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Hasina

@kellz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#291

aww maaneets' SG was so sweet

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#292

hey superbbbbbbbbbbb update yaar.................i loved it...............it was cool.................

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#293

OMG tat wz amazing!
loved their SR!
it wz tooo gud!
n d song actually u noe......juz made it more wonderful!
loved it alot!!
update soooooooooon!

luv
Navpreet

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#294

It was really amazing

Thanks a lot for the update

Please update soon!

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#295

wow...that was awsome update

really passionate one....loved it

do keep writing

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#296

Nice

Loved their love n Promise for each other

Hop they dnt face any trouble in life ever

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#297

its so nice.i loved it.keep up the good work!!

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#298

loves this romantic part a lot

mostly I loved the poem u wrote here Its toooo gud

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#299

Hope its long enough!!

Chapter 11:

Sargam: Papa come on lets go
Maan: Alright I am coming...why do you always get so hyper?
Sargam: Papa come on I don't wanna be late when they com
Maan picked up sargam and carried her to the car...
Maan: put your seat belt on..and I don't want to hear you complain at all...or else am gonna go slow
Sargarm: hmm I will think about it
Maan: Sargam I am serious...I have enough of your annoyance...it was bad with your mom already
Sargam: WHAT! you called me and mom annoying..wait till mom comes...
Maan: Yeah am not looking forward to her coming back either
Sargam: oOo am gonna tell mom when I see her
Maan: Yeah lets see
Sargam decided to annoy Maan to the fullest now...putting on an evil smile
Sargam: papa are we there
how long more papa
when will be reach
Why is there traffic
Is there an accident up ahead
why is the sky blue
Papa are you listening to me
Maan: SARGAM! I don't want to hear another word out of your mouth...
Sargam enjoying this...started giggling...
Maan: what's so funny..
Sargam: Nothing...papa what's your favorite color
how come am sitting in the back...
How come you are driving...
Papa can we go have lunch
Maan sighed: ok am sorry for calling you annoying...you are my darling little princess...happy
Sargam: Yes I am...
Maan: Good now be quiet so I can drive...
Sargam: papa...
Maan: Sargam...i told you to be quiet..
Sargam: I have a question
Maan (sighed and knew she would bug him again) ok what is it
Sargam: I have a friend's party can I go to his party its next week...
Maan: his party...who..what is his name?
Sargam: he is my classmate...Akshay...
Maan: what does he do?
Sargam laughed: papa he goes to school with me...he is a student hahaha
Maan: No you are not going...he is a boy.and why do you have boy's as friends?
Sargam: Papa don't be such a bore...I will ask mummy she will say yes..she knows about him
Maan: I am not a bore...and what you mom knows..she didn't tell me about this....
Sargam: If you are not a bore then I am a queen of England (laughed)
Maan thought this Geet na just put my own daughter against me....I will ask her later....am the coolest dad ever...yeah coolest that sounds right...she must be kidding when she said I am bore...I have to do something and bring her to my side...
Maan: ohh yea if I am bore then I guess boring people won't get someone an ice cream
Sargam: who said you are bore...
Maan: hmm that's what I heard from someone...
Sargam: Who i don't know (putting on innocent face)
Maan: Well then I don' know either...
Sargam: maybe that person meant that mom is such a bore...
Maan: hmm what I didn't hear
Sargam: Papa is the best...
Maan: hmm will you say it infront of your boring mom
Sargam: of course papa (putting on a big smile face on)

Few moments later they arrived at the place..they pushed their way in...Maan spotted them...
Maan: There they are Sargam...
Sargam: yay (ran up to Geet and dadima)
Geet hugged Sargam really tight and then she saw Maan coming towards them....
Maan hugged Dadima...and hugged Geet and wishpred in her ears "wait till tonight" (winked at her)...Geet blushed hearing him...and just walked away with Sargam...Maan and Dadima followed to the car with their luggage...

They all arrived home...Geet went upstairs to freshen up...Maan followed Geet to the room...
Geet: Maan what are you doing?
Maan: What I just came to get something
Geet: What is that
Maan went closer to Geet and pulled her by her hand while other hand holding her tight by her waist...
Geet: Maan leave my hand not right now
Maan: This is just first installment..(with that said..Maan kissed Geet aggresively bitting her lips...he moved his lips down to her neck and kissed he colorbone and came back to her lips again...they kissed each other for few moments) I missed you so much!
Geet: Me too..can you let me go now before Sargam up...I have to freshen up
Maan: ohh yea I have to speak to you about Sargam but later

As Geet went to the bathroom...Maan cell phone rang...
Maan: Hello...after a long time...
Phone: yeah I know....
Maan: glad to know you didn't forget
Phone: I called to tell you I am coming back
Maan: What...when....
Phone: tomorrow I will be there...don't tell anyone I want it to be a surprise...
Maan: Ok...what time I will pick you up
Phone: Alright in the afternoon...
Maan: Alright I will be there...

Note: hope you guys like....sorry no precap!😆😆

Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#300

res oooo hus cuming???

hahahah maan is sooo funny

the first installment - lool

nnn i luv sargam!!!!!

hahahahahahhahaha shesss soooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

hehehehe geet's chulbula pan and maan's stubborness - wat a mixture - truly maaneet bacha!!

thankkk uuuuuuuu for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

n erm about sum comments back - lol if u had made it according to the movie/book - i wud probably be throwing my jooti at u cos no matter wat hapz no 1 deserves or shud be imagined in that scenario - specially not maaneet- but but but u didnt n u only stole the name(better still incorporated the name) lool so alls welll

awwwwwww i cnt wait for next update

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