khwaish (sujal aur kashish ki) - Page 38

khwaish
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RECAP:-well 2 yrs passed and we see sujal and kashish r seprated and kashish decide to go back to india
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now:-

kashish wapis se usi ring ko dekhti hai jisko woh apney saath hamesha rakhti thi aakhir yeah sujal ki chand nishaniyo main se hai jo uskey pass hai .kya hua agar sujal uskey pass nahi hai woh janti hai ki uska faisla sahi hai.

ussney wahi kiya jismay sabki bhalai thi .aakihr sujal ki mumma kashish ki bhi to mumma thi unki zindagi aur kashish ke liye apni khushi se bhi jada imp thi kashish no veena ko mumma sirf bola hi nahi manna bhi tha .

woh janti thi ki veena ki khushi ke liye sujal khuch bhi kar sakta tha. woh janti thi ki sujal ko ya to kashish aur apni khushi chuni thi ya to veena ki zindagi aur khushi

kashish sujal ko is tarah se nahi dekh pa rahi hi janti thi ki sujal ke liye koi bhi faisla lena easy nahi tha isliye kashish ko yeah faisla lena parda is faisley se chahye kashish ko kitni bhi takleef hui magar woh janti hi ki issey veena khush hogi aur woh hi kafi hai uskey liye

kashish janti thi ki is faisley se sujal ko bhi kafi takleef hogi magar woh yeah bhi janti thi ki diya aachi lardki hai aur sujal se bahut pyaar bhi karti hai woh sujal ko hamesha khush rakhegi aur ho sakta hai sujal bhi usskey saath khush ho

kashish ne janey se pheley saari baatey charu ko bata di thi woh nahi chahti thi ki charu yeah sab janey par usskey pass koi aur chara nahi tha usssney charu ko apni aur sujal ki pheli mulaqat se lekar sab khuch bata diya charu ne bhi ussey samjhaney ki koshish ki par woh na mani kripa ne bhi koshish ki par uska faisla nahi badla ussney undono se yeah vada liya ki kabhi bhi woh
dono kisi ko yeah nahi bateygi ki woh kaha hai aur na kabhi ussey koi bateyga ki sujal aur garewals ki life main kya ho raha hai

kashish say ki agar undono ko uski jara si bhi parwa hai toh woh usskey baat maneygi

aur woh sab khuch peechey chord kar aa gayi PARIS yeah woh 1 jana mana naam hai ek bahut sucessful designer and business women

kashish shuru shuru main yaha bahut akela mahsoos karti thi woh sujal ke bina yaha ek din bhi gujara nahi kar paa rahi thi

kashish ki zindagi main saari khushi aur maksat khatam ho gaye thi uskey liye jeena ki koi wajh nahi thi

woh us din bahut buri tarah tuuti thi jis din sujal ki shaddi honi thi ussey aisa laga jaisey uski zindagi uska saath chord rahi hai usey laga usney sujal ko hamesha hamesha ke liye kho diya

woh usdin ko kabhi na bhool sakti hai usdin ne kashish ke poori zindagi hi badal dali

khetey hai jab kahi koi door hota hai to koi pass aa jata hai

kashish wapis aati hai apney sapno ki duniya se when she heard her cell ringing

she pick the call and smiled

kashish-hi i m fine nahi ro rahi nahi thi believe me

kashish-haaan tum mujhey kitna aachey se jantey ho actually main india ja rahi hoon charu is geeting married meri kal ke flight hai

kashish-suno i m inviting u also i know tumehe invitation deney ki jaroorat nahi hai phir bhi humari side main to sirf tum main angad aur kripa hogey

kashish-tumahri meeting kaisi ja rahi hai

kashish-aacha main tumse baad main baat karti hoon khuch kam hai

kashish-yes ur little princess is fine

kashish -bye RAJ

and woh apney room main rakhey huey 1 small baby cot ko dekhti hai jismay ek sweet se choti bachi so rahi thi she look like a princess ussney ek cute si baby pink frock pheni thi aur uskey agal bagal bahut se toys rakhey thaikashish usko dekhti hai aur uskey chehra par smile aa jati hai woh uskey pass jati hai aur usko god main le leti hai

kashish jab bhi iskey saath hoti to woh sab khuch bhool jati akhir ab uski zindagi main jeeney ki wajah sirf yeah thi yeah uski chahat uski khushi uska sab khch thi yeah uski bethi CHAH thi

kashish ki poori zindagi iskey kareeb thi kashish ki jaan ismain basti thi

kahye liye jiye kashish chah ki bina ek din bhi nahi rahey sakti thi

ussey aaj bhi yaad tha woh din jab chah ki is duniya main aaney ki khabar kashish ko pata chali

flasback:-

PARIS main aney ke baad woh yaha RAJ ko chord kisi ko nahi janti thi

RAJ raj uska best frnd hai jo kashish ko ussey jada samjhta tha khetey hai

kisi ke pass sacha dost ho to woh bahut khush nasib hota hai kashish un chand khush naseebo main se jiskey pass 1 saccha dost tha

raj ko hamesha pata rehta ki kashish kab dukhi hai kab khush kashish ko kabhi khuch khena hi nahi parda woh sab pheley hi samajh jata

raj aur kashish bachpan ke dost thai kashish ke paris aaney ke baad raj ne uski kafi madat ki woh uskey support bana jab woh ttooti usney kashish ka business yaha stablize karney main kafi madat ki

raj ki humesha yeahi koshish rehti ki kashish kisi tarah muskura de

woh uskey aur sujal ke baarey main sab khuch janta hai aur usney uskey faisley main hamesha support kiya

jis din sujal ki shaadi thi us din kashish itna roi ki woh behosh ho gayi aur jab hospital main hosh aaya to pata chala ki sujal ki nishani uski zindagi main aa gayi hai uski aur sujal ki chahat uski chah ban kar aa rahi thi

kashish ko usdin se apney jeeney ka 1 maksat mil gaya tha ussey pata tha ki ab tak sujal ki shaddi ho chuki hogi magar sujal janey se pheley kashish ko uski zidagi ka sabse khoobsurat tofaa de gaya woh ussey undono ki chah de gaya

usdin ke baad se kashish ne 9 months ka har ek pal chah ke intezar main gujara jab bhi woh chah ko meahsoos karti ussey lagta ki sujal uskey saath hai har pal ussey lagta ki chah ke saath saath sujal bhi uski zindagi main aa gaya hai

aur jis din chah born hui aur kashish ne ussey lap main liya uskey asoo thamney ka naam hi nahi le rahey thai

kashish ko laga ki sujal uskey dil ke bahut kareeb aa gaya hai


ussney us din bahut himmat karkey sujal ko phone karney ki sochi aur chah ke baarey main batana chaha ussney garewals house phone bhi kiya magar phone diya ne uthaya tha diya ki awaaz sun kar usney phone disconnect kar diyakyunki ussey laga ki chah ke is duniya main aaney ki khabar se bahut baeda toofan aa jayega sabki zindagi main

kyunki sujal chah ke baarey main sunkar diya ko chord deta jo galat hota isliye kashish ne phir kabhi koshish nahi ki sujal ko bataney ki

chah ke baarey main sirf raj charu janty thai

chah ke saath rahekar kashish ko waqt ka khuch pata nahi rehta kam yeah

waqt pankh laga kar urd gaya pata nahi chala kab dekhtey hi dekhtey chah 1 saal ki ho jayegi 11 dino mai woh itni khoobsurat thi ki kashish ki beauty kam pard jaye woh bilkul sujal aur kashish ki tarah thi uski aankhey sujal par gayi thi waisey hi aankhey jaise sujal ki thi

chah jitni khoobsurat thi utni hi pyaari bhi aur shant bhi ussney kabhi bhi

kashish ko jada pareshan nahi kiya

kashish ko aaj bhi yaad hai jab sujal kashish ki shaddi hui thi tab sujal ne kashish ko bola tha ki ussey 1 sweet aur beautiful girl chahiye bilkul kashish ki tarah aur kashish ne bola tha nahi lardka chahiye aur sujal ne kaha tha dekh lena kashish humey pheley lardki hi hogi

aur tab kashish ne kaha tha chahiye khuch bhi ho beta ya beti tumehe kya baachey to mujhse hi dekhney pardeygey tum to busy rahogey aur jab humara baby raat main ro ro kar pareshan karega tab tumko dekhna pardega

sujal baby ko main nahi jagungi raat main tum raat main dekhna baby ko waisey bhi baby raat main bahut pareshan kartey hai

sujal-aacha baba main dekhunga meri sweet little princess ko waisey dekhlena woh bahut khoobsurat hogi aur woh tumehe kabhi akeley pareshan nahi kareygi balki main aur woh milkar tumehe pareshan kareygey

and that time they laugh

song in background:-

Na Jaane Kyun, Hota Hai Yeh Zindagi Ke Saath
Achaanak Yeh Mann, Kisike Jaane Ke Baad
Kare Phir Uski Yaad Chhoti Chhoti Si Baat
Na Jaane Kyun ...

Jo Anjaan Pal, Dhal Gaye Kal, Aaj Woh
Rang Badal Badal, Mann Ko Machal Machal
Rahen Hai Chal, Na Jaane Kyun Woh Anjaan Pal
Saje Bhi Na Mere, Naino Mein
Toote Re Hai Re Sapno Ke Mahal
Na Jaane Kyun ...

Wohi Hai Dagar, Wohi Hai Safar
Hai Nahin Saath Mere Magar Ab Mera Humsafar
Idhar Udhar Dhoonde Nazar Wohi Hai Dagar
Kahan Gayi Shaamein, Madhbhari
Woh Mere, Mere Woh Din Gaye Kidhar
Na Jaane Kyun ...


kashish ki aanko main asoo hotey hai yeah sab yaad karkey

sujal ne sach kaha tha ki unki beti bahut pyari hai aur chah ne kabhi bhi

kashish ko pareshan nahi kiya na din main na raat main shayad chah pheley se janti ho ki uskey dad jo ussey pampeered karney ke liye thai woh uskey saath nahi hai

chah ke baarey main sirf raj and charu jantey thai kashish ki kasam ki wajah se charu ne kabhi kisi ko khuch nahi batya kashish ne yeah baat kripa aur angad se bhi chupai kyunki woh dono yeah baat sujal ko jaroor bata detey

both charu and raj love chah a lotttt

raj ke liye to chah uski little princess thi

kashish soch rahi thi ki ab kya hoga jab ussey wapis india jana hoga sujal aur garewals ke saamney kya hoga jab sabko chah ke baarey main pata chalega kya hoga jab sujal chah ko pheli baar dekheyga kya bateygi woh
sabko kaisey chupayegi sujal se yeah sach aakhir uski kismat kya chahti hai

kashish-main kisi se nahi darungi chah meri beti hai aur uspay sirf mera haq hai main janti hoon sujal mujhse kabhi bhi chah ko door nahi kareyga

and woh chah ko dekhti hai and hug her tightly and uskey aamnkho main se

asoo bheney lagtey hai and she looked outside in the sky udhar sujal bhi window se bhar sky main dekhta hai uski aankhey bhi naam hoti hai

song in background:-

hoooooooooo

bheegi bheegi si hai raatey
bhhegi bheegi yaadey
bheegi baaey baatey
bheegi bheegi
aankho main kaisi nami hai

ahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han

sapno ka saaya
palko pay aaya
pal main hasaya
pal main rulaya
phir bhi yeah kaisi kami hai


ahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han

na janey koi
kaisi hai yeah zindagani
zindagani
humari aadhori kahani

na janey koi
kaisi hai yeah zindagani
zindagani
humari aadhori kahani

aadhi aadhi jagi
aadhi aadhi soi
aankhey yeah teri
lagta hai roi
lekar ke naam hamra

aahaan a han aa han aa han

rootha rootha rab
choota choota sab
toota toota dil
terey bina ab
kaisey ho jena gawara


aahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han

na janey koi
kaisi hai yeah zindagani
zindagani
humari aadhori khani

na janey koi
kaisi hai yeah zindagani
zindagani
humari aadhori kahani

bheegi bheegi si hai raatey
bhhegi bheegi yaadey
bheegi baaey baatey
bheegi bheegi
aankho main kaisi nami hai

ahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han

na janey koi
kaisi hai yeah zindagani
zindagani
humari aadhori khani

na janey koi
na janey koi
humari aadhori khani

na janey koi
kaisi hai yeah zindagani
humari aadhori khani

naa naaa naaanaaaaaaaa
yeah yeah yea yea

humari aadhori khani


we see garewal house main bahut chahel phel hoti hai all the garewals r there with angad and kripa they all r discussing about marriage

veena-chalo shaddi ki date to fix ho gayi aaj se 4 din baad sagai uskey 2 din baad mehndi and sangeet and uskey 2 din baad shaddi aur uskey next day reception

kripa-par aunty itney kam waqt hai sab khuch kaisey hoga i mean kitna kam hai

sujal-dont worry kripasab khuch ho jayega tum pareshan mat ho

diya-aur waisey bhi ab issey late mat karo akshat ka chehra dekho saff pata chal raha hai ki inseay ab intezar aur nahi ho raha

all of them smile and akshat blushed

veena-waisey kripa charu kaha hai ?????

kripa-pata nahi aunty woh khuch bol kar nahi gayi hai subah se nikli hui hai

veena-to jarror kisi khas dost se milney gayi hogi

lalit-chalo list banalo kam ka sirf 7 din hai shaddi ko

rishi-aur 7 din baad akshat bhai ki zindagi badal jayegi phir bhai ke pass

humarey liye time kaha raheyga

sujal-sahi bola rishi 7 din kisi ke bhi zindagi badal saktey hai

angad and kripa look at sujal knowing ki woh kya kahe raha hai

veena-i wished kashish yaha hoti kitna khush hoti woh woh to saara kaam 7 din se pheley hi karti

sujal ko pata nahi kyun aaj bahut ajeeb lag raha tha ussey aisa lag raha tha ki aaj khuch honey wala hai uska dil aaj bahut beechan tha kashish ka naam sunkar uska dil kahey raha tha ki kashish yeahi kahi uskey aas pass hai

we see ki 1 car aa kar garewals house ke bhar rukti hai and we see ki usmain se kashish with chah and charu utartey hai

charu-r u sure di aap sabko aur sujal jiju (kashish look at charu) di i mean sujal bhahiya ko face karney ko tayar hai wih chah

kashish-charu chah sirf meri hai main kisi se nahi darungi kab tak main chah ko 1 raaz bana kar rakh sakti hoon aur aacha hai chah ke baarey main jitni jaldi sab ko pata chal jaye utna aacha hai bar bar yeah darr to nahi rahega ki kisiko pata chal jayega to kya hoga

charu-di aap ek baar meri baat sunlo yeah baat sujal bhai aur diya bhabhi ko lekar hai

kashish charu mujhse khuch nahi suna ab sujal meri zindagi main nahi hai isliye main nahi chahti ki uski koi baat meri zindagi main ussey lekar aaye

charu-par di

kashish-ander chaley charu

charu-ji layiye chah ko mujhse de dijiye aa cha masi ke pass aa

and kashish handed chah to charu

charu-di chah bahut sundar hai 10 din baad iska 1 birthday hai na hum log iska birthday bahut achey se maneygey

chah is wearing a white pink sleevless backless frill frock and she is looking like princess

kashish stop and look toward charu

kashish-nahi charu hum dono yeah sirf tumahri shaadi ke liye hai tumahri shaadi ke reception ke fooran baad hum dono wapis apni duniya main laut jayegey

charu-par di

kashish-ander chalo charu bahut tayri karni hai tumahri shaadi ki

charu sigh and nod kashish rukti hai door par before entering garewal house

udhar saarey garewals and angad kripa r busy in making plans for wedding when they herad door bell

kripa-wait main dekhti hoon

and she open the door and she was schoked to see kashish there

kripa-kashish

kashish ka naam sunkar sabsey pheley sujal upper dekhta hai he was schoked to see kashish

kashish ghar main enter karti hai and kripa hugged her

veena-kashish beta tum

and woh and lalit kashish ke pass jatey hai kashish bent and take there ashirward

angad came forward and hug her

angad-hey kashish kaisi ho????

veena-kashish beta kaha thi aab tak tum?? kaisi ho?? humari yaad nahi aayi??tum to humey bhool hi gayi thi ???? kabhi bhi 1 phone tak nahi kiya tumney??

sujal was just looking toward kashish without blinking ussey laga ki abhi palkey jhapki aur yeah sab khatam ho jayega

kashish-mumma woh

woh khuch kheney hi ja rahi hoti ki ki charu enter with chah and sab log chah ko dekhtey hai charu kashish ke pass aa kar khari hoti hai

veena-arey yeah bacchi bahut pyari hai kiski bacchi hai ???

kashish charu ko dekhti hai aur usey chah ko leti hai aur seedhey sujal ko dekhti hai jo uskey samney khara ussey dekh raha tha

kashish-mumma yeah chah hai meri beti

all r schoked including sujal jo ussey observe kar raha tha

veena-kashish beta tum yeah kya bol rahi ho????

kashish sujal ko dekhti hai then she continue

kashish-mumma meri shaadi ho chuki thi but now ab hum saath nahi hai par chah meri zindagi hai mery liye sab khuch hai

and she looked toward sujal jo ussey bahut gor se observe kar raha tha with no expression on face and angad and kripa just look toward both of them

and to change the topic veena say

veena-kashish la chah ko mujhsko do main bhi to jara lo ussey

she take chah from kashish and turn toward lalit and sujal jo usskey pass kharey thai

veena-dekhona kitni pyaari hai chah

lalit- haan

and sujal touches chah face and she give a big smile and sujal ko dekhti hai

veena-dekh sujal tujshe kaisey dekhkar muskura rahi hai dekho tumahrey pass jana chah rahi hai

and she handed chah to sujal and for the 1 time sujal picked his daughter chah uskey pass ja kar bahut khush thi and she smiled sujal smiled with her and hug her sujal ke aankho main uski khushi saaf dekh rahi thi

song in background:-

Honth khamosh hain par………….
Aankhein kuch bolti hain…………..
Pyaar ka raaz tum par………………
Aaj yeh kholti hain……..
Dhadkanon me meri tum ……….
Is tarah kho gaye ho………
Keh rahi hain ye saansein………
Tum mere hain mere ho.………..
Main jahan jaoon jidhar……….
Ho ho ho……….
Tu mujhe aaye nazar…………
Maine palkein jo uthayin……….
Maine ikraar kiya tha………..
Tera tha baaki……….
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai……
Thoda hai baaki……….
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai………..
bahut hai baaki……….."

kashish undono ko dekhti hai chah aaj pheli baar apney father ke pass gayi thi kashish ko yeah 1 perfect family lag rahi thi but suddenly she came into reality jab uskey samney diya aati hai

diya-hi kashish

kashish-hi diya kaisi ho ??????

diya-i m fine

kashish-sorry diya tumahri shaddi ki waqt main yaha nahi thi

diya-it k

kashish-but i congrats u for ur wedding and for ur coming baby

and she looked toward sujal jo ussey dekhta hai

diya-thx

akshat and rishi-hi kashish u know ab tum aa gayi ho to aaj sham ko 1 party kartey hai tumahrey aur chah ki aaney ki khushi main

kashish-arey nahi

but koi mana nahi and decide ho gaya ki aaj sham paty hogi

veena-jao kashish beta thora aram karlo thak gayi hogi main tumahra luggage

upper room main rakha deti hoon

kashish-nahi mumma woh main apna luggage angad aur kripa ke yaha rakh kar aayi hoon

veena-yeah kya baat hui tum itney saalo baad aayi ho auryaha nahi rokogi main khuch nahi janti tum yeahi rukogi

kashish-mumma kaun sa in dono ka ghar bahut door hai bas next house hi to hai aap jab bolaougi tab main aa jaungi aur waisey bhi shaddi ki bahut tayri karni hai na

veena-theek hai par jab bhi busy hona chah ko hum logo ke pass chord dena is baachi ne dil jeet liya issey aayey huey is ghar main sirf 30 min hai aur usko apni nazroo se door karney ka mann nahi hora

kashish-ji mumma ab main chalti hoon shaam ko aooungi

and woh chah ko leney ke liye sujal ki taraf bharti hai and without looking directly towaed sujal face she say

kashish-hi sujal kaisey ho ??

sujal-main theek hoon aur tum

kashish-main bhi theek hoon woh chah ko dedo jana hai humey

but sujal koi reply nahi karta bas kashish ko dekh raha hota hai and kashish could feel ki he was staring so woh is bar usko dekhkar bolti hai sujal chah

sujal came back into reality and woh chah ko ussey deney lagta hai but chah uski gold chain pakrd leti hai


kashish uskey haath se woh chain chordwaney ki koshish karti hai par chah chord nahi rahi thi

sujal-wait kashish

and sujal apni chain ka clasp khol deta hai aur woh chain chah ko phenaney lagta hai kashish was schoked kyunki yeah sujal ki fav chain thi aur woh yeah kisi ko bhi nahi deta tha

kashish-sujal yeah kya kar rahy ho ????

sujal kashish ki aankho main dekhta and say

shayad yeah chain chah ko pasand aa gayi hai isliye ussey de rha hoon

kashish-nahi sujal tum aisey kaisey de saktey ho ya tumahri fav chain hai

sujal-hai to kahish par yeah chain ab chah ki hai aur rahi baat deni ko to

and he look in kashish eyes and say

sujal-JAB CHAH BORN HUI THI TO MUJSE PATA NAHI THA WARNA TABHI HI DETA YEAH CHAH KO MERI TARAF SE YEAH PHELI GIFT HAI ISSEY LELO

kashish nods and sujal chah ko woh chain phenata hai and kissed her forehead and kashish sujal ko dekti hai and leave from there

song in background:-

sun leyna sun leyna hoohoo
sun leyna sun leyna hoohoo
sun leyna sun leyna

use dard kahay jaha dil ho
dil ho waha jaha pyaar
is pyaar mein mushkil hai
mushkil to hai meray yaar
phir bhi karenge
karte rahenge
pyaar tujhe meri jaan hoohoo

sun leyna diljaniya
ral mil
ral mil
galaan hun pyaar diyaan

tirapa tirapa

sun leyna diljaniya
ral mil
ral mil
galaan hun pyaar diyaan


sun leyna sun leyna hoohoo
sun leyna sun leyna hoohoo

jo milay nahi
woh meray nahi
koi bhi gilaa nahi
koi chord deay
dil tohr deay
use kho diya kahay
rahne do chordo
kuch bhi na socho
pyaar to hai imthan
oooo

sun leyna diljaniya
ral mil
ral mil
galaan hun pyaar diyaan

tirapa tirapa

sun lena diljaniya

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shruti finally you send part i am so happy b/c tomorrow i am going to India and i read you story great but still sad so sad i don't understand. kashish has a dughter but i don't know that Diya and Sujal are married plzz post in Next part don't to that Ekta did in her all thing don't kill someone 😭 but it's great God Job 👏

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hey shruti....finally u posted ths part....i had been waitin like crazy....awwwwwwwnnnn...da daughter seemz 2 b soo cute n da name chah is luvly......i still dunno 4 sure if sujal n diya r married....so plz do sumthin where diya z not sujal's wife....gud job 4 ths part...it waz awsum....keep it up...

hey jaanu, that was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awwwwwwww jaanu sujal aur kashish ki cha sooooooooooooo sweet, 😭 😭 😭 i loved it jaan. yeh part bohat acha tha. mein tho ro rahi thi jab sujal pehli baar chah ko uthatha hai, 😭 awwww it was sooooo emotional, u are a fabulous writer shruti jaanu, i can't wait 4 the next part, finally humari jodi phir aik doojy ke saamne aai, awww sooo sweet of u jaan and thanx 4 dedicating it to me. one more thing, perfect song choice, brilliant😉

Originally posted by: kash1988_0108

shruti finally you send part i am so happy b/c tomorrow i am going to India and i read you story great but still sad so sad i don't understand. kashish has a dughter but i don't know that Diya and Sujal are married plzz post in Next part don't to that Ekta did in her all thing don't kill someone 😭 but it's great God Job 👏

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After 2 weeks
Kashish

thx kashish for ur comment and happ journey

Originally posted by: group_1223

hey shruti....finally u posted ths part....i had been waitin like crazy....awwwwwwwnnnn...da daughter seemz 2 b soo cute n da name chah is luvly......i still dunno 4 sure if sujal n diya r married....so plz do sumthin where diya z not sujal's wife....gud job 4 ths part...it waz awsum....keep it up...

thx fiza dear for ur comment and thx for liking the name chah

excellent....u r a gr8 writer...luved teh part...it was soo emotional. 😳 😭 ...excellent.... 👏 👏

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey jaanu, that was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awwwwwwww jaanu sujal aur kashish ki cha sooooooooooooo sweet, 😭 😭 😭 i loved it jaan. yeh part bohat acha tha. mein tho ro rahi thi jab sujal pehli baar chah ko uthatha hai, 😭 awwww it was sooooo emotional, u are a fabulous writer shruti jaanu, i can't wait 4 the next part, finally humari jodi phir aik doojy ke saamne aai, awww sooo sweet of u jaan and thanx 4 dedicating it to me. one more thing, perfect song choice, brilliant😉

hey janu thx for ur comment love it 😛

Originally posted by: Adildagr8

Sur...i told u..u r best...ab tu koi shak nahi..hai..joo insan..sirf apni..writing say...kisi ko rula sakta hai..she is gr8..aur..tum...tu hoo hi great..i loved da part...itz was just aswesome..wordz..ki..kami hogayi hai..kya bolo mein...CHAH lovely..name...aur..da selection of da songs..were fantatic... 👏

adi no thx for ur coment and ya i m best akhir dost teri hi to hoon