

He then kissed her prolonging the kiss.

"Geet kiss me back!" he said annoyed after a while.

She smiled naughtily.

"Geet kiss me!!" he said frustrated.

She rolled her eyes.

He then attacked her neck and sucked on the skin there….

She pulled him towards her with his hair and into a kiss.

While kissing intensely his body was above hers and his hands slid under her top…reaching for the hooks of her bra.

"Maaaaan" she said her lips still on his.

"Hmmm"

She giggled.

"Kya huwa?" he asked now his face inches away from hers.

She stared at him then spoke….

"That tickles when you say hmmm.. on my lips"

He raised an eyebrow, then shook his head indicating an are-you-serious?

She shrugged and within seconds her hook was undone and their lips locked.

That night was there way of saying sorry to each other….and making up for lost time…….

PRECAP:

Any scenes you want me to include before story takes turn?


Comment please!!!! and thanks to those who did!!! muah muah!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG Amna what an update!!!! Loved it sooo much jaani!!!! hai the way Maan climbs up the ladder and then their arguments and making up!!! Too good!!! 😳
Edited by desigirl_18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
can we have geet surprising maan
cooking for him
a date or a gift?
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update. luved the manaofying... new twist?? cant wait for it.. do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update yaar..the way maan gets into the bedroom through the ladders are so cute..
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Posted: 15 years ago
i wanna a scene where maan is cooking for geet..................
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Posted: 15 years ago
Woah...this was so cute!
love all the ruthna - manana
Thanks a lot for the update Amna!
Love you!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it........ It was kinda cute update ........ Update soon.... Nd wat about ur SS update that too.
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Posted: 15 years ago
cute update yar....
thnx for pm....

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